MG FF : MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY~~ PART 24:pg136 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii
awesome updates
loved them both
Loved maaneet
Adorable
Maan nd abhay's friendship is sweet
Geet's cute
Glad she is friends with all
cant wait 4 more
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww amazing updates... loveeed the whole massage scn😳 ... it was awsmmm dreamy romantic hottt... too sexyπŸ˜‰ ... my cp is on fire... it was a pleasure to imagine MAANEET in such a wonderful scn❀️... a big big thank u Madhu ... loved ur update...😊

n Geet's worry of not having a body Maan wiped all his fear with his love... awww😳

loved how Maan defend his Misty ... loved how Geet made friends ... love how Maan admires her... πŸ˜†

Hmm soo find Geet abhijan suru hone wala hai... me bhi samil hona chahti hu isme
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Btw plz do that chocolate Thingy!
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Loved bth th updates
Maaneet are one 😳😳
Loved how she made frnds with all
Hop they find out Geet soon
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Awesome updates!!

Glad to see Maan's friends accepting her as she is.

But Dadi ka kya?
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Hi all πŸ˜ƒ

I have gone crazy..hav to submit 3 assignments by 2pm today and still i am updatin πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


PART 17


Mishty: Maan kal kitna maza aya na sabke sath!
Maan:ha ab to tumhare paas mere liye time nhe he.
Mishty: Maan ap bhi na,zara se mera dhyan kahi aur jaye to muh phulane lag jate ho ap...aise me agar me sabko dikhne lagi to kya karoge ap?

He held her by waist pressing her to him,
Maan: To me tumhe sabki nazro se bachakar apni palko me basakar rakhunga!
Mishty: Then why are u luking for me? Aise hi rehne dijiye na!

Maan kissed on her cheek and released her.
Mishty:apne jawab nhe diya..
Maan: I want you to be with me forever,samjhi tum? Its some unknown knot that binds us together now. Thats too feeble, Mishty! One storm and we will lose each other! Aur me.. I cant live without you mishty!



He leaned his forehead to meet her as she lovingly caressed his cheek.
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Saint Valley Girl's Hostel

Adi: Sis. Isabel?
Sis. : yes! Do i know you?
Adi: No. But i know something important...about Geet Handa! You were watering the plants when you met Geet for the first time.You loved her a lot. You secretly gave her presents..She loved you as her own mother..He na Sis?
Sis: hmm.. Wait a min.

She went away and made a call.

Outside the hostel,

Abhay was waiting for Adi. Its been an hour and still no sign of Adi.

After sometime, Abhay saw a number of vehicles rushing in and out of the hostel.

One more hour passed.Abhay was about to go into the hostel when his phone
rang.
Abhay: hello
Adi:he he he.. Abhay Sir
Abhay: Oh God Adi me kabse tumhara intezar kar rha hu.
Adi: l..lekin me to ek ghante pehle..n..nikal gaya.
Abhay: kya? To mujhe kyu nhe bulaya?
Adi: bulaya tha. Apne nhe dekha
Abhay: kab?
Adi: Jab CBI mujhe enquiry ke liye le gaye
Abhay: wat?
Adi: yes sir. Sis Isabel complained to some officer. And they had been interrogating me ki me Geet se judi itni personal batey kaise janta hu.
Abhay: aur abhi tum kaha ho?
Adi: Custody room me.
Abhay:kya bataya tumne?
Adi:k..kuch nhe.
Abhay: good. I vl be there.
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Abhay calls Maan.
Abhay: Maan,
U were right. Geet ne jo bhi kaha tha wo sach he.
Maan: Very Good!
Abhay:bas ek choti si problem he. CBI took Adi. They suspect him to be a kidnapper of Geet.
Maan: Ridiculous. I want Adi out in next half hour.
Abhay: Sure buddy!

Maan ran to kitchen.Mishty was busy cooking his lunch.He hugged her from back and swirled her around.
Mishty: Maan,ap itne khush kyu ho? Kya baat he?
Maan(pulling her cheeks): Coz u have given me a new ray of hope! Jo batey tumne yaad kiye the wo sach he Mishty. Now i am confident ki me bohat jaldi tum tak pohunch jaunga.
Mishty: kaise Maan?
Maan: I have a plan.Par ussey pehle mujhe Piya se ek kaam karvana he.
Mishty : uff..dekha apke is CID ke chakar me meri sabji jal jati...

