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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

res! pocooo, i lobe you. i'll unreserve tomorrow! <3


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okay, tell me where to start!? i've re-read this part again and again.. like i do for all of your parts. let me start with a simple - do you know how much of a fabulous and realistic writer you are?! go make a show, i'll sponsor you. :P

Thank you, Akkoo. I hope to be an ace TV scriptwriter and a novelist someday - am on my way already. So maybe this is just the groundwork that am doing. It will happen eventually, it has to. Fingers crossed. πŸ˜ƒ

the abhiya part was beautifully described. you make someone like me who doesn't even like abhiya love their parts - i guess, that's all i can say. this is the only ff where i actually like 'em, apart from sanu's. :P i loved pia and abhay breaking down, and then the whole deja vu feeling. and ohmigosh, did abhay just threaten pia that there will be more than just a kiss if she hides things from him? that was.. well...wild.

Abhay is not going to rest now. He will find out the truth - about Piya , about what everyone is hiding from him and finally leading him to the ring.

misha is so confused, i feel sorry for her. i know it's gonna get worse - but, if they do manage to do the ritual with the help of T, won't misha be able to resist him.. and then, well, abheer could always think of a new plan, turn other people into his favour - i kinda got that from their conversation. but, then, having misha under his control was a plus point, right? or would the 'ritual' not be successful for any reason whatsoever? i have my doubts about t helping them, though i think she would..'coz of the kiss scene n yeah.

Errm. What if Misha is attracted to Abheer inspite of the ritual? What if her attraction to Abheer is not because of his supernatural magnetism? And what if Abheer doesn't want to control Misha but wants something from her? Abheer can have any woman he wants and he has come for Abhay , right? Then, what does he want from a cute girl next door like Misha, hmm?

i love sam - he's just SO adorable. i know, i know, i kinda got disloyal there, loving abheer n all - i still love him; he's such a vagabond, and yeah.. i love badasses n all..and i know so do you, you love claus. :P okay, coming back to sam, he's such a cutiepie. he was worried, angry, some more worried, and some more angry that she didn't take a stand when he kissed her, aw. i don't know whether to hope or not to hope that the ritual works. i prefer the fiesty misha, but the helpless misha is fun, too. πŸ˜† to be honest, i want abheer to get a taste of her feistyness where she isn't attracted to him. (;

Oh, i am in love with Joseph Morgan and addicted to Klaus. He really is my new obsession. Haha. Sambhav will soon have no right to judge or sermonize anyone. The ritual will work , of course. Abheer doesn't take attitude because nobody gives it to him. Just look at him. Who would give him attitude and why? He is such a sweet talker and pretty caring. Isn't he? 😳



continue sooon! ...varna gaane gaayenge. πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

its gr8...⭐️⭐️ i loved it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†i hope abhay will find out d truth early...😊😊n misha will be fine


Abhay's journey to the truth will be step by step. And Misha may or may not be fine. Its tough to say anything at this stage. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renuka1997

lovely update
Im really excited about the upcoming parts
Coz abhay wants to find the truth
Abhiya part was good
Poor piya she can't say anything to him
Their discussion was good
I liked abhay's answers to piya during their famile discussion
Continue sooon
Pleeez pm me


Thank you. Abhay-Piya are playing cat and mouse and am loving writing them at this stage. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

res! pocooo, i lobe you. i'll unreserve tomorrow! <3


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okay, tell me where to start!? i've re-read this part again and again.. like i do for all of your parts. let me start with a simple - do you know how much of a fabulous and realistic writer you are?! go make a show, i'll sponsor you. :P

Thank you, Akkoo. I hope to be an ace TV scriptwriter and a novelist someday - am on my way already. So maybe this is just the groundwork that am doing. It will happen eventually, it has to. Fingers crossed. πŸ˜ƒ

yay. seriously!? wow. hurry up. i'm 14 now..and i hope to see your show on screen before i turn 18. :P you have the talent, girl. i'm proud of you. πŸ˜ƒ

the abhiya part was beautifully described. you make someone like me who doesn't even like abhiya love their parts - i guess, that's all i can say. this is the only ff where i actually like 'em, apart from sanu's. :P i loved pia and abhay breaking down, and then the whole deja vu feeling. and ohmigosh, did abhay just threaten pia that there will be more than just a kiss if she hides things from him? that was.. well...wild.

Abhay is not going to rest now. He will find out the truth - about Piya , about what everyone is hiding from him and finally leading him to the ring.

first stefen changes from a goody guy and goes back to his old ways..and then i get a super aggressive abhay. fun fun fun. πŸ˜† no, seriously, i'm loving his confusion, his sense of betrayal and deja vu. his parts are a treat to read. :D

misha is so confused, i feel sorry for her. i know it's gonna get worse - but, if they do manage to do the ritual with the help of T, won't misha be able to resist him.. and then, well, abheer could always think of a new plan, turn other people into his favour - i kinda got that from their conversation. but, then, having misha under his control was a plus point, right? or would the 'ritual' not be successful for any reason whatsoever? i have my doubts about t helping them, though i think she would..'coz of the kiss scene n yeah.

