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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow very interesting...she lost her virginity to nk????oh my...but loved it...simply brilliant n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!
Poor khushi...she has gone through so much...and is going through so much I'm loving her...she's sooo strong...
Y did she marry Arnav...??? I'm still confused...
Great update!!!! Loved it...:D
Thanks for the pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
your right the caracters are twisted, and no i really cant relate to them. that is what makes the story so much more intreasitng. i'v seen twisted people, and for some reason they always left me befundled, and i'm left wondering why? thought i'v done ty in Psychology. and i understant human psycosis. all twisted people are not really sick. yet there is an incurable sickness within them. you can see the twistedness and becay. yet there is an accepatable logic to them. thought you really cant relate. and however much you try to change them they risist. and yet somehow at some point they redeam themselves in the most unexpected manner.
so i get your character yet i cant relate.
dont know if i made any sense. but good update. and i can see that you really love your character and that i get
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this FF!
Humanised Khushi and her past!
So Khushi has done everything for her adopted family! Interesting!
NK and Khushi's friendship is sweet and I love the Payal dynamic too.
ASR - I don't know what to make of him but he would make a hot politician!

BTW - I love how most of your pieces are Maroon 5 inspired!😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just caught up with this story.. Brilliant stuff, as always.. Not your usual style, but still a very gripping story.. Looking forward to more.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story line!
And Nk and khushi slept? Innocent making out i guess! 😆
Good one! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazed.
Dazzled.
Stupefied.
I.AM.
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Updating.
You should be.
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
EXCELLENT... WONDERFULL UPDATE...
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome loved it.
she breaks every second to keep some one else whole.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohmygosh. this is so intense! Youre right, everyone is twisted up, & complicated but thats the best part about it 😛 LOL she lost her virginity to NK was the most hilarious thing ever!! I love their friendship! Arnav is so sweet <3 He got her a bracelet & he acknowledged the fact, shes selfless in his eyes ❤️ Im interested in knowing more about Payal now! Awesome update!
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