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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anurag24t

Mindblowing update poco...i just hope abhay remember about piya being his soulmate.



Thank you. Abhay's heart knows that Piya is his soulmate, don't you think? 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ssshh

superb and thanks for long update👏😳.kabir-piya friendship is really admirable😳,i love kabir in ur ff😳,any girl will fell in love with him😳.i know he has to live with his identity bt i want to always helpful for abhiya😳😃.

i really enjoy zeenia😃 and her nautiness😉,bt i also miss anu😳.
abhiya's dance was romantic❤️😳,and sam-"t" dance was enjoyable bt i hope misha will be dance partner at the end😍.b'coz somehow its destiny of samisha😳.
i really love abhay's jealousy😆 and abhiya's fight🤣.lolz
why is abheer using misha😲?what will he do with her😲? for sam,its obvious reason to be worry.and what about samisha's chemistry if misha fell in love with aheer.
i don't know bt i feel that piya and misha has something special😕😊otherwise nobody has guts to face supernatural world without power😉😃.
again thanks for long update and awesome👏😃
update soon😃


Thank you. Kabir will always stand by Abhay and Piya , at least as long as he can. Abhay-Piya need to fight because we need a raw Abhay, Misha will not be Sam's dance partner. Sambhav and Misha are soulmates . As for Abheer , well, lets see how the character grows with Misha. Misha and Piya have no supernatural powers. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renuka1997

ur abhiya and kapi part was really good

pleeez add more abhiya part
pleeez pm me


Thank you. Next update will have a big AbhIya part. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice long awesome update pocooo!! ok...really intrigued about abheer now...mr green eyes?? oo...sexy...!!
abhay piya were too good man!! too good!!
and everytime i look at sam i feel sooo bad for him...he cant be with either girl as of now...neither T nor misha...its just saddening...
and the kabir piya exchange was cute! i loved the brotherly affection he showed for her...reallly sweet!
u knnow that 1 line angad said about all of them not being couples and 1 sided love...i feel so bad...although they may love each other they all have almost impossible love stories...sam cannot be with T, a vampire...Kabir, a vampire slayer, will have to choose his loyalties and thus being with anushka and supporting piya, abhay(a vampire) does not seem possible...
its just saddening...why poco why?! but i gues thats ur magic...u make evrything more real and more life like even in this supernatural story by making couples who dont always find a way to be together...just as in real life...
anyway, nice post poco! keep up the looonnggg updates!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

OMG Pocs...such an awsome amazing,mindblowing,emotion/passion filled chapter...Abhiya arr getting hotter day by day...Abhay has started falling gor Pia...i mean he was already...but now he is well on the path...T-Sam are amazing...it saddens to think that they have no future together...but then we don't always get what we want do we?...Poor Kabir...he so wants to have a normal life...I hate to think wat he will have to go thru now...and Panchi...sheis totally Daksh's puppet now...what hashe planned to do with her? You said they are star crossed lovers...which means they aren't going to end up together right?...well all d best to my Birdie...Misha is Mr.Green hunt...these supernzturals are really lavish...life size bouquet of 600roses...thats just Whoa!!!!...loved it very much Pocs...you have got me truly addictd to your ff...waiting for more


Thank you, sweetz. Even when T is gone, Sam will always hold her close. Kabir will have too make a choice. Do his duties as a slayer or bear the punishment. Daksh is basically going to use Pancchi for all his dirty work as you will soon see. Panchhi and Daksh will not end up together. Abheer is , well, dot dot dot. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

ress !!


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i just wrote a BIG comment & pressed the backspace key. -.- F*L.

anyway, im too lazy to write it all over again..but. yeah. for you. i will. i LOVE kabir here! he's so awesome. i see a lot of tyler in him, to be honest. as in, the only difference is that he couldn't escape his fate..will kabir be able to? could he control the slayer inside him? if not, he'd be a lot like T, controlled by what he is; losing all his humanity slowly? though, i love the way his mind was everywhere but on anushka's - erm, zeenia's - clothes when he was dancing with her. she is toh totally fida over him. 😆

Kabir has a lot of Tyler in him but Kabir is braver and he knows what he wants and what he is going too do. He will be nothing like T. Zeenia is driving him up the wall but lets see for how long he cannot figure out that his Anushka is not around. 😆

speaking of t, i love t & sam. i love how they're like a distant dream. star-crossed. intense! <3 carler are my favourite in TVD and they so remind me of 'em. i especially loved em in this part - it really gets to you when people like T or Kabir are happy! =]

T is perhaps the life changing experience that is softening Sam.He is beginning to care about people, think about other things than being a Chief and preparing for Abhay's long awaited funeral. He is finding the human being inside him again. And when T goes away , she will still leave the human being inside him behind. 😳



abhiya were awesome. i love how everyone - including mac - can read the possessive inside abhay for pia except him. and he's all wicked trying to get over whatever he feels for maithali's doppleganger. a special mention to how pia handles all of this - she doesn't cry in a corner, she fights for her love, sticks with her love, believes in HIS love when he has forgotten everything about it. 😳

Abhay is trying to translate all his emotional frustration into a wicked havoc on Piya . Or maybe he is trying to find out what Piya feels. Piya is feisty and aggressive but Abhay is her weakness. That might just break her if Abhay takes this too far just to wash off the guilt of cheating on Maithli. 😡


coming to my favourite part, poco, i need some answers. what does abheer want to do with misha? is it .. erm, another daksh-panchi replica? - will he sleep with her or something? anyway, i LOVED this update. misha is all pia-o-fied, LOL. but, i really loved how she was full on obsessed with him!

