AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 70

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg, pocooo, i can't wait!! 😡 hurry up. can't wait for abheer! i like him already, LOL. abheer invades misha & abhay's dreams? wow. kapi! yay. jealous abhay! double yay. time for sam to get jealous. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!!!😊
just owesum update and precap as i predicted. u write so well poco and u describe the emotions of every character so well . i am seriously in love with ur ff😃. no other words to praise it👏. eagerly waitin fr nxt update and i would just love to see abhay jealous seeing pia talk to kabir.😳 eagerly waitin to see the character of abheer and how he turns out to be... plzzz continue soon...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Abhay's Bedroom, Raichand Mansion.

Abhay is walking through a dark pathway in a jungle , wounded , scared , lost and his abdomen bleeding. It's a full moon night and the trees swaying to the wind are singing a ghoulish rhythm that seems to be mourning Abhay's condition. Abhay is looking around for something like a madman and just then , he sees a tall masculine figure , shrouded in a black cloak , standing at a distance –the horse neighing restlessly. Abhay , drenched in his own blood goes to him and a pair of deep emerald green eyes look down at him from under the cloak. Abhay peers at his face and his eyes go wide open as he sees the aquiline nose and the soft mouth widening in a sneer. The man gives out his hand to Abhay .

Man : Come away with me, Abhay. To the end of the world.

Abhay : Who are you….

Man ( laughs ): You know me. I thought you must have been missing me.

And the man removes his cloak….

Abhay wakes up with a start and he is so shocked that his own scream does not escape his throat. He can feel his breath running faster than his body can function and he is soaked in sweat.

Abhay ( throwing off the covers and getting off the bed )- What was that…. I didn't see what I saw! It … It is impossible . It just… c-can't be.

Totally shocked by his nightmare and his fete going cold , Abhay rushes to the bathroom and getting out of his night clothes, he just stands under the shower – the water running down his body and calming his nerves. Abhay just cannot get those green eyes and that soft mouth out of his head.

Abhay ( alarmed )- After all these years, suddenly. What are you upto?...Invading my dreams…. What could be running in his head! …..

As Abhay puts his palms on the cold marble wall, as the water washes off his anxiety , his eyes fly open at the sight of something on his knuckles. It's a long ugly gash and its bleeding.

Abhay ( looking at his palm horrified )- This was…. This was in my nightmare! ..How ……

Abhay's jaw tightens as he angrily heals his own wound and turns off the water. He wipes his face and looks t himself in the mirror.

Abhay ( feeling something sink inside him)- This can't be happening to me……..this can't be happening at all……

Abhay just covers his face and slides down to the floor , against the cold wall.

Lonely Road, En Route to Dobriyaal House.

Misha is whistling and driving , with her windows rolled down and smelling the pines , her gorgeous peach cheeks glowing in the pink of nature. Suddenly , she hears lightening and thunderbolt . And before she can even take in this sudden change in the weather , it starts raining cats and dogs .

Misha ( pulling the brakes and drawing the car aside )- UGHS! And double ughs! From where did this rain start? It was a full moon night with nice pine breeze and BOOM! Harry Potter drew out his magic wand and opened the water tankers? ???????????????GRR! …..( rolling up the windows )…. Its almost like a cloud burst and all I can see is WATER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She pulls out her cellphone and dials her father's number.

Misha ( relieved when Madhu picks the call )- MOMMY! Your daughter will be late by an hour or so because I am stuck in this waterfall of a rain!...what? Its just drizzling there? No Mommy! I am not in a different climatic zone. Stop kidding. …..yeah, I am sitting cozy in my car , so don't send an army of drivers and cars to fetch me. ….yeah . Ciao in an hour or so and don't worry , I am not going to open car doors to animals and ghosts….hahahaha! Love you!

Misha ends the call and sits waiting for the rain to calm down , so that she can safely drive home.

Misha is about to doze off , when she suddenly sees a pair of headlights – zig-zag headlights approaching from the other end of the road. Misha opens her eyes and peers.

Misha (yawning)- What kind of a fool is this person? Driving in this freakin' waterfall and that too on this slippery road! People, I tell you!

As Misha looks on , her almond doe eyes have a sudden rise of alarm as she sees that the approaching car , is actually out of control and is rambling all over the road. Infact , it could hit Misha's standing car off the road with that kind of force.

Misha ( screams) – STOPPP!

