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Posted: 12 years ago
absolutely brilliant writing - I have been following this story since you first posted.

I'm not surprised that Arnav chose politics over love - I kind of think that goes hand in hand with people who tend to be in politics anyway. Sad, but true. I'm sure much much worse has happened in real life!

It's still sad because I love to see Khushi living her happily ever after with Arnav. Maybe they'll still get their happy ending...?

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Posted: 12 years ago
He jus walked away
He didnt spoke to his son or anythg
I hate him I hate him a lot
He won but he lost sumthg whch was more imp then his winning
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Posted: 12 years ago
Man 'm swooning! The way she ate her breakfast that unfortunate morning I just knew she would soon be having a Kid and this tacky man left her no matter how much he loved her.
I feel ditched as if I were Khushi, she almost sold herself to that creep for his success but of course Man will be a Man with their f'ing EGO.
Come on, don't look at me like that, you made it so real!.. 🤔
I hope they reunite in the end or I'd kill Arnav 😆.. Seriously can't take sad ending to this one!
You're a beautiful writer Ari.. continue making us go gaga over it!
xoxo

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Posted: 12 years ago
really, really loved the update.. thank you!

arnav deserves this.. for what he did. thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I absolutely loved that. Bloody brilliant.. Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
You broke my heart with this update. 💔. But you brought out the pain and intensity of the heartbreak..well written..👏

At first i thought he had come to her. But i was shocked when he took the decision not to see her again saying 'he didn't love her enough'. He won the election and now he is aiming for CM's chair. He did achieve his aim, but was it worth his heartbreak!!

After 10 long years they meet..but to part separate ways..*sigh* Kushi came around as strong because she had a small part of him in her son!! So she is a single mom and didn't want to disclose that or the fact that they had a son. But am glad that he realized the truth. Now it will surely torture him more..That last sentence hitched my breath..Both of them are so in love and cannot acknowledge due to their circumstances..💔

Waiting for the final update...am worried sick anticipating what is in store for us..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I cried literally.. why so painful mann.. why cant they just be together..
why cant ppl in love be together...

1 more to go.. still i have hopes gal.. dnt make it a sad ending one plz i beg u.. it'll be so bad if it ends with a sad ending and when i'll remember this story i would cry.. just coz they cudnt make it... because the world is against them..!! :( :( :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow fabuluos dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
so saddd... what happens next? lol!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome... Dare I still hope for a happy ending for Arshi...
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