AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 72

Originally posted by: katiehiwatari

nice update.. i wish u cud be longer.. waiting eagerly for yr next update dear..!!! Wel finally Abheer came to light.. yippee..!!

Originally posted by: elizaa

haww poco... the last update was so so tiny😒

anyway.. trying to review b4 10 other parts of urs😆

and t strt with kabeer and sam's convo.. lol.. al i cld imagine was the hotness in the boys restroom :P and to add up to the hotness, we had madame zeenia there..lol.. i see tyler in kabeer at the moment.. poor soul doesnt want all of this, but surely he wont be able to do anything about it.. i just hope he keeps up to his instincts.. and tries to keep out of the supernatural world.. i wonder if he will ever knw tht its not anush.. is zee..

and wth is zee up to?😆 fainting right in his arms? whts her plan?😆

the whole pia and chand's scene was so light and peaceful unless abhay entered and left///

i like the 2 of them together too... lately chand is extra sweet to pia, and am liking that..

metz.. nvm.. i dont like her anymore.. she bores me🥱.. wasnt she supposed to be witchy and witty both?

and wer is natz.. i liked her.. she has disappeared all of a sudden..

since the last update, i was eagerly waiting for abheer to arrive.. am so glad he is here.. i have this sudden liking towards grey characters.. at a point evil too.. 😆

i hated myself for being okay if mish ends up with abheer instead.. but no... now a like, NO! we need to have sam and mish ending up together/// and for the moment, abheer can help making sam jealous..😉 its his turn to feel tht way now.. and then helpless, cozz he cannot do nething to abheer :P

any hints to wht u mite make him do?😳

anyway.. it was too short.. so plz cont soon!! 😛

Originally posted by: ssshh

nice update😊,bt its short😕.finally abheer enter😊 ..bt.how could anu fall in love with evil abheer?😲what will abheer do with misha😕?

misha already know somthing about abheer😲. right..

.now sam will do jealousy job😆,i can feel it😉😉.

how could abheer become enemy of his own brother😲😕?

update soon😊.

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

great one abheer is upto something and sam is going to be maha pissed

hehhe now abhay in jaleous enviorment as bioth abhay and sam will be JJJ

do continue

bye sumi

Originally posted by: N_NS

Gr8 update di!!! Why is Abhay so scared of Abheer??? And what turned the two bros into enemies???
Abheer is finally in the frame but is he as evil as everyone's declaring??? And why is Misha the first one to meet him???? She's safe, isn't she??? Please tell me, I don't want her to get hurt...
And plz post a longer update next time...
Love,
Nidhi 😊 🤗

Originally posted by: sonu.p

wow!! just read ur last 3 updates in one go! awesome! awesome! awesome! who is this handsome hunk??!!! and what was that dream all about?!! ok im so confused and sooo intrigued right now! continue soon!!

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

OMG! this one was like amazing!!!

Loved the harry potter effect! 😉

actually i want you to show anush's struggle in the spirit world if you could! please! Pretty, frosty please with cherry on the top!

and well i might not want an abheer in my life, but that sure can't stop me from drooling over a hot bad guy! (emerald eyes are my weakness, long story!)

Love you nitzie for this amazing story!!!

*jhappies te pappies*

Luv,

Pree

P.S. i know my longest reply in like god knows how long. suddenly had time at hand cos i'm waiting for my silly slow internet to process the result of my mock! But after 22nd of this month, i'm all yours! 😛 You'll get very very very long replies pakka!

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Wah Bhai Wah...Kya entry maari hain Abheer ne...he sure brings along with an auraof danger ...which means we get lots of exciting pages to read...yippeee...and emarald green eyes *drooling*...No wonder Misha will get encaptured by him...he sure knows to get his way...he doesn't mind the cost he has to pay...a very intersting character Poco...Abhay is sure unhinged and considering this guys entry he has reason too...the storyis getting far more spicier Pocs...lovong it even more...the harry potter line was superb...waiting eaaagerly

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Thank you. Liz😃. Kabir is determined that he doesn't want to be a slayer but he cannot fight his destiny. Zee fainted in Kabir's arms to fool the professor as you will see. Kabir will not know that its Zeenia , not Anushka for sometime. Chaand and Haseena care about Piya. Natz comes when the bitchiness has to come, you will see her very soon. As for who Misha ends up with, we will see. I want you to see Misha's interaction and her relationship with both Abheer and Sam . Yes, Sam and Misha are soulmates but do you always get to be with your soulmate?