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Posted: 12 years ago
Amaazing:D:D
Superb:D:D
Loved it x
Thanks for the PM<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Payal i love you and Anjali i love you too!!!!

Wish wish there women like this if not like Khushi!!!!! your update was superb darling i love you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Go Payal! I feel like saying " a bit late" but better late than never huh?!

I just don't know whether to assume it's Arnav at the door...this is about politics after all. Please let it be Arnav!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow...no words...u wont believe i read it in my office...forgoing d pending work around me...even when nt reading...i was thinking abt it...i love ur style of writin...its simply superb...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. That was one hell of an update. From Anjali divorcing Shyam, to Payal tricking Akash and then giving it to Arnav and then the last scene with Arnav and Khushi. That was one powerful chapter! I love your writing style. Full of twists and turns. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loved this update... really glad to c such a strong payal...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this update.. loved payal's character.. awsm really awsm..
and anjali is amazing too.. yes they are not useless in this FF but amazing and strong characters..unlike serial.. everything is unlike serial infact...!!!

ohh payal stopped Arnav from meeting her.. does payal know whr Khushi is staying.. ??!!!

just two chapters left... i hope Arnav doesnt give up yet on khushi... i hope they will end up together.. i knw its kinda impossible for now.. but i want them together.. aftrall its all about them... it really is "thr" story.. so hope no separation.. and i love the comedy tracks u write... this serious serious thing was amazing but.. no separation.. or i'll feel bad for them..!!! :D
but yes m not the writer u r.. so upto u..!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely loved it! MOFO brilliant! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update but what a cliffhanger!!! omg... ! update soon! lol!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
woah...u left me spellbound too after ur update...hehe...m actually guessing who can it be...hehe
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