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mistyrains thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a terrific story!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 It's ending 😭
But what a nice ending though I always hate cliffhanger endings I just loved this one!!!
It's just maybe because you are very creative or maye because m too much in live with Yamin and his Jess to not care about the ending..lmaoo..he had me cracking up..he's like a male version of me lol seriously I actually did that to my princy with some friends..it was crazy.. 😆 But the pictures were actually of Megan Fox lmaoo..nd Lady Gaga..
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Posted: 12 years ago
You're an amazing writer!! This fanfiction has got to be one of the best ones I've read on the forum. It was just mindblowing and the concept itself is so dark and intense and so very interesting, needless to say I absolutely loved it!! The characters and the dark and saddening twists put into the story was perfect and the ending is simply brilliant, especially loved how Yamir confronted Arnav and of course Khushi's last line was the cherry on top of the cake!
Once again, FANTASTIC JOB on the story, loved every bit of it!!
Thank you so much for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love the story, i wish it didn't have to end, anyway it was a brilliant piece i my opinion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was bittersweet ! loved it! and i'm glad khushi does not accept him back!!
wonderful story!!!
thank you for writing!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
You very well know we all prefer the happy ending. .I certainly want Arnav to make use of the short-term memory. .poor Khushi,how she had gone through it all. .n Yamir,he's just awesome.Absolutely loved the meeting of Arnav n Yamir,the concept of ocean-moon relation is just brilliant. .this was an amazing ff & as to your wish I'm still confused about whether to feel angry or pity about the characters. .thank you for giving us such a wonderful work & hoping to read more of your works
P.S. I can't believe you actually pulled those pranks !!!I was quite a mischief maker at my school,but never dared to play with the principal because I woulde've been kicked out
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was a hell of a story...it was so emotional.i cried n cried throughout...this has been a terrific ride!though i wud prefer a happy ending but seeing arnavs character,he will never give up his precious career 4 his son or khushi,he may have loved her but that wasnt enough to be by her side...on the other hand khushis love is unconditional...she ruined her entire life 4 his sake...u hav created 2 amazing n complicated characters,hats off!!!!khushi is just a remarkable woman!!!!i was left spellbound by this story...ur really great n versatile no doubt!
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Posted: 12 years ago
You have written it beautifully.
I loved it. Yamir's character was awesome.
The end was really poignant. Hope Arnav uses the short term memory and goes back to Khushi.
Please post an epilogue soon!!
Waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part...Loved how Yamir taken the situtaion n showed Arnav that he may be a sucessfull politician but falled in his personal life...
N also love that u left the ending open so that readers can have there own ending...
Fabulous ending,simply loved it...
N sad that this is the last part...this is one of my fav FF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic ending to a fantastic, fantastic story, A!

I can't find the words to describe the feeling in the pit of my stomach having read the end. All I can feel is a sadness at the heart breaking waste, like finding a beautiful flower but not being able to see that though it may not have any practical use, its absence leaves a void that no amount of lush foliage can make up for!! But then there is no other way Arnav could have lived. At least he respected her enough to be honest with her and with himself.

Thanks for a terrific story

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