AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 97

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Posted: 13 years ago

This is was simply WOW! I just loved each and every part of it!

Anushka's visit was amazing, I could really feel the wrath of bright light along with Pia plus Anushka and Zee sitting in middle of it looking up at those demon clouds. I hope she defeats those demons soon and free up herself from the curse. As much as I want her to come back, I know I will miss Zee if she leaves. She is just full of life. Sam was genuinely jealous for Mish thinking about Abheer and equally concerned about T being bleed. Such an incredible relationship you have woven between Sam, Misha and T. And their group hug was great to see. I am loving this T in your FF. she is such a darling. I hope she doesn't become victim of Abheer's dark dirty tricks through Sam. But I think that's what makes this whole thing so intense. Can't wait for the next update. Please continue soon.

Love and Luck,

NehaπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally a hint of Anush, and i'm very sad for her, poor soul, witchy Mistress of spice aunty (pun intended, hehehe)!

And poor T, dropping her blood drop by drop, eee... that must be hurting!

btw, loved the 'Taj Mahal' dialogue and Zee's description of T! lol!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritzie

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this was awesome Poco. I liked the way you described Anush's coming back and talking to apia. It was like Iwas sitting in that room with them. Did Abheer try to kill Anush? Poor girl. I am really worried for Mish now. Bechare Mr D. Saari betiyan musibat mein.

Vaise I rethought about Majesty. Mr D cant be Majesty becoz that will mean pia, mish and Panchi have bolsh blood too. So, its somebody else. Angad? Princi? I am going crazy thinking about who it can be. Hints please.


Thank you, Ritzie. Abheer did not try to kill Anushka , he tried to kill 'something'. Abheer knows that nobody can kill a Sapphire Witch unless she decides to die. Actually, you should be worried for Misha. Majesty? Keep guessing. Ek guess to sahee hoga hi . πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

Wow, Poco, that was really fast! And you finally put Anushka in!


Thank you. I guess i was missing Anushka too. πŸ˜†

So, since Anushka said that the wounds are not to her body, but to her soul, does that mean that her soul is decaying? Or is it just that her being is getting eaten by the demons? Abhay's powers are almost as powerful as Anushka's so she can do spells on him, but he can't do anything to her, right? Or at least, not much... Abheer betrayed Anushka!😑 He made her fall for him, then he stabbed her and threw her into fire! 😑 Why would he do that? 😑 I'm so glad that T agreed to help Misha get away from the hypnotism of Abheer. She is a real lifesaver, literally. Sam is so cute when he's jealous! πŸ˜† He was ranting on and on about how she shouldn't be thinking about Abheer, and then tries to fix it when he realizes that he is talking in a fit of jealousy at Abheer. πŸ˜†


Anushka's soul is decaying and the MOS is testing her to her limits. Abhay will discover her real powers when that ring slips on to his fingers. Abheer had to do that to Anushka , he had no other option. Undercurrents between Sam and Misha will continue until Sam does the unthinkable and begins to hate his own existence. 😊


This one was awesome! I want to see more of Abhay next time, please!!! I want to know how he will get Piya to tell him what happened to him without even touching her. Does he think he can manipulate her mind to get her to tell him? Anyways, Poco, update fast, please!

Abhay will start laying down his cards in the next update. πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: katiehiwatari

omg.. omg.. anush finally came bak.. im so happy.. h pr her the way anush eacted fr thinkn abt Abheer was kinda sad!!! the way you explained the whole process felt like all that was happenin rite here... ur awesome.. and hey i ve got a ques.. u say Abhay's gonna turn 666.. so thn Maithali and the Pandher dynasty existed almost 700 yrs ago..??


Thank you. I think it was more like Anushka's guest appearance.πŸ˜†...Baby, in my F, Maithli was never a princess and nor any Pandher exists. She is a witch who was set up by the werewolves to lure Abhay.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part poco
short bt power pack!!

man abheer is so dam evil!! bt still dunno y his aura is so strong...basically no one can resist him...dunno y his wickedness is also irresistable πŸ˜› ...poco am i sounding like a crazy...???

bt there is one thing earlier there was a ray of hope in ma heart dat at d end of this whole story may b abheer goes under a change...a positive change...bt last part where u wrote abt anush and abheer...after reading it...its clear dat abheer loves no one xcept himself...!!


update soon
luv
heena

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Paradisekiss053

Wow the chapter was beautiful. At last some of Anushka... She seems to be really struggling in the underworld. I understood the part where Anushka's body seemed DECAYING. I think so at least. Because it is only Anushka's soul that is traveling in the underworld, fighting and trying to reverse the curse when she came into her own body it was the reflection of the soul... The demons are really giving her a hard time there arent they?

I feel bad for her. She is suffering so much down there... Emotionally feeling guilty for separating Abhay and Pia and letting the bad Maithili take over Abhay. And then physically or at least in her soul burning... that is so unfair. At least I never want to be a part of the world where good witches are done bad too.

For one second I thought Anushka was coming back and then there was this pang of sadness. I have come to enjoy Zee a lot. She is a joyous person and her way of taking things is really cool. I will miss her when she is gone!

Sam is really a jealous boy... I like it. Though I know that maybe Sam and Misha will never come together I cant just stop hoping that one day they will. But then there is T, so pure in ways and bad in the others... The sacrifice and torture she is going through now really touches my heart.

I have a bad feeling that this protective shield they are making will not affect Misha's mind. Abheer has already left a print in her heart not with his supernatural powers but in a human way.

Beautifully written update. I will be waiting for the next one. Till then see you!


Thank you so much, sweetz. Anushka is only paying the price of her sin and trying to release herself from the curse of the spices. Her soul is decaying but her body is intact. Zeenia is LIFE and i just love writing her parts.Sam is going to soon forget this jealousy and ruin a certain someone's life. Misha and Abheer? TROUBLE. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

That was one awsome update darling...thugh wounded and decaying and in pain it was good to see Anush back...had really missed her...hand it over to Zee to handle a situation...she was nearly killed but still manages to keep up her naughtiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...this chick doesn;t stop amazing me...and she sure is fun...Sam was evidently jealous ...T is really a worthy freind to have now...how I wish she didn;t hav a tragic end...but alas life is not always fair right...and Abheer keeps on entertaining with his special effects on everyone...update soon sweetyπŸ€—


Thank you, Nidhi. Zeenia is an energy , so she is forever BOUNCING.πŸ˜†...T will have an end that she doesn't deserve . Abheer is HYPNOTISM on legs.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
great one dear
T was great doing that for misha
felt bad for anu but hell she will be back
zeenia is so funny
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi Poco, wonderful update. loved Zee's part.
I had a doubt since i read ur both the books in one day maybe i missed something. It's Zee in Anushka body every knows it including Abheer and Bolshvas, then why they (Rs and family) want hide from Daksh and Kabir. I know they r VS but all their enemies anyways know about it.
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