dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 - Page 61

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Hey congrats tina for crossin 100pg... Yippie nw its update tym... Waitin eagrly...
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CHAPTER 30
hi guys!em bck wid anothr update!thnks 2 all who contributed 4 me 2 cross a century!!aisha,rHid3 thnks a lot guys!!n i hope u guys did well in ur IEEE exam.so hz tat meow n poppy n othrs??(idk who else appeared in it?)n this epi z gonna b a special 1 so bear wid me..em gonna write it longer n thr ll b lots ov love n love n love!!😳n i ll pm only wen em done...
so enuff ov ma speech,lets go 2 update
swayam ws literally drooling over sharon 2 the extend tat he followed each n every order ov her.sharon ws enjoyng her position ov superiority.she unknowingly ws also falling 4 him.his killer smile,his caring attitude 2wards her,his listening 2 her constant talk n his following her every command.he in every way ws proving 2 b the dreamboy ov sharon.
she ws lying inverted on her bed thnkng abt him wen msg tone beeped!it ws swayam
sw:hi princess!thnkng abt me??
sharon ws amazed.hw he knws evrythng abt me?
sh:no i ws thnkng abt my mr handsome
sw:em nt handsome??ouch!!u broke ma heart!!
sh:cmon captian!!dnt over react
sw:ok my princess!as u say!!anyways hz ur dr sis dng??
sh:she z madly in love.he z a flt lt!!
sw:hmm..tats y she dint bothr 2 meet me evn 4 once!!
sh:mayb!u r nt tat imp
sw:tats sad
it ws 4 am in the morning.kriya ws sleeping peacefully in her rey dreamland wen she felt smthng caressing her cheek.wid the softness ov the hand she felt it ws him.she smiled in her sleep.
r:BC!utho na!lets go 4 a bicycle ride.i wanna show u my fav place here
k:plx soney do na!we ll c it later
r:cmon BC!eithr u dnt get time or me.lets go
k:no em nt gng
rey planted a kiss on her cheek
r:maan jao na meri sweet BC!plx..
kriya got up:ok
n they both went 4 a bicycle ride dwn the road.thr ws beautiful cool breeze blowing n the weathr ws so refreshing.they saw a garden wid swings in it
k:mere ko swing lena plx..
r:stop it BC!u r nt a kid
k:nae na!plx plx plx eagle
r(finally raising hands in defeat)ok ok is it possible 2 win over u in an argument??lets go
n they went 2 the garden.kriya sat on the swing..
k:push the swing
r:ok madam
n he pushed.she ws loving the beautiful cool breeze hitting her face n the swing ws giving her pleasure.rey ws smiling at her childish acts...
k:ap b ao na eagle..
r:no thnks BC!em nt a kid
k:cmon eagle!b a sport
r:ok madam.i accept ma defeat
n he stood on the swing by adjusting his feet outside her thighs such tat her thighs were supportng his feet n such tat his face ws facing hers n he started propelling the swing..
k:faster,fastr
wich made both remembr
FLASHBCK
k:teddy plx come on the swing.u knw i always love 2 take swing wid u
r:no em nt cmng
k:ok then em also nt taking it.stop the swing right nw
r:ok ok y u gettg angry princess??em cmng na mano
n he stood on the swing
k:fastr,fastr
n the swing went fast
r:i wish mano we always swing 2gthr like tat evn aftr we grow old
k:dnt knw whethr u ll remembr me by then or nt??wot if u go n marry smbody else??
r:no mano!i prms i ll always b urs!!
a tear escaped 4m both s eyes then rey said:cmon BC!lets go!!
then again they set 4 their journey around the meadows.they came 2 far away 4m the city into the farms.thr were fresh tomatoes,potatoes n turnips.kriya loves 2 eat raw fresh strawberries so she asked rey 2 get her some.rey ws reluctant 2 do so bt on her insistance he went n took some 4 her.they were really very juicy n fresh.kriya relished the strawberries.
k:yummy!!!u knw wot eagle?i just love strawberries
r(drooling ovr her)n i love u
kriya hit him on his shoulder:stop it!!
r:ok madam!!
n then they went 2 take a round of the woods.it ws calm n peaceful.evening ws setting in.
the cycle ride ws gettng long
k:eagle!lets go bck home.its gettng late
r:cmon babes!surrize
k:wot??
r:w8
n thr they stopped close 2 a tent.it ws surrounded by trees n bushes.it ws brightly lit n wen they moved close,she saw thr ws a beautiful fire lit n candles all around n a table ws set 4 2 ppl.
r:surprixe BC
k:oh eagle!all this 4 me??love u!!
r:love u 2!come
n they both had a romantic dinner.they rey sat on his knees n 4waded his hand 2 kriya
r:ll u dance wid me madame??
kriya took his hand n they danced on ishq hua
it ws a megical moment!!kriya ws loving the feel ov it
k:thnks eagle!thnks 4 al ur surprizes..i nvr had such a lovely evening in ma lyf!!thnks 4 mkng ma evening special..
r:bc!u still hv anothr surprize left
k:anothr surprize?wow!wots tat??
r:w8 n he came 2 face her bck,held her hands in his n stretched their arms wid in the air,then he whispered in her ears..BC!look at the sky
thr ws lots of fireworks,colored lights.kriya ws loving it.then 4m firelights she saw it ws written marry me BC
she ws overwhelmed wid joy n tears of happiness fell 4m her eyes!!
r:bolo na BC!haan ya naa
kriya ws so emotional tat she cud hardly utter haan
this may rey teary
r:u made this day v v special 4 me 2 BC!!
n he brought her into a hug.aftr smtym rey cud feel tat his shirt ws gettng wet so he seperatd 4m her n saw big pearl like tears in her eyes
r:ye kia BC?u r cryng??
k:these r tears ov happiness
he wiped them
r:i prms BC ll nvr mk ur eyes tear!i ll always make u happy n i mean it
k:i knw eagle,bt dnt knw y i ve stopped believing in promises nw.so plx nvr prmise wid me again.i trust u n i ve build tat trust wid gr8 difficulty.so plx dnt break it or else i d nvr b able 2 trust any1 again!!n promises r made 2 b broken..
r:ok BC!i wont promise anythng wid u again.n evn em fed up ov ma promises.smtymes life propels u in sme situation whr evrythng goes wrong!!
k:oh!wot happened wid u??
r:leave it!its all just past!n i ve moved on in lyf!u r ma present n future..
neha ws sittng in her chair wen her door knocked.neha opened it n thr ws a bouquet ov red roses wid a card n a box ov chocolates n a teddy bear in the hand ov gatekeeper
GK:neha madam!sme guy left it 4 u
n:me?y??
GK:idk maam!!
neha took the thngs n closed the door.she put the thngs on her table n opened the card
it ws written on it(thnks 2 vaishaka 4 writing this)
jab c tumko dekha hai,tab c tumko jana hai
jabse tumko jana hai,tab c hum ne mana hai
pyaar p zor nahi kxi ka yehe hum ne jana hai
tum jaisi ek pari ho tu jewaan bara suhaana hai
ab tumhari gali c har rox hamara aana jaana hai
door ho tum mjhse bohat per door ka dhool suhana hai
tmhare naam likha is deewane ne ye perwaana hai
neha ws amazed by the beautiful poetry n ws wandering who this stalker wud b??n wen did he c her??did they evr meet??bt she ws unable 2 answer her questions..she ran 2 sharon s room
sh:aa rae hoon!kam knocck kero
n:sharon open the door.neha tense
sh(finally opened the door)wots the matter babe??y u breaking ma door??
neha showed her the letter n the gifts
sh:awww!!!!sm1 in love wid neha!!tats superb
n:bt hw does he look like??z he handsome or nt?wot does he do n hw does he knw me???
sh:we ll find out soon
n:hw come??
sh:w8 n watch!!!
n they hugged!!sharon s phone rang
n:aww!!sharon ka deewana!!
sh(blushed)
n:ok neha go.bye
sharon pickd up swayam s call
sh:cnt u call a lil late??
sw:y?wot happened??
sh:neha ws here.
sw:oh!sorry madam
sh told him abt neha s secret admirer.nw we need 2 find him
sw:hw?he just sent her a card n all
sh:wot kind ov capt u r??tat u cnt do smthng lyk tat??
sw:ok i ll try(thnkng hw he cn??)
PRECAP:
neha s secret admirer revealed
swayam sharon on a trip
kriyaansh masti
ok nw frnds i guess tat ws hell long update..n i tried 2 mk all the fans ov 3 jodis happy!!so plx gimme ur feedbck hw ws it?n then aftr few more epis of fun n masti get ready 4 sme drama
CHAPTER 31
Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice n hot updates.😊
Rey know very well that how he can take watever he wanted from Kria.πŸ˜‰
Sharon is feeling d same thing which Swayam was feeling for her.😍
Update fast.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey congo on century...
Nice1
Rey ko pata hai kria ko kaise patana hai...

Update fast

awww rey's arrangement were just fabulous...that table, fireworkss and everything...awesomeee update...
Waiting 4 nxt...thanx 4 d pm
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

beautiful update tina.
lovely one.
loved it how rey proposed her.
it was superb.
and swaron were cute.
the poem was nice.
thanks for pm.
update soon.
Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Oh crossed pg 100...congss
updt sooon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful updt shonu..

Loved it...

The way he proposed her to marry him was really gr8.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update tina...nt only this one al updates r awsome...as i m new here dnt know abt hw to manage nd rply...bt plz pm me 4 ur each nd every update i'll comment on evey update after 16 as 4rm 3rd i m having exams...
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