She pouted her lips.Maan pressed her back closer to his chest.

Maan: ab meri mishty ki hatho se bani..i mean ankho se bani jali hui sabji bhi meethi hoti he..
Mishty: acha? Ap na aj kal zyada hi maska laga rhe ho!
Maan: aur koi chara bhi to nhe na
Mishty: matlab? Ap ye pyari pyari batey mera mann rakhne ke liye kehte ho?
Maan: arey nhe Mishty mera wo matlab nhe tha..
Mishty:nhe?
Maan: nhe..ha..
Mishty:ha? Me sab janti hu..
Maan: Mishty...meri baat to suno..
She pushed him.
Mishty: kuch nhe sunna mujhe ap jao yeha...

Before she could complete,he slammed his lips on her inviting a deep passionate lip-lock.
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CBI office :

Abhay: Hello Mr.Amit Mukherjee



Amit : DSP Amit Mukherjee !
Abhay: yes sir. Have heard a lot about you. CBI ke recent controversial cases ko prove karne ke liye apne jo tough stand liye thats laudable.
Amit: Fine, but who are you? And what brings you here?
Abhay: Abhay Raichand sir. Actually my friend's employee have been arrested i guess by mistake. One Mr.Aditya
Amit: its not an arrest,just an enquiry. I am afraid its NOT by mistake gentleman.He knows some most personal details of a missing person.We guess him to be behind the disappearance of the victim!
Abhay (laughing): sir thats why i said its a mistake.Bcoz Adi is a
mentally unstable person.He makes weird guesses about missing or dead people. Strangely it becomes true at times.
Amit: don't try to fool me.
Abhay: no sir,i can prove. This is a letter certified by Psychatrist Piya Dobrial.In fact there is this,another paper showing that he had an appointment with Piya two days back.
He handed the documents to Amit.
Amit: hmm..

Later when Abhay was leaving with Adi.
Amit: waise,i need to meet your friend.You know,first of all ek mentally unstable admi ko job dena and so much concern uskey liye.
Abhay(grinned): He is a great human being,u know!

After they left,
Amit(self-talk): Maan Singh Khurana! Interesting..
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His lips invaded hers...tongue circling around hers...he held her closer, his hands squeezing her waist..she responded to him equally fervently...

Suddenly he felt that she is withdrawing as if she is uncomfortable.He quickly opened his eyes and found fear in her twinkling eyes.He quickly left her and cupped her cheeks.

Maan: kya hua? Did i hurt you?
Mishty: nhe nhe..ap nhe..wo..wo..

Tears rolled down her eyes. She was sweating profusely. He wiped her tears lovingly.



Maan: relax Mishty. Its ok...
She hugged him as if hiding from someone.He could feel his chest getting wet by her tears. He patted her back soothing her. He felt his soul shaking as he felt her pain. Each drop of tear was falling on his heart and he felt helpless not even able to know the reason of her pain...But one thing he knew for sure,watever the cause may be he was there to undo her pains.He took her to the easy chair and made her sit on his lap.

Maan: are u ok?

She nodded. It was so unlikely that Mishty remained so thotful and dull.But today she lukd so lost...
Out of the blue she blurted out,' I don't deserved to be kissed by you!!

He frowned,stroking her lips with his thumbs...staring at her lips as if asserting his right on them.

As if sensing that,she lowered her gaze,trying to luk away.
Mishty: My first kiss was with
a deadbody!!!!
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PRECAP:GEET'S FIRST KISS!!

HOPE U ENJOYED THIS...😊

PLEASE LET ME KNOW UR RESPONSE... 😍

Busy week ahead. Will try to update on thursday...😳
I know u hate me for the cliffhanger... Waiting for the bashing!!! πŸ˜†


Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wat d hell DEAD BODY😲 omg i just lvd ths ff its so so gud
plz plz updat asap
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wonderful update...loved it
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