Abheer is cracking his entry into the Dobriyaal world and then the Raichand world through Misha. From Misha to the Dobriyaal family , from them to Piya and others and ultimately at Abhay's neck. He is going to spread like a cancer . Abheer's long term goal is to have an enslaved Abhay with the power of the ring who will live and die by Abheer's wishes. Abheer will hold everything Abhay loves at ransom.

Abheer does not plan to sleep with Misha or do nay dirty stuff with her. But Misha and Abheer will get drawn into a whirlpool where they both will collide against their own will. Unlike Sam, Abheer does not believe in rules or holding back. No rules or laws of the vampire world bind him as he is a vagabond. 😆



continue SOON. && i just wrote the comment AGAIN. -.-

THANK YOU HONEY! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
wohaa poco i am in my dreams i guess, such a long update, seriously it ws worth reading many times... and it deserve big comment

kabeer and pia' convo was freaking awesme... so kabeer still loves pia and care for her... this showed that he still have feelings for her and may be he dont accept the fact but from his deep and bottom of heart he wants pia and abhay to end up together and pia showed so much confidence for her love abhay dat made kabeer to think something impossible to be possible... and kabeer is missing anush very badly... but this zeenia had made me to forget hw was anush like abhay said once but now i can remember anush through the memories of kabeer... and it is very sweet to see anush through his memories...

Misha, i m in love wid d green eye character already and i dont know, what will happen after his real entry and this guy seems to be a guy who is evil but a grl will still love to die for him and misha's reaction after waking up and getting determined to find the guy was so misha... and m getting lil flavour of Daksh in that guy i mean sending flowers and all and misha goin to his house and welcoming herself ws so perfect that i can even imagined s whole scene running into my eyes... but that happens with every scene but it ws special for me... now seriously m craving for that guy to come

and now Abhiya, dey really raised d temp of there ff, aww abhay getting notty and den sam so gr8 comments dat adding real fun to abhiya was superb, it really seemed like some college scene as in college we pass comments on others and den njoy some kind of fun... and i really adore abhay when he gets jealous and i want mac to get a punch as it will be funny to read oops watch(as i can see every scene) and pia passing one up look was so cute... i love dat scene alot

and now samta(sam abd t) i like dere chemistry alot, i know some people dont like dem as couple but i am really liking dem and just hope for happy ending for dem and i wud love to see dere passionate dance... and what a answer to natty getting irritated cz of abhiya closeness and den sam and t also giving her proper answer...

panchi i am feeling bad for her plz end her sufferings. This girl has already gone through so much

p.s- missing anu... cant we have tamu and zee at same point of tym


poco i love having surprise, so keep giving surprises with such long and wonderful updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats Poco for completing 100 pages in your Book II👏⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

Didi, it just striked me abt what abheer wrote "REMEMBER ME FOR THE ROSES" uhhh, have you read the ghostly story"Remember the roses"?? It's my fav n i think you wrote that line from there. Plz reply


Baby, i have not heard of this story but i will definitely like to read it. Can you gimme the link if it is on net? 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sonu.p

nice long awesome update pocooo!! ok...really intrigued about abheer now...mr green eyes?? oo...sexy...!!

abhay piya were too good man!! too good!!
and everytime i look at sam i feel sooo bad for him...he cant be with either girl as of now...neither T nor misha...its just saddening...
and the kabir piya exchange was cute! i loved the brotherly affection he showed for her...reallly sweet!
u knnow that 1 line angad said about all of them not being couples and 1 sided love...i feel so bad...although they may love each other they all have almost impossible love stories...sam cannot be with T, a vampire...Kabir, a vampire slayer, will have to choose his loyalties and thus being with anushka and supporting piya, abhay(a vampire) does not seem possible...
its just saddening...why poco why?! but i gues thats ur magic...u make evrything more real and more life like even in this supernatural story by making couples who dont always find a way to be together...just as in real life...
anyway, nice post poco! keep up the looonnggg updates!! :)


Thank you !😊...Abheer is S.E.X.Y. 😉...Angad actually summed up the whole love angle of the entire story. Some will meet and some will just wilt away but everyone will have an eventful journey. I am just grateful that you are still reading my FF. 😳
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