AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 88

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ScaryAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update just love ur ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved!!
For now, Amazing update di...!! :)

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Sorry for being late... But as I've already said it was a fabulous part, I loved it(well I always love ur updates 😉)... Abhay and Piya are so adorable together... Even when Abhay doesn't remember his love for Piya, the passion's so much there!!!!😍 The deja vu feeling only adds to the effect of ur story! Now when Abhay knows that Piya and others are hiding things from him, HE looks like a loose cannon to me(not Abheer as u say...)... But whatever this guy does, it only makes us like him even more...The way he threatened Piya, even that had a charm and intensity innit, "
And if you ever play hypocritical and prudish with me , trust my word , this kiss was just a part of prelims."Poor Piya, she's already facing so much, now she has to bear his treats too...😔
I know that he is not going to recall everything right now, at least not all by himself, but Abheer telling him the truth!! This will only complicate things, won't it?? And Abheer is going to use his state of mind for his own benefit, I'm sure about that, ahh...😡
Talking about Abheer, he has really confused Misha, I feel so sorry for the poor girl... All the three sisters are deep into this supernatural realm, all to a point of no return!! What will be her reaction when this guy will tell her(or rather hint her) about Piya being her own blood???? 😕
Sam was so adorable, trying to sooth Misha and at the same time feeling disgust at the thought of Abheer touching her!! He loves her, cares for her, that's so obvious.. only if he would confess!!!
The ritual Zeenia is going to perform, to protect Misha from Abheer's charms, is it gonna work??? And what does Tanushree have to do with this?? Is it some bolsh blood thing again???
And why wasn't Abhay called for the Czen meeting???? Isn't he the one who is in deepest trouble with Abheer's arrival????
And di, I'm really missing Anushka now...
😔 Zeenia is superb, I love her for what she is and I want her to be a part of the story even after Anushka's return but I want Anushka back soon... At least give some place for her underworld adventures in ur updates...
Love,
Nidhi
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Edited by N_NS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great one thank god Zeenia can do something to protect misha and sam worried was really cute.

pia and abhay were hot
and abheer will take advantage of abhay's distressed mood.
abhay is saying but yaah he will be manipulated by abheer and to some extent betrayed by his own.
hope he will forgive everyone.

do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg poco!!!!🤗
abheer is total evil😲... he plays with human's heart and😈... i hope t agrees to sambhav to save misha or misha would never be able to resist abheer😳 and that can end up in smthing really bad... as soon as pia have anushka's bracelet nothing is gonna happen to her and that is a really gd thing😊... abhiya part was superb😳... abhay is really tensed and he is soon gonna find out😲 ... i wonder how is he gonna react to this😕... i feel sad fr him😔... eagerly waitin fr the nxt part continue soon❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Interesting update👏,poor abhay😲, he can't recognize his feeling😕.bt now atleast he feel something😳.its good.bt I don't want him in depression😭.abhiya part was really lovely😛😳. After finding truth,will abhay forgive piya and other family member?😲.

Samisha,abhiya,chandeena and zeenia's meeting is reall interesting😊.yapii sam jealous😆 and worried.me too.abheer is really dangours vampire.he drinks supernaturals blood😲.bt how 😲? I mean other supernatural were that much weak in abheer 's against😲.will misha really safe after zeenia's magic😲.

Zeenia still think to flirt with abheer😆.you have said that sam kisses "t"😕🤢.plzzz don't do it😭.i can't digest it.b'coz I m samisha 's fan😊😳.i can't see this type of relationship between sam and "t"😕.you also said that piya's truth create rift between piya and misha😲.bt our misha has sense of humour and she can deal with any situation😲.

Whatever I m waiting abhay's refusal to share sleep with matty anty😉😆.and also misha-panchi-kabir's fight😉.and plzzz more abhiya and samisha lovely part😳😳😉.

Thanks for update😊.

Update soon😊.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...really what is the point of having sam and zeenia in a vampire meeting?...abhay is trying to find out the truth...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Poco for this long awesome update.
Abheer. What a character! Not sure, what Zee is gonna do. Fir now it just looks impossible for Misha to resist Abheer. Sam's concern was so touchy. AbhIya were amazing.
I think Abheer will visit him in his most fragile statue.
Will be waiting for more.

Luv, Neha
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update!!! It completely rocked!! The Abhiya part was so passionate and then so sad!! You have shown all the feelings just perfectly and I could feel Abhay's confusion and Piya's pain... =( Is Abhay going to find out soon? He is going to be so hurt.. and I wonder how he will react to it...

And Abheer... 😲 He is just so god damn evil. He has the blood of all supernaturals.. He is the epitome of evil... 😛 But seriously... I hate this guy!

Sam's concern for Misha was just so touchy and it made go aww... I felt like he would rip Abheer's head off for being so close to Misha and kissing her.. 😛 Loved his concern...

Ooo.. the meeting.. I wonder why Sam and Zee need to go there!? Hmmm...

And the ending of the chapter sort of has left me confused me.. "A
nd leaving Piya's arm with a jerk , the old unrest rising in his eyes, he goes away. Piya looks at Zeenia who is standing with Misha near the car. And they both think the same thing….ANUSHKA!" Why were they thinking of Anush?? Hopefully my confusion will be cleared soon!

