MG FF : MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY~~ PART 24:pg136 - Page 44

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Yayyy cuppum saucerum!!! I cannot wait!!!
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now detailed comments on the part

NOTE : Before starting let me ask you, should i address Geet as Mishty further or change it to Geet ??? Given a choice i prefer it to be Mishty. But i want to know your opinion if you are not able to connect it, you know, with Maaneet i will definitley change it

Hi sweety about your note… I think pls keep the name Mishty only. Its suits for the title and also there is magic in the name I guess. Really good to read this name than geet.

Mishty:me to bas practice kar rhe thi!
Maan closed his eyes and leaned back on his seat sighing.

Cute dialogues.

(* The green portion indicates Mishty reading Maan's mind)

Oh mishty can read maan's mind.

Mishty : arey nhe Maan,wo..me keh rhe thi..ap apne shirt ke buttons close kariye.

Oh no this dialogue in that serious situation. bichara maan😆

Maan: kya?
A nurse who was passing by stopped,' Xcuse me sir?'
Maan: nhe kuch nhe me bas ye keh rha tha,kitni garmi he yeha..

The nurse stared at him and walked away as it was a centralized air conditioned area.
Maan shot an angry glare at Mishty who immediately buttoned his shirt.

Nice dialogues…. 👏

Tasha : oh! So wat? Complaint karogi? Huh? Go and complaint! Phir tum bhi apni uss behenji dost, Geet ki tarah gayab ho jaogi! Silly her!

Oh so geet belongs to here and pinky is geets friend. chalo at least lil. Mystery has opened up.

Maan: well, i am a research student. I have to make a documentary on u know,missing people,their life.

Yaa how come pinky doesn't know he is a famous person naa😉

Aur mere liye hamesha choclates leke athi thi aur chips bhi. Hum sath me market jate the,golgappe khate the..aur burger bhi..

Great dialogues dear.. oh god pinky here too did not leave food…

Nice pic of maaneet the black and white one. Thanks for the pics.

Mishty:to..apko kya laga mujhe apne baho me leke ap us Tasha ke barey me sochenge aur mujhe pata nhe chalega!

Oh my god was he thinking of Tasha at that time. Its good that geet can read his mind too..

I know i am dragging about Geet's past.If i wish i can end it in a part.But i wantd to give it in bits and parts,just to build up the suspense!
Plz tell me,if u don't like this way. Anyways next part will be revealing more about Geet.
And if u ask,what is Mishty? The reply is, she is mystique, MYSTIQUE MISHTY!!

No dear u are not dragging the past infact it is good I m exiting to read what happened with geet. Do continue its grate work…





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i m here again to comment on your another awesome update.

PART 13

With the majority goin for Mishty... i am not changing the name. But don't worry. From today u fill find Geet also

That's good decision. 👏

Maan (elated):who?
Mishty: Sister Isabel. My warden..in the hostel.

Chalo she identified something.

Adi saw Maan's hands in air but he brushed it off thinking Maan was stretching his hands after a long drive.

oh my god maan romance in front of adi poor adi

di: sir,kya hua?
Maan:nhe wo machar!
Mishty: huh? Apne mujhe machar kaha? Abhi mazaa chakati hu!



Wow beautiful geet in white dress.. thanks for the pic.


maan, adi & geet dialogues are awesome dear... really.

PRECAP: Maan's flying cup of black coffee !!



poor adi


Precap is awesome



for the update and pm

this is for you



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Posted: 13 years ago
Mishty ko ahista ahista Geet yaad arahi ha
they are taking advantage of each other's helplessness
update is

ohhh i hate BRIJ

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Originally posted by: harshdb






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now detailed comments on the part

NOTE : Before starting let me ask you, should i address Geet as Mishty further or change it to Geet ??? Given a choice i prefer it to be Mishty. But i want to know your opinion if you are not able to connect it, you know, with Maaneet i will definitley change it

Hi sweety about your note' I think pls keep the name Mishty only. Its suits for the title and also there is magic in the name I guess. Really good to read this name than geet.

Mishty:me to bas practice kar rhe thi!
Maan closed his eyes and leaned back on his seat sighing.

Cute dialogues.

(* The green portion indicates Mishty reading Maan's mind)

Oh mishty can read maan's mind.

Mishty : arey nhe Maan,wo..me keh rhe thi..ap apne shirt ke buttons close kariye.

Oh no this dialogue in that serious situation. bichara maan😆

Maan: kya?
A nurse who was passing by stopped,' Xcuse me sir?'
Maan: nhe kuch nhe me bas ye keh rha tha,kitni garmi he yeha..

The nurse stared at him and walked away as it was a centralized air conditioned area.
Maan shot an angry glare at Mishty who immediately buttoned his shirt.

Nice dialogues'. 👏

Tasha : oh! So wat? Complaint karogi? Huh? Go and complaint! Phir tum bhi apni uss behenji dost, Geet ki tarah gayab ho jaogi! Silly her!

Oh so geet belongs to here and pinky is geets friend. chalo at least lil. Mystery has opened up.

Maan: well, i am a research student. I have to make a documentary on u know,missing people,their life.

Yaa how come pinky doesn't know he is a famous person naa😉

Aur mere liye hamesha choclates leke athi thi aur chips bhi. Hum sath me market jate the,golgappe khate the..aur burger bhi..

Great dialogues dear.. oh god pinky here too did not leave food'

Nice pic of maaneet the black and white one. Thanks for the pics.

Mishty:to..apko kya laga mujhe apne baho me leke ap us Tasha ke barey me sochenge aur mujhe pata nhe chalega!

Oh my god was he thinking of Tasha at that time. Its good that geet can read his mind too..

I know i am dragging about Geet's past.If i wish i can end it in a part.But i wantd to give it in bits and parts,just to build up the suspense!
Plz tell me,if u don't like this way. Anyways next part will be revealing more about Geet.
And if u ask,what is Mishty? The reply is, she is mystique, MYSTIQUE MISHTY!!

No dear u are not dragging the past infact it is good I m exiting to read what happened with geet. Do continue its grate work'





FOR THE UPDATE AND PM




Thank UUU dear for the wonderful comments 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshdb



i m here again to comment on your another awesome update.

PART 13

With the majority goin for Mishty... i am not changing the name. But don't worry. From today u fill find Geet also

That's good decision. 👏

Maan (elated):who?
Mishty: Sister Isabel. My warden..in the hostel.

Chalo she identified something.

Adi saw Maan's hands in air but he brushed it off thinking Maan was stretching his hands after a long drive.

oh my god maan romance in front of adi poor adi

di: sir,kya hua?
Maan:nhe wo machar!
Mishty: huh? Apne mujhe machar kaha? Abhi mazaa chakati hu!



Wow beautiful geet in white dress.. thanks for the pic.


maan, adi & geet dialogues are awesome dear... really.

PRECAP: Maan's flying cup of black coffee !!



poor adi


Precap is awesome



for the update and pm

this is for you



&








Hi dear

My updates seem to be incomplete without your comments 😃

THANK U sooo... much for the inspiration... 🤗 🤗

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Originally posted by: Speechless

Mishty ko ahista ahista Geet yaad arahi ha

they are taking advantage of each other's helplessness
update is

ohhh i hate BRIJ

Thank U 😃
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you updating
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to each one of you for your wonderful support 😃

Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Madhu.. I read few of your FFs in one go.. Liked the way you improvise the movies.. It is amazing.. Looking forward for more.. Please do add me to your PM list..
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