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preetijaiswal19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

great update!!! good luck with your exams!! thanx for the PM :D

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Roshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

OMG! Can't believe how messed up everything is.

What is Shyam planning that could ruin everthing?

And what is Aman's plan?

This ff has got me gripped.
Can't wait 4 the next chapter.

Edited by rashika - 12 years ago

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Homairah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Omggg I totally understand why you retched, he is so gross, eughhh! Hahaha.
I LOVE AMAN. OMG. Idek why, he's just fabulous! Man he needs a nice girl too *hint hint*
He's so adorable but suave and sophisticated at the same time. He is legit my favourite character. <3
And YAYYY, Akash realising that he feels at least somethinggg for Payal.
But omg no. Him taking advantage of her like that was horrid. How could he. -.-

I am so so curious as to what this vile Shyam has actually planned?!
And what Aman has come up with to save everybody? I'm guessing Khushi is the sacrifice. Is he gonna start her own campaign or something? Ooer.
I'm sooo excited for the coming chapters, this is so wonderfully written! Dirty politics makes a fab read ;D
And I totally sympathise, I've had a bitter rivalry with AQA for the past two years too. :(
Good luck! :)

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am wondering what solution has Aman offered, I dont know how worse can it get? Its twisted, but to think this all will have a straightfoward solution is crazy, i am sure the solutiion will be more crazier.

I am sorry for Payal,m she is in love with akash, and he is using her..he has started to realize the guilt, lets hope he doesnt do something bad, before he regrets it.

Thanks for the pm

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Aarti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This is so interesting! Man their lives are f**ked up. I wonder that this solution is...?

Eghh Shyam :P.

Can't wait for more!! Thanks for the PM!

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ZN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

omg...awsome update...so kushiz leaving arnav...and akash has something human in him...keep on writting...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

I was liking the whole post.. And then you mentioned Vectors. AAARRRGGH!

I hate vectors.

Anyway, ze comment-

The Shyam-Khushi scene made me cringe as it reminded me of the Kheer scene. I hate Kheer now.

But, it still was well written, I must say.

And a grey Akash's always fun to read. So, I loved the Payal-Akash bit. Now I'm really worried for Khushi, but I think even I've started trusting Aman like he's my best friend or something. And this made my heart flutter since it reminded me of the way Chuck Bass says, "I'm Chuck Bass."

"I'm Aman."

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meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

This is getting interesting!!

Man all of them are messed up..

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anumber1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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🤢 Excuse me as I spew vomit all over my laptop screen.

Ok, besides the disgustingness in the beginning, this chapter was pretty awesome. I don't anything about how the dirty underbelly of politics work so I can't make any predictions but I'm excited to read what's next all the same. Great work! 😊

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

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Posted: 12 years ago

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You know I'm sick already.. Shaym and Khushi didn't help.
Imagining Khushi massage ASR's shoulders... hell yeah!
More ASR please!
She loves him, in her own twisted way she loves him!
But then again he's completely fine with her sleeping with Shyam.

AQA is a mighty bitch but I can't for wait LOTS OF ASR because the CVs sure as hell aren't giving us A.S.R!

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