Intoxicated (removed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: mari2095

Well in other words you'll attempt to justify infedility or how people become hollow enough to do it...

OMG.. WA WAS THT.. U SURPRISED MEE... KHUSHII IT IS... WHOSE THE GUY.. IS SHE CHEATNG ON ARNAV OR HAD THE TYM OF HER LIFE WID ARNAV... LOL... GOOD START.. :)

Oh wow , an amazing concept .loved it

Wow...what a captivating start...who is with kushi? I hone it is our arnie!

Powerful stuff. I loved the way you have used the interplay of the wedding Vows and the adultery in action in the prologue.

What also impressess me is that you have shown K to be a woman who is sexually aware and is sure of what she wants. Adultery is a killer in any relation, but most FFs show the male protagonists to be the one who is likely to have flings and affairs. There are very few who explore the concept of sexuality of characters who are women and who are not necessarily evil or vamp'ish.

Originally posted by: mari2095

I know this was addressed to the writer, but since this is an open thread here are my 2 cents-

Writing about adultery is different from believing/justifying it. I think that's the first big difference. As the writer herself pointed out just because a news channel shows violence it doesn't mean that they justify it. Its a story. Its fiction where the main topic is adultery.

It happens in real life, not all couples are loyal. There are so many of them (men and women) who go down the path of adultery, it sucks, its disgusting, but its real and its the truth. And truth my friend is always bitter.

I have no issues with your moral stance, but find it odd that you ask the writer to justify their view. First of all as humans we all have different sense of morality, that doesn't need to be justified in an open internet forum. Secondly at no point has the writer tried to justify it or make it seem glamorous.

Lets not mix morals with fiction. They have their respective places. Fanfictions isn't the right place to start a discussion on morality. I suggest that you use the chat club.

Much Regards
NB

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GOD I LOVE THAT SONG!

great start!! update soon!!! thnx for the PM! <3

OMG! They are cheating on their respective partners? 😲

Interesting fanfic. I am genuinely stumped to if Arnav and Khushi were role playing or if they were both cheating on their spouses! Interesting read, can't wait for more. Thanks for the PM, please send me another when you've updated :) x