AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 6

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

Great update! Why was it in two parts though? Anyways:

For the chappie:

Aww. Poor Danish. He wasn't all that bad in this FF, so I don't think he deserves all this pain and suffering as much as the Danish in the show deserves it. He has to do what Natasha tells him to do or else he will die. I hate Natasha! 😡She doesn't feel any guilt for what she has just told Danish to do. Turn Kabir?😡 If he could have turned Kabir, then he would have been a Bolsh, right? That would have strengthened the Bolsh's. And that would have made Anushka a little softer on them, because of Kabir? Doubt about his bloodline? What does that mean? And the humanity in T is leaving. 😒 The Bolsh blood is finally getting to her, and at the worst time. But at least Sam is there to keep her from going totally psycho. Abhay has some sort of sixth sense! I can't imagine what it will to Piya when his memories of her are erased. But, like you said, Anushka and erase his memories, but not what his heart is feeling. So, this way, I think Piya will learn the depth of his feelings for her. Since his heart won't allow him to forget that he loves her, even though his memories are erased, that means he loves her a lot, right? Yay! T is telling Sam to be with Misha! But he doesn't listen to her. I wish he would choose Misha, but it won't happen, and by the time he sees that he wants to be with Misha, it will be too late. I'm not saying that he can't choose T, I'm just saying that I don't want him to. When he chooses between Misha and T, he will pick T, because they over the fact that they are both monsters, and also, he thinks that Misha hates him. The scene with Anushka and Abhay was great. 😃 It was like they are really siblings; they feel like they hate each other at times, but they always love each other. I know I feel that way about my brother. He's as annoying as hell, but I love him anyways. (Don't tell him I said that though. 😆) But now I feel sad again, about Anushka breaking AbhiYa up. She should try to find some other way to deal with Maithli. So I'm glad that she's gonna come back and give them all she's got! And I loved the Abhay-Piya-Anushka hug at the end. She is trying not to let the guilt of this overcome her, because, like she said, if something happens to her, then Piya is left unprotected. And she can't let anything happen to Piya, she means everything to Abhay; after so long, he has found someone that means the world to him, and it is hard for her to do this to him, take all this happiness away from him.

For the precap:

At the bonfire, will they tell legends and stuff, like in Eclipse? Well, at least one person gets to keep their best moment! Why am I not surprised that Misha and Sam get into an argument? I am surprised that Misha let him get this close to her, though. It's a good thing that Sam is there to cheer T up. She isn't all that bad that she deserves to live an existence full of misery. Chand and Haseena aare back! I'm finding that I don't hate them as much as I do in the show, but that's the same with a lot of characters. And again with his sixth sense, he can tell they are hiding something from him. Has Piya rubbed off on him? 😆 I didn't know that Pancchi could play piano! I can too! Was the piano expensive? KABIR KISSES ANUSHKA? That was the biggest surprise of my life! I didn't think he had it in him!

Originally posted by: Ritz93

Hey Pocu - First of all - congrats on finishing one book starting another and having loyal fans like us to follow you in all your books. 😳

Awesome updates with a treat of two updates in a single shot. Sone par suhaga😆. I am not writing in details about these updates as I am feeling sad for the future after reading them. I know you have been telling us that these are only a foundation for the good things in future but I am really waiting for something positive to happen soon.

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Sam dances with both - Misha and T? There's one lucky guy! 😆 Misha actually dances with him, without having a fit n everything!? Wow. 😃 Aw, the best and the last, to be precise, Pia. 😔 Kabir kisses Anushka!? 😲 Don't tell me Anu changes him into a frog after that and he's labelled as the desi frog prince in town! 😆 Crazy ideas! 😆 OO .. Daksh is so NOT like Sid at all. Still, me likes. 😃

Daksh's House

Panchhi could hardly sit straight on the settee as the butler served her a black coffee with a plum cake slice. Her head had been reeling ever since she saw that spectacle in the attic on the first floor. Her lips quivering, her eyes restless and her hand movements nervous and strained , Pancchi couldn't get that beautiful but haunting image of Haseena's painting out of her mind. For heaven's sake! Haseena's painting? In Daksh's attic? And that too in a period costume? What was up? Pancchi looked at the palm of her right hand which she had cut with those weird knives. What were they? She had never seen stuff like that in her entire life. Why did Daksh keep such strange and weird knives , daggers and javelins in his house ' tied in threads and engraved with what she'd call 'tribal symbols'. Phew. When Pancchi had come down to dinner yesterday , a calm and unruffled Daksh , reading through a business journal and forking his salad had asked her what happened to her hand. Pancchi had hurriedly told him that she had cut herself against the glass in the bathroom. Daksh had stopped forking the salad and looked at her with those sharp , penetrating 'Daksh' eyes. With an amused grin on his face and his lips curling up in a sneer , he had told her that there was nothing in that bathroom that would cut her hand like this. Nothing at all. He didn't push her or ask her again what she had done to herself. He just told her matter-of-factly that she should not be prying too much around the house. "This house and me ' we are strange.People get lost in us and they never find their way back". Pancchi still remembered that faraway look in his eyes that she had seen in his eyes as he warned her subtly. They had finished the rest of the dinner in silence and that was when Pancchi realized that there should be no silence between the two of them ' it highlighted something pregnant between them , at least from Pancchi's side. No, the feelings that this labyrinth of a man stirred in her were not emotional ' they were something else and Pancchi literally had to keep her fists balled everytime he brushed past her.

And today ,she was again sitting in his house. Daksh had told her to come to his house, instead of the office , once again. No, it was not about the upcoming housewarming party that Pancchi was going insane preparing for. It was about a personal meeting with an architect who wanted to show them the plans for the construction of the new wing at Mount College. Daksