BLOOD RELATIONS-EPILOGUE Pg 138 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Hey TJ...


Congratulations on your first FF!!

Very intriguing start. A young dynamo of the business world yet kind at heart. And a bond formed unknowingly.

Continue soon :)




thnkx a lot Jazz...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
m glad tht such an awesome writer liked my work...
ya,will continue soon...
plzz also tell ur frndz abt it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Appy

Hey TJ...
Wonderful start pls update soon and pm me pls




thnkx a lot Appy...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
m glad u liked it...
ya,will continue soon...
plzz do tell ur frndz abt it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
interesting prologue ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

interesting prologue ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...




thnkx a lot Angel...

ya,will be updating in sumtym...

plzz also tell ur frndz abt it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

thnkx for the likes n comments guys...

keep showering ur love on me...

here's the 1st part


PART 1

Reaching home, Maan made his way to his room...

Daadi saw Maan fully covered with blood n got tensed n came to ask him...

Daadi (DJ)-Maan beta,wht happened to u?? R u hurt anywer??? Did u meet with an accident... She asked him all tensed n worried...

Maan-DJ, m perfectly fine...raaste me ek accident ho gaya tha to uss ladki ko hospital leke gaya...so her blood came on my clothes...

Listening to this,DJ calmed...


DJ-ok,go get freshen up...I'll arrange dinner for u...
Maan-ok,DJ...
Maan went to his room n freshen up...
He came down...DJ was serving dinner for him...he had his dinner,had a chat wid DJ for sumtym telling abt the incident...n later went to bed making his mind to meet the girl 2mro before going to office...

Next morning,

In hospital-
The nurse came to ICCU to check on the girl admitted last night...she saw her move a little in her sleep...n her facial expressions told her tht the girl is going thru lot of pain...seeing her eyelids move,nurse immediately called the doctor...
Dr.Nidhi entered into ICCU to check the girl...she checked her pulse rate n all other important numbers tht wer necessary to know the girl was out of danger n will be fyn soon...
The girl slowly opened her eyes...she saw a blur image of a girl standing I'm front of her...
Dr.Nidhi-mam,can u here me..???
Girl-who r u ??? N where m I??? Wht is this place.???
Dr.Nidhi- mam,m a doctor n u r in a hospital...u met wid an accident last night n were brought in by a man...
Girl- the accident..???!!oh yaa,I remember my car dashing into the truck...
Dr.Nidhi-mam,can u plzz tell us ur name n contact number of any of ur family member to whom we can call n tell them tht u r here... They wud be worried...
The girl came out of her trance listening to her words...
Girl-oh yaa... My name is GEET Handa...
N this is my dad's contact no. His name is dr. Ranjit Handa...
Dr. Nidhi- oh,u r dr.Handa's daughter...I'll let them know abt u...till tht tym u plzzz take rest...
Saying so Nidhi came out of the ward...
she Went to the reception n called on the number tht GEET gave...
Ring ring...
Ranjit(wud be called RH)-hello...!! Whose dis.???came a tensed voice frm other side...
Nidhi-m I speaking to dr.Ranjit Handa...??
RH- yes,whose dis..???
Nidhi-sir,m calling frm Dr. Kotnis hospital n want to inform u tht ur daughter miss. GEET is admitted over here...
RH- wht..??? Wht happened to her ?? How is she??? Is there Sumthing serious???m cumin there immediately...he said it all in a go without breathing once...
Nidhi-calm down sir..she's fyn now...U plzz cum but don't worry much...
RH- thnkx,thnkx a lot... M coming there in sumtym...
Nidhi- ok sir...She kept the phone down...

Soon Geet was shifted to the special room n Maan was also informed of her being out of danger n now concious...

Geet started thinking of her last evening n abt her family...

---FLASHBACK----

Geet was in her office discussing sum details of a clients reports made with her frnd n partner, Khanak in their Co., G n K Associates...

Geet-ok,Khanak,this is done...i hv sighned it...tell TJ to call mr. Sharma's secretary n tell them to collect these reports...n also tell her to bring atleast half the payment n thn only give them the report...vo Sharma,paiso k maamle me bohot kanjus hai...

Khanak-hahaha...ok Geet...aur anyways,usne hume pay nhi kiya to we have our ways to collect our share without him knowing abt it...

Geet-Ya...but i dont prefer tht way,u know it better...i give them their true mkt statements n want my money to come to me in straight way n not other, so...

Khanak spoke without letting her continue...

Khanak- ok, meri Raja Harishchadra female version...uff,tumhare usuul aur tumhare aadarsh...

Geet-aee, chal ab apni nautanki band kar,ms. Drama queen...chal ghar chalte hai... aaj mujhe dad ke liye kuch special banana hai...

Khanak-kyu re..??koi khaas baat...???

Geet-nhi re, bas aise hi...bohot tym ho gaya mene khaana nhi banaya mom dad k liye... ye kaam to meri jaan hi nichod deta hai...

Khanak-hmm...chal fir..me TJ ko bolke aati hu...bahar milte hai...

Geet-ok...

N she started packing her stuff in her office bag...

She n Khanak made their way down the office building bidding bye to TJ n also told her to leave after the last call to Mr. Sharma...


Khanak-chal thn kal milte hai...kal 2 important clients lined up hai...n also now CA results will be out...we need to hunt for Articles...

Geet-oh,dont worry..we dont need to hunt for it...mene ICAI me apne Co. Ke vacanices k baare me bata diya hai...n also humari Co. Koi aisi vaisi to hai nhi...apne aap hi bohot saare applications aa jaaenge...

Khanak-yaa, u r right..chal thn,bbyee. .. kal milte hai...

They headed to their cars n their ways...they left in opposite directions...

Geet sat in her Hundai Accent tht was her 1st car she brought 2nd hand frm her 1st pay...

But now she wanted to change the model...she wanted to buy a new brand Honda CRV...

She was in her thoughts n was driving at her usual speed of 35-40 km listening to her favourite songs...

There were trucks ahead n behind of her...

Checking on the signal she honked the horn for the truck to move...

As the truck moved,she started her car too...

Suddenly, a car frm a signal wich was red sped rashly breaking the signal...

The truck ahead pulled his breaks,sharply stopping which made the truck skid a little...

The sudden skid startled Geet n she tried to apply her breaks...but it was too late...

She went n crashed into the truck...the truck at the back also dint understand wht happened n he was also late to apply the breaks n dashed into Geet's car with a loud thud...

The first thud in to the truck ahead slammed open the bonnet n also broke the front glass into pieces...she immediately put her hands on her face n saved her face fortunately...but the pieces cut her hands n somhow legs too...blood started oozing out...she also banged her head to the stearing wheel due to the impact,but she was still concious...

The 2nd dash frm the truck behind made her hit the stearing wheel hard n she felt dizzy...

The 2nd dash,crushed the car all the more...the dikky was totally crushed into the car... It was looking as if sum1 was trying to make an iron ball out of the car...

She was getting crushed inside...her legs getting fixed b/w the wheel n seat..she was unconcious now...

Last she remembered was being in car backseat...she had wriggled in pain, a sharp pain had passed thru her making her totally unconcious...

---FLASHBACK ends---

She remembered abt her family n frndz...how much they wud be worried...she had been missing since last evening...she had a sudden urge to see her parents n frndz... its been almost 24hrs she had not seen her parents n sis...n few hrs since she saw her frndz...she realized how important life is...n passed a thank u note to her babaji silently...


so this is part 1...

actually m not happy with this part...

i was not able to describe it well...

thnkx to my bad writing skills...

waiting for ur rply...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Awesome dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Continue soon
And longer update next time ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: arpitaji

Awesome dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Continue soon
And longer update next time ๐Ÿ˜‰



thnkx a lot Arpita Di...

longer than this...??!!

i hv to rack my brains for this...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
nice update...was the accident deliberate๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
loved the start of the story

please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: bangalores

nice update...was the accident deliberate๐Ÿ˜•



thnkx a lot for ur rply...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
no no...it was not...
as in,those rich pigs sped away breaking the signal
which led to this acident...

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