Misha immediately gets off the car and rolls off to the other side of the road, catching onto a tree and as she watches in horror as the wild car bangs into her standing car and then , swerving off the road , rams into the same tree that Misha is holding. Misha hugs the tree and shutting her eyes, she screams her lungs out. The rain stops and everything turns still. The door of the driver's seat is thrown open. A tall, broad and well-built masculine figure gets down from the car. There are gashes on his arms , his neck and one side of his face. The blood is running down but he seems least bit affected. Misha can feel that she is fainting and her vision fading. She can hazily see a man walking towards her – blue denims, a black V-neck T, powerful-looking. As he bends over her, putting a gentle hand on her head , Misha sees a set of deep emerald pools that one could drown in looking down at her – a soft mouth on a rigid jaw moving as if to ask her something. She cannot hear what he is asking her. The last visual that she remembers is of a strong steely arm with a lion's growling face tattooed on it, sliding under her waist and the other under her legs.

Misha feels her body lifted off the ground and then, her swimming head comes to rest on a warm but sturdy chest……As soon as her soft head finds rest , she goes off to sleep cocooned on a man's chest as his arms engulf her fragile feminine form…….

TO BE CONTINUED TOMORROW ITTSELF…. HAHA.

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Posted: 13 years ago
So, finally, the most awaited, tall dark and handsome man made his appearance - two appearances and that too full of blood. Abhay and his own. It is getting exciting now. Poco, it is getting nail-biting. Will wait for the next update,
Edited by Ritzie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res! so short. :(

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awesome update, poco. i'm sorta confused, though. why is everyone so terrified of abheer? it's not like he's the most powerful vampire, right? i mean..abhay's the most powerful vampire & that's why sam and everyone want him. abhay could fight off abheer that way..he should. is it because he doesn't know yet that he's stronger? ah, anyway, i loved the dream. woah, green eyes! <3

loved the other part. lol, misha always makes me smile. she's so.. erm, i won't say innocent, she's just so carefree despite being packed into a world of supernaturals. i love the way you described that abheer picking misha off scene. <3 it was really .. erm, intense? idk, i'm liking abheer already. i know i shouldn't but.. well.

continue soon! .. + a longer update, please? 😳
Edited by _Akanksha_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Not fair didi! Such a small part. Plz continue soon. Waiting eagerly for more of abheer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, Poco! Ummm... since you said, and I quote, "Zeenia is a keeper , just an energy - there are no feelings," and before you said that Kabir is going to end up with whoever loves him, Kabir is going to end up with Anushka! Right? Are you gonna get mad because I revealed it to everyone? Oh well...

Abhay's nightmare was Abheer, right? I wonder what his brother did to make them become enemies... And I wonder why Abhay is scared of him... Abheer is finally here! Finally! 🤗 Misha's tall, dark, and handsome stranger is going to make Sam sooo jealous! 😆 But why would Abheer purposely do that? Why would he put himself in danger just to get to Misha. I mean, knowing these supernaturals, it couldn't have been an accident.

Poco, I know you're gonna update quickly, but I want you to update right now. I'm spoiled, aren't I? 😆 Hopefully, the next update will be longer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.. i wish u cud be longer.. waiting eagerly for yr next update dear..!!! Wel finally Abheer came to light.. yippee..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
haww poco... the last update was so so tiny😒
anyway.. trying to review b4 10 other parts of urs😆
and t strt with kabeer and sam's convo.. lol.. al i cld imagine was the hotness in the boys restroom :P and to add up to the hotness, we had madame zeenia there..lol.. i see tyler in kabeer at the moment.. poor soul doesnt want all of this, but surely he wont be able to do anything about it.. i just hope he keeps up to his instincts.. and tries to keep out of the supernatural world.. i wonder if he will ever knw tht its not anush.. is zee..
and wth is zee up to?😆 fainting right in his arms? whts her plan?😆
the whole pia and chand's scene was so light and peaceful unless abhay entered and left///
i like the 2 of them together too... lately chand is extra sweet to pia, and am liking that..
metz.. nvm.. i dont like her anymore.. she bores me🥱.. wasnt she supposed to be witchy and witty both?
and wer is natz.. i liked her.. she has disappeared all of a sudden..
since the last update, i was eagerly waiting for abheer to arrive.. am so glad he is here.. i have this sudden liking towards grey characters.. at a point evil too.. 😆
i hated myself for being okay if mish ends up with abheer instead.. but no... now a like, NO! we need to have sam and mish ending up together/// and for the moment, abheer can help making sam jealous..😉 its his turn to feel tht way now.. and then helpless, cozz he cannot do nething to abheer :P
any hints to wht u mite make him do?😳
anyway.. it was too short.. so plz cont soon!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update😊,bt its short😕.finally abheer enter😊 ..bt.how could anu fall in love with evil abheer?😲what will abheer do with misha😕?
misha already know somthing about abheer😲. right..
.now sam will do jealousy job😆,i can feel it😉😉.
how could abheer become enemy of his own brother😲😕?
update soon😊.
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