Anyways, continue soon!

Love
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow so sam stil luves mish and zeenia is stil going crazy over abheer totally crazy
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: elizaa


ABHEER!!!
nitz... U ACTUALLY GAVE BIRTH TO THIS CHARACTER????
like seriously dear.. after sam... u changed abhay completely... then u gave me zeenia!! sh is this character whis is just some other character, thenon imp one... but still so close to me.. i so cannot look at this ff without her... and sam ofcourse!!! u even made me like t.. even after she was being paired opp sam... and then made me like the whole *abhay forgetting piya* period..

In short, you are liking the way this FF is going , right? I guess its not even a FF anymore. It seems to have nothing to do with PKYEK anymore except the names and some fragments. Thank you so much for liking everyone in the story, Liz. They all are full of faults but you still like them and that says lot to me. I love giving Zeenia those lines. She is, like, never serious. 😆



am glad to be following this ff.. even after being busy, it pulls be bk to itself
and then aKKu keeps telling me bout it.. she so wants to discuss it, and is like- JAAOOO... COMMENT KARRO!!!!
so am here.. i cannot comment in 2 lines, so i rather comment after 2 3 parts due to lack of time.. forgivess maata poco!

ohk.. bk to abheer... sweetie, i can see wht a badass he is, but ive read this book (again coz of akku) and here, the lead is this bad.. mean.. heartless, and still, he just turns into a newleaf wen he falls for THAt girl.. its nt on the spot... he changes quite later.. so if abheer changes, am so in for abhisha.. and even if he doesnt... lol... am still ok with him at the moment...
each and every part of his i read.. just makes me grin.. tho I AM considered for mish.. but then she has sam and abhay to see to it tht she wont actually be hurting her self.. and again, i dnt think abheer mite go to an extent of killing her.. but am just a lil scared of him hurting her emotionally.. like- jus a lil..
after wht happened with sam, i dnt think she'd be all ok soon.. but then she still has sam as a friend na...
currently, ABHEER is the flavour of my month.. lol.. not evn sam

Liz, am myself traveling with Abheer and i suddenly feel that i have no control over this particular character. He seems to have a life of his own , a mind of his own and its going to be hard writing about him and writing him. I don't know whether he will change. He is , i don't know. I am still finding adjectives for him. Abheer doesn't kill people, physically. People just die for him. He is a hypnosis , a trance in the name of a vampire. I have no idea yet where Misha is going with him.

abheer actually has her.. calling her a lamb and getting away without her one liners?? he cant do nething to pia.. and he hates T?? lmao... she irritaates him?? lol..panchi kabeer and metz.. he is so bored looking at the way their life is goingconfused and SO NT INTERESTING.
and he likes zee like i do but he cant take a lot of zee at atime!!!
he is telling her everything.. he is so not playing the mysterious man ne more... and he isnt even scared of ne one!!
god!! am loving this man!
i like the confidence he has wen he says tht nothing is definate.. surely not hatred
god! am i mad.. i cant like a villian for my mish...
its all ur fault poco! u dont get to make VILLIANS so sexy

No, you are not mad. Abheer is flawless evil. He doesn't care about anyone and he ha no idea why people complicate their lives so much. Its easy for him - just get done what you want to be done. 😆

prr pr parrr.. i hate him calling her a toy

and abhiya... right now.. i so have no words to describe how well was the whole scene written.. i literally have no words coz after i was done with the part, i was still staring at my screen with no expressions on my face.. but just a feeling.. something magical.. sigh!


abhay is already screwed up coz of the memory lane.. and piya screwed it up all the more.. and the funniest was wen he went like- this kiss was just the preliums.. :P

Abhay is on a roll.He is no longer the genteel , sweet , mild vampire. There is a lot of aggression and density to him now. His character is evolving and Piya seriously doesn't know how to tackle him.

next with mish.. she is all scared and b4 calling abhay she cals up sam.. and is like - SAM! RED ALERT!! this girl is hilarious...
AND THEN THE POOR DOLL IS STILL NOT OUT OF THE SHOCK!! poco am so addicted to this again!!!
get me out of thisss..
and out of the blue MADAME ZEE GOES LIKE-if he wasnt this charming, itd be fun killing him..

hell yeah!! he is charming!! his charms have worked on me, and still am nt scared of wht worse he can do.. i knw tht he has no extent, but i choose not to see tht.. :P
poco!! idk if i shld love or hate u for making him!!
am so addicted again!!😳

You are addicted to Abheer, i think. Not this FF. 😆

and on the other hand am soo loving sam.. he is another adorable invention :))
he is so worried for mish... i always wanted to see him this way... :P
and then he want to get her neckdetoxed.. i wonder how long will this be for??

the ritual to save mish looks quite promising.. and in the next update we get to see anush right??
plz cont soon..
g2g and read this update all over again!! it was just amazing.

Sambhav ? Hmm... You are not going to like what he is going to do. Soon. The animal in him will cause devastation again and this time the mistake will be irreversible and scar both him and a certain someone for life.

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