Errm. What if Misha is attracted to Abheer inspite of the ritual? What if her attraction to Abheer is not because of his supernatural magnetism? And what if Abheer doesn't want to control Misha but wants something from her? Abheer can have any woman he wants and he has come for Abhay , right? Then, what does he want from a cute girl next door like Misha, hmm?

abheer wants something from misha? that just reminds me of the whole sam wanting the witch cross etc etc. :P i know you don't mean it like that, though. erm. seriously, what could he want from misha? .. you got me thinking again.

i love sam - he's just SO adorable. i know, i know, i kinda got disloyal there, loving abheer n all - i still love him; he's such a vagabond, and yeah.. i love badasses n all..and i know so do you, you love claus. :P okay, coming back to sam, he's such a cutiepie. he was worried, angry, some more worried, and some more angry that she didn't take a stand when he kissed her, aw. i don't know whether to hope or not to hope that the ritual works. i prefer the fiesty misha, but the helpless misha is fun, too. πŸ˜† to be honest, i want abheer to get a taste of her feistyness where she isn't attracted to him. (;

Oh, i am in love with Joseph Morgan and addicted to Klaus. He really is my new obsession. Haha. Sambhav will soon have no right to judge or sermonize anyone. The ritual will work , of course. Abheer doesn't take attitude because nobody gives it to him. Just look at him. Who would give him attitude and why? He is such a sweet talker and pretty caring. Isn't he? 😳

LOL, obviously.. he's so sweet. πŸ˜† such a sweet vagabond. :P i love klaus, too. πŸ˜ƒ ohmigosh, what is sam gonna do? 😲 damn, update soon. does his animal instincts get the better out of him on seeing misha with abheer?

continue sooon! ...varna gaane gaayenge. πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: katiehiwatari

absolutely loooved it..!! oh Abhiya scene was so cute.. aww.. bt i feel bad for Abhay..!!! n i love the jealousy in Sambhav... hehe.. waiting madly 4 ur nxt update.. update soon.. !!


Thank you. Arre? Felt bad for Abhay only? And Piya? Kitni band bajaayi Abhay ne uski?πŸ˜†...Sam is jealous and worried because his bond with Misha is special. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

great one thank god Zeenia can do something to protect misha and sam worried was really cute.


pia and abhay were hot
and abheer will take advantage of abhay's distressed mood.
abhay is saying but yaah he will be manipulated by abheer and to some extent betrayed by his own.
hope he will forgive everyone.

do continue
bye sumi


Thank you. 😊...Zeenia is a life saver and she has promised Anushka to protect her loved ones. Sam is cute but lets not forget what he really is. Abheer is a game of chess in motion- you never know what his next step is going to be. Abhay will not forgive anyone.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mino1997

omg poco!!!!πŸ€—

abheer is total evil😲... he plays with human's heart and😈... i hope t agrees to sambhav to save misha or misha would never be able to resist abheer😳 and that can end up in smthing really bad... as soon as pia have anushka's bracelet nothing is gonna happen to her and that is a really gd thing😊... abhiya part was superb😳... abhay is really tensed and he is soon gonna find out😲 ... i wonder how is he gonna react to thisπŸ˜•... i feel sad fr himπŸ˜”... eagerly waitin fr the nxt part continue soon❀️


Thank you.😊...T will get ready to help Misha without a second thought. Don't worry. Abhay is going to find out about everyone's betrayal and no, he will not take it in good spirit.
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyy poco my xams are over now i will comment on each update and postπŸ˜› unlike past days

okay coming to last 3 updates

abheer- I knew it i am goin to love him no matter what, i am imagining Klause in him that reminds himnow i hate klause 4 his kameenapan towards stefan... K dis ws abt update... Abheer getting close to misha and he is most complex character like abhay in ur ff... The power and his actions talks alot... He is too good and the way he handle fiery misha itws unbelievable and now misha knows about panchi thanx to abheer... i hope she do something for panchi... I cn just say inspite of so evilness i love abheer

Misha- Like panchi she is alsi going thru so much and in your ff why every girl has to sufferπŸ˜›... You knw how much i love misha... I know how bad she must be feeling to be called as lamb and all people are looking at her in wrong way and thinking wrong things abou her was just so frustrating. And the way sam cared for her... I mean i know he cares for her alot but still he is not aware of his feelings or mabe he is but he dnt want to clear this to himself

i have gotta feeling that sam knows al bout T : i have a practical reasoning for dis d day t ws at his house he left his watch and maybe to take his watch he must have turned up there and he must have lstened what she ws saying...

Abhay- he is getting more frustrated day by day.. how bad of him to put all blame on pia and taunting her and passing scarticsm... but he is also going thru so much... frtst abheer and now his mind speaking against him and messing up of his mind... he is also suffering alot..


poco awesome updatesπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Posted: 13 years ago
pia- she is going thru so much these days... o forget it she alws have to go thru so much and when we will get arnab and pia sach ka saamna wala πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ part.. waiting 4 dat and zeenia is so superrr-cool she leaves no chance to change tense env to make it light with her talks

p.s- now i am also missing anush very badly... plz bring her back soon.. plzzz

One song 4 abhay which suits him perfectly
i knw i will never improove in song dedications
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rove palkan de Kone vich neend meri
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Hanju digde ne chot lage dil te
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gayi


Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
khoya khoya in raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi
Har pal her lamha, main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal her lamha main khud se yeh kehta rehta hoon


Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya.. oh
Mujhe rula diya .


Teri yaadon mein likhte jo lafz dete hai sunaai
beete lamhe poochhte hain kyun hue aise juda.. khuda,
Khuda mila jo yeh faisla hain
Khuda tera hi yeh faisla hain
Khuda hona tha woh ho gaya
Jo tune thha likha

Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya..
Mujhe rula diya .


Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gay

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gay


Dol pal tujh se juda thha,
Aise phir rasta muda thha,
Tujh se main khone laga,
Juda jaise hone laga,
Mujh se kuch mera

Tu hi mera liye abb kr dua,
Tu hi is dard se kar de juda,
Tera hoke tera jo main na raha,
Main yeh khud se kehta hoon,

Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya.



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