MG FF : MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY~~ PART 24:pg136 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

You really have me hooked on the mystery now.


What intrigued me the most is that some powerful men are involved behind Geet going missing. If that is so then having someone as powerful as Maan on Geet's side is going to be very very helpful.

Thank U... πŸ˜ƒ

U are definitely a dedicated lawyer see... you are wieghing the pros and cons... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Hey Madhu...thanx for pm

Very beautiful update...so Geet Handa is not dead and she used to live in Mussoorie...now Maan is going to investigate in this matter...

Hope nothing went wrong to Geet...but if Geet is not dead then what is she who is living with Maan...Is Geet in coma and her subconcious spirit (like saints used to do...by Yoga) has come to Maan to get his help...oh I am soo confusedπŸ˜• about Mishti's identity...but anyway this suspense is ur FFs base so I am relying on u that u will give us really thrilling story and unite Maaneet in reality.

Thank You so much for your comments πŸ˜ƒ

Hope i justify your trust on me 😳


Its so good to know that you are enjoying the story...

Since you are more familiar with the places mentioned in the FF , feel free to suggest anything special about the place ,u know stuff that only the natives know. I would love to include such things and your inputs will be of great help since i don't know about the Dehradun-Mussorie area 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Speechless

he hugged her in the middle of the roadhe poured her heart out wetting his shirtMaan read the Title GEET HUI SUBSE PARAYI

she forgot every thing??? that she was in medical college or woh bhi final year... and y can't she read???y she felt uncomfortable about the 'MAANSAROVAR' OMG so much confusion...
he hugged her tight and sleep
Maan started Mission GEET... they are going to visit her college
Waiting for the next😳



You comment brings a big smile on my face πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ


I feel like i can see your expressions while reading 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi frnz...

Have a nice week ahead 😊

NOTE : Before starting let me ask you, should i address Geet as Mishty further or change it to Geet ??? Given a choice i prefer it to be Mishty. But i want to know your opinion if you are not able to connect it, you know, with Maaneet i will definitley change it 😊


PART 12


Saint Valley Medical School:

Maan parked his car in the parking lot.
Maan: We are here, Mishty.If you identify anything press my hands.And if i ask u to identify something,nod for a yes or no,ok?
Mishty: Ji
Maan was about to open the door when he turned to luk at her.
Maan: U are feeling nervous?
She nodded for a no.

Maan smiled,'Abhi baat kar sakti ho'
She nodded yes.
Maan: Mishtyyy...
Mishty:me to bas practice kar rhe thi!
Maan closed his eyes and leaned back on his seat sighing.
Maan: Ab chale?
Mishty: hmm..

He entered the college with her. It was a busy day with patients,doctors and students moving around.

Maan reached the reception.Adjacent to it was the OP section.But he wanted to take her to the lecture halls.May be that will help her.

Maan felt her pressing his hand. He lukd at her with great anticipation.
(* The green portion indicates Mishty reading Maan's mind)

Maan :
do u recognize anyone? Kuch yaad aya? Ye jagah? Ye atmosphere? Kuch to...
Mishty : arey nhe Maan,wo..me keh rhe thi..ap apne shirt ke buttons close kariye.
Maan: kya?
A nurse who was passing by stopped,' Xcuse me sir?'
Maan: nhe kuch nhe me bas ye keh rha tha,kitni garmi he yeha..

The nurse stared at him and walked away as it was a centralized air conditioned area.
Maan shot an angry glare at Mishty who immediately buttoned his shirt.



Mishty:aisey ankhe badi karke mat dekhiye. Wo waha jo ladki khadi he na,tabse apko ghur ghur ke dekh rhe he. Aur wo pata he kya keh rhe he,' Ye hottie kaun he jisey dekh ke Tasha ka dil dhak dhak dhak-dhak kar rha he..hayee DD!

Maan couldn't help but smile at his jealous Mishty. He turned with an attitude to see Tasha who was shamelessly gaping at him. Suddenly she collided with a plump yet cute girl and dropped all her belongings which included books on Physiology and Gynaecology,and a packet of chips.
Tasha : Pinky tum dekh ke nhe chal sakti?
Pinky: lekin Tasha tum hi to mujpe akey takra gayi.
Tasha : oh! So wat? Complaint karogi? Huh? Go and complaint! Phir tum bhi apni uss behenji dost, Geet ki tarah gayab ho jaogi! Silly her!

With that Tasha left. Pinky was almost in tears when Maan went to her.
Maan: Dr. Pinky?
Pinky controlled her tears and pretended to be cheerful.




Pinky : yes sir,how can i help you?
Maan : Well,umm..i am Maan Khurana.Wo..ap..i mean u know Geet? Dr. Geet Handa..
Pinky: ha, Geet to meri best friend he..(her face fell) i mean thi!
Maan: thi?
Pinky: wo,she is missing since last 6 months na?
Maan : oh! Can u tell me something about Geet?
Pinky: Geet? Par ap kaun ho?
Maan: well, i am a research student. I have to make a documentary on u know,missing people,their life.
Pinky: oh well, Geet kya batau uskey barey me? Wo is college ki sabse bright student he,my best friend. She is adorable,sweet,caring... Aur mere liye hamesha choclates leke athi thi aur chips bhi. Hum sath me market jate the,golgappe khate the..aur burger bhi..
As Pinky went on about Geet mindlessly.
Maan(to Mishty) :
Do u remember her?
Mishty nodded for a no.

Pinky was chatting non-stop when a friend came luking for her and dragged Pinky with her.

Maan was proceeding to the lecture hall when he saw Abhay's parents, the Raichands coming towards him.
Haseena: hello Maan!
Maan: Hello Mrs.Raichand.Ap log yeha?
Haseena: We are the major partners of this college.
Chand: And what brings you here, Mr.Khurana?




Maan: Friend se milne aya tha.
Chand : hmm..Nice to meet you!
They shook hands and left.
Maan again askd Mishty
:
are u sure u don't know them?
She nodded for a no.

Maan had a gut feeling about Raichand's involvement in Geet's missing with the article mentioning involvement of prominent people. Though family friends, Maan never had a good relation with Abhay's parents.If not evil,the Raichands are selfish and money-minded people.Unlike his parents, Abhay is a kind-hearted and honest person,thats why Maan had a good bonding with him.

Now, Maan really felt that Raichands have something to do with Geet. And Mishty's response was not helping him anyway.He was worried,his Geet is in some trouble and if something happens to her,then that will be the end of Mishty. He just knew that. He felt helpless. He wanted to do something but he is only standing there puzzled.The only person who could help was Mishty.But she is not even taking a chance.Maan had lost his patience.He stared at her and left the place quietly.
Mishty followed him wondering what happened to him suddenly.
In the parking lot,

Mishty : kya hua Maan?
Maan(shoutd): ab aur kya hona he? Sab kuch ho chuka he,aur me abhi tak kuch nhe kar saka.Aur tum..tum to mera saath bhi nhe de rhe.
Mishty:ap aise kyu baat kar rhe he?
He pinned her to the car!
Maan: phir me kya karu? Huh? Should i let u wander like this forever? Do u even have an idea what that Raichands are capable of? Mishty,wake up! Wake up before its too late! Wake up before i lose u! Or do u want to be like this forever??

Mishty lukd at him blinking her teary eyes.Her hand automatically reachd to his cheeks,cupping them.
Mishty: i am sorry Maan! But i will try. Aur agar ap mujhe itna pyaar karoge to me zindagi bhar aisey gumnaam rehne ke liye taiyar hu...
Maan couldn't believe that. This girl,who came to him seeking herself now don't even want her true self...coz she loves him!!
He hugged her showering kisses all over her face...down to her neck..




He felt some one coming to the parking place and quickly got into the back seat with her.The privacy and the silence was heating up the moment with so much emotions in them.
Maan took her lips before any word was spoken and was almost chewing her lips.It was so rough a kiss biting her lips..roaming to the corners of her mouth with his tongue and his hands caressing her back with desire...her response was so spontaneous..taking out all his worries...It lukd like they will never stop.But atleast he wanted to breath...

Maan: I love you Mishty...
Mishty : love you too jaan..
Maan: to tum apne jaan ka sath nhe dogi?

He stroked her swollen lips with his thumb.
Mishty:hmm...me to sirf ap hi ke sath hu.

Her hands went around his neck,luking at him with an innocent smile.
Maan: to phir batao na mujhe..Geet ke barey me..tumhare barey me...
Mishty:kya bolu me?
Maan: Jo bhi tumhare mann me aye...
She rested her head on his chest hearing his heartbeats...she knew each of his heartbeat was for her...its her name etched in his heart...her fingers caressed his chest..feeling his heart..and she opened his top two buttons..
He smiled and moaned,'Mishty..'
He was getting hard with her claiming him...that was only her right!!
Mishty whacked him.
Maan: ouch!! Kya hua Mishty?
Mishty:to..apko kya laga mujhe apne baho me leke ap us Tasha ke barey me sochenge aur mujhe pata nhe chalega!
Maan bits his lips.Uff..she can read minds!
Mishty : ofcourse! Isliye ap mujse nhe bach sakte!
Maan: oho..mishty me us ladki ke barey me kaha..tumhare barey me soch rha tha! Wo jo tum buttons khol rhe thi..
Mishty: Aahaha..bahane mat banayiye Maan! Me sab janti hu! Ap yehi soch rhe the na ki mene uskey samne apka shirt..
His lips sealed her again not letting her complete her cute complaints...

He lay atop her and she could feel him hard...

He parted his lips from her and moved back her curls...
She was breathing hard looking so vulnerable under him...
Maan: tumne mere sawaal ka jawab nhe diya..
Mishty :hmm..par aisey to me kuch bhi nhe soch sakti...(she blurted out innocently)
Maan(smirkd):kyu?
She blushd.
Mishty : apko pata he! Bas..
Maan:kya pata he mujhe?
Mishty: yehi ki..jab ap mere karib hotey ho to...
Maan:to?
Mishty: jo baat mujhe pehle se yaad he wo bhi bhul jaungi..
He dipped his head on her neck,kissing her collar bone..
Mishty: Maan..
Maan(still busy kissing her) : hmm?
Mishty : lets go to some open place! I need fresh air!
Maan moved back,'as you wish,my angel!

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PRECAP: Adi collects info about Geet! πŸ‘πŸΌ
Mishty talks about Geet.


Hope U like it.


I know i am dragging about Geet's past.If i wish i can end it in a part.But i wantd to give it in bits and parts,just to build up the suspense! πŸ˜‰
Plz tell me,if u don't like this way. Anyways next part will be revealing more about Geet.
And if u ask,what is Mishty? The reply is, she is mystique, MYSTIQUE MISHTY!! 😳

Meaning for mystique : They are thot to be special and people do not know much about them! πŸ˜ƒ

Flood me with your comments..so that i feel happy-happy and write moreee...

Will update soon.

NEXT : PART 13 : page 71


Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yuppy first to comment
awesomeupdate
i'm really eager to know about geet
even i've began to suspect the raichands
pls contnue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sarkh26

yuppy first to comment

awesomeupdate
i'm really eager to know about geet
even i've began to suspect the raichands
pls contnue soon

Thanks for commenting πŸ˜ƒ and yes u r the first πŸ₯³

Will get to know more about Geet...

Raichands...lets see πŸ˜‰

will update most probably tomorrow 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 part waiting for the mystery to unravel...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
waiting 2 know more abt geet
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part...loved it
eagerly waiting for next part to know more about mishty...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...and i connect with Mishty name very well...for me it is synonym of Geet...
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