AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 84

TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: Ritzie
Abheer is telling everything to Misha? He is no longer playing mysterious? He doesnt fear anybody, does he? You were right. He is evil or as you said Superevil. *sigh* these D sisters ki toh kismat hi kharab hai - ek ko Daksh mila aur doosri ko Abheer.

Pia and Abhay are too good. Poco, yeh Abhay ka memory-loss permanent kar do. He is better this way. I like him when he goes against what his mind tells him. Lolz. And the kiss is a good test to find out love truth and no Abhay desr you are not cheating on anybody when you lip-kiss the niece. Woh toh sirf test hai.o 😆

Abheer just plays and you can never tell what he will do next. He is SATANIC. But the irresistible kind as we shall see. Abhay will realize that he has kissed Piya before - he is a vampire and his instincts and radars are hypersensitive. He will be stunned that he doesn't remember being kissed by Piya. What fun! 😉

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: ilove99
it is awesome poco 👏lovely...but mish...what's her business with abheer?what does he want from her?
that was too... passionate abheer seems evil...very evil!!!
he wants to hurt abhay but why what the hell is his problem?

and how did he kill those dogs and served for others we a good example too know how evil is he but also a big flirt or he was just showing it off!

now i understand why that poor farmer was afraid?doesn't he have any soft thing left in him like damon had for elena?he seems to be same in evilness as damon
anyways i hope he will bring a good twist to the story ...

i wonder what will be sams reaction...jealous,angry,scared or what?is it true tht no one can compete him...well,sure abhay can but only when abhay knows about his powers!!!

i didn't understand the double abhay thing what is it?what do you mean by two abhay?

abhiya were on fire today!! poor pia how much she will tolerate...
abhay is rally changed he is blaming everything to pia
now i think pia will be singing -
mai karu to salla character dheela hai😆

but you have not wrote anything about anush from a long time what's happening to her?how is she?did the curse break?i am missing her!!!!

update soon poco...luv u and ur ff😉

Thanks honey. Abheer is INCOMPREHENSIBLE. So, i suggest just enjoy him. Don't try to understand him. Abheer is all powerful until Abhay finds the ring. Abhay-Piya are inseparable and it has been proven , right? 😳

Anushka is still in the underworld and she still hasn't found the mistress of spices.

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Ritika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Thank you. Its too early to get irritated by Abheer. Abhi takk bechaare ne kiya hi kya hai? He just got two dogs barbecued and see Misha came out alive and safe out of his den.😆...Abhay is a loose cannon, jab dimaag hi thikaane par nahiin hai to becharaa ky karega? And see he still gets to hug and kiss Piya. Ladke ki life set hai boss. 😉

Yeah, Poco, I know he hasn't done much, but I love dogs! I hate to see dogs get hurt. Here, a lot of times, there are commercials showing puppies that are being treated horribly to try to get people to pay them $20 every month to "help the animals." 😆 Haha, so true. Abhay loves one girl, gets her love and attention, and can "test" if the other girl likes him or not by kissing and hugging her to see if she responds. 😆

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Jyo.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#834

😊Poco!!!!! I lovvveeddd the updates! Abheer, he is sending shivers down my spine! What is he going to do to Misha! 😒 Please, don't make it something horrible! And seriously, Abheer is such a sicckkkooo! EWW! Hate his guts! 🤢

Oh, and the Abhay and Piya's scene in the locker room... what was that!? I mean, I loved it but what if Abhay get's to know everything!!!! Yikes, that will be a problem! Nevertheless, I loved that part the most.

Update soonish! 😊

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crazzy-girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

i looved it!!soo worth the wait!!every post of urs!!!!

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#836

waooo dear amazinggg👏
really luv abhiya scences...
godd it ws sooo nice.
reallly really luv d part.
m droolinggg on dis part dear.
luvd it so much that m reading it again nd again
plzzz pzzz😊 cnt wid nxt part soon,i jus cant w8 to read d nxt part ndd plzzz add me to ur pm list.
luv u
vritika

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Untitled001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Hey Poco it was a long and nice update. At first I was liking Abheer's character and I thought he would be a little charming and playful at the same time. But I am in with Misha... He is a sick vampire. I dont like him that much. I feel a little awkward saying this but could he be a little less radical or whatever? He will just scare of Misha... He is going to man handle her isnt he? Yeah I got it.

Abhay is really crossing the limits now. He will have the brain fever if he keeps this up. This kiss is going to torment him. Firstly he is going to attack Pia for kissing him back and then he will feel that he got carried away and think he is cheating on Metz... Gosh so complecated.

But it was beautifully written. By the way I need some advice for my story could you take a look? I wanted to talk to you a little.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1625721

just in case you dont have it. Thanks again.

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Priyanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Abheer is so like Sid!

i wish Abheer could be more witty and less sarcastic even though i love his dialogues!

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heena mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#839

poco last part was just mindblowing!!
abheer ...he is a jerk!!...bt d one wid d no veils!!...a shameless creature!!
gosh it seems like every one wants abhay..poor abhay!!😭

abhay piya-- locker room was set on fire in last part!!😉...getting restless for seeing abhay-piya reactions wen they wll come bck on earth frm their hard n passionate land of luv!!

tel me one thing did abheer use his powers on misha?? i mean d way he said " she wl come bck" n d rest of d thing???

luv
heena

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Sumana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#840

you know Pocu, it is sooo cute to watch Abhiya deeply in love but fighting angrily with each other, suddenly give in to passion ... uufff ... so loved this part 😍👏

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