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Ritzie Ring'gghania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#951

surprise

res

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this was awesome Poco. I liked the way you described Anush's coming back and talking to apia. It was like Iwas sitting in that room with them. Did Abheer try to kill Anush? Poor girl. I am really worried for Mish now. Bechare Mr D. Saari betiyan musibat mein.

Vaise I rethought about Majesty. Mr D cant be Majesty becoz that will mean pia, mish and Panchi have bolsh blood too. So, its somebody else. Angad? Princi? I am going crazy thinking about who it can be. Hints please.

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Ritika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#952

Wow, Poco, that was really fast! And you finally put Anushka in!

So, since Anushka said that the wounds are not to her body, but to her soul, does that mean that her soul is decaying? Or is it just that her being is getting eaten by the demons? Abhay's powers are almost as powerful as Anushka's so she can do spells on him, but he can't do anything to her, right? Or at least, not much... Abheer betrayed Anushka!😡 He made her fall for him, then he stabbed her and threw her into fire! 😡 Why would he do that? 😡 I'm so glad that T agreed to help Misha get away from the hypnotism of Abheer. She is a real lifesaver, literally. Sam is so cute when he's jealous! 😆 He was ranting on and on about how she shouldn't be thinking about Abheer, and then tries to fix it when he realizes that he is talking in a fit of jealousy at Abheer. 😆

This one was awesome! I want to see more of Abhay next time, please!!! I want to know how he will get Piya to tell him what happened to him without even touching her. Does he think he can manipulate her mind to get her to tell him? Anyways, Poco, update fast, please!

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#953

res! i'll unreserve tomorrow. <3

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wow, even your most filler parts turn out to be SUPER entertaining. <3 i loved pia-anu's conversation. anushka is just so .. despite being the witch of the highest order, she comes out at pretty fragile at times. i guess that's why i prefer abheer - he's shady, and he doesn't feel, 'coz feeling only messes everything up. like, if you look at sam - he was better off not feeling anything at all, due to the sacrificing abhay n all. ah, anyway, back to anu - omg, she has a past with abheer!? interesting. she had a past with sam, too - i remember. 😆

i love zeenia, seriously. only zee can concentrate on her hair after nearly exploding to nothingness. :P ah, anyway, lol @ her sarcasm to T. no offence, i love t - she's my desi caroline; although nothing definately comes close to her. <3 back to the part, i love sam's underlying jealousy. he's a werewolf, he has the instinctive mating insticts, y'know? - the animalistic posessiveness. i guess that's what makes him do whatever 'sin' he's gonna do. love the part, anyhow. 😃

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mangona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#954

unreserve on page 127

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Apoorva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#955

omg.. omg.. anush finally came bak.. im so happy.. h pr her the way anush eacted fr thinkn abt Abheer was kinda sad!!! the way you explained the whole process felt like all that was happenin rite here... ur awesome.. and hey i ve got a ques.. u say Abhay's gonna turn 666.. so thn Maithali and the Pandher dynasty existed almost 700 yrs ago..??

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#956

Wow the chapter was beautiful. At last some of Anushka... She seems to be really struggling in the underworld. I understood the part where Anushka's body seemed DECAYING. I think so at least. Because it is only Anushka's soul that is traveling in the underworld, fighting and trying to reverse the curse when she came into her own body it was the reflection of the soul... The demons are really giving her a hard time there arent they?

I feel bad for her. She is suffering so much down there... Emotionally feeling guilty for separating Abhay and Pia and letting the bad Maithili take over Abhay. And then physically or at least in her soul burning... that is so unfair. At least I never want to be a part of the world where good witches are done bad too.

For one second I thought Anushka was coming back and then there was this pang of sadness. I have come to enjoy Zee a lot. She is a joyous person and her way of taking things is really cool. I will miss her when she is gone!

Sam is really a jealous boy... I like it. Though I know that maybe Sam and Misha will never come together I cant just stop hoping that one day they will. But then there is T, so pure in ways and bad in the others... The sacrifice and torture she is going through now really touches my heart.

I have a bad feeling that this protective shield they are making will not affect Misha's mind. Abheer has already left a print in her heart not with his supernatural powers but in a human way.

Beautifully written update. I will be waiting for the next one. Till then see you!

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#957

That was one awsome update darling...thugh wounded and decaying and in pain it was good to see Anush back...had really missed her...hand it over to Zee to handle a situation...she was nearly killed but still manages to keep up her naughtiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...this chick doesn;t stop amazing me...and she sure is fun...Sam was evidently jealous ...T is really a worthy freind to have now...how I wish she didn;t hav a tragic end...but alas life is not always fair right...and Abheer keeps on entertaining with his special effects on everyone...update soon sweety🤗

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mangona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#958

poco now iam defineately sure that CVs read ur ff cause in pkyek piya gonna lose her memory and her mind wd forget abay but her mind wd remember him ( opposite 2 ur story)😛

now cuming back to ur ff

anushka part was awesome poor darling has to go in underworld now iam really feeling angry at mistress of spice she gave anushka to demons cant she 4gave her i mean its bad she died but here our lovers r seperted cause of mistress of spice though i miss anushka but zee is owsum Piya ( twitching her eye brows )- Zee? Open the door, woman. Why are you looking in the mirror?

Zeenia ( tosses her head smugly as she fixes her hair)- The Anushka encounter kinda spoiled the perfect ironed out look. Anushka is beautiful but its me who is guarding the Taj Mahal! Hee hee. my fav line

and abheer he broke anushka heart and stabbed her really cant she love someone who wd b 4 her ? is misha and abheer paths starcrossed i mean i wd lov to c her wd sam but with abheer she wd kinda look awsum

sam was so jealous he shd understand its not misha fault she' s thinking bout abheer

now iam wishing t wd never die the way she came there to protect misha was gr8 but she is also trapping sam she is also good and bad 😕 poor thing

if abay finds out secret iam sure he wd b a loose canon cause of all ur description abay is gonna b so angry wel eagerly waiting 4 ur next update

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mangona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#959

awsum😛

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Minahil

@minahil1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#960

wow poco owesum update👏👏

so anushka came in and told pia about all things...ok so they think that abhay is nt gonna know anything till he gets the ring😃... misha is really in danger due to abheer... T is really nice😳 ... she is helping misha😃... so there is a story between anushka and abheer😲... hope that reveal soon😳... the whole part was superb🤗... continue soon❤️

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