FF:Revenge from the lover2(discontinue)

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He entered in the room which was decorated beautifully.He saw his bride who was shivering while crying.He sat on the bed and put his hand on her hand for comforting her.But she jerked her hand and went to the washroom.She closed the door of washroom and started to cry.One scene was repeating in her mind.

Person:Geet someone is trying to kill me...

Geet:who?

Person:Bro...

Then she wiped her tears.

Geet(Angrily):Now i'm not going to cry anymore.You will cry maan singh khurana.I will make you pay for what you have done with me.Wait and watch how i will make ur married life like a hell...


NOTE:

Part 1 will start way before the prologue with maneet first meeting😳!

I will post character sketch later😳.The story line is different from the first season but the theme is same that is revenge😃.



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Prologue:Page 1
Character sketch:Page 9
Part 1:Page 16
Part 2:Page 24
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woohoo second season of RFTL
Loving the prologue
Cont soon Xx...
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congrats dear

i m so happy tht u started the second season for this ff

i loved the first one and m looking forward to this one also

so continue soon
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Congrats ...all the best!!please add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome prologue... loved it
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats dear!!
really Nice prologue !!!
cont soon
thanks for pm..
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Congrats dear,love the prologue pls do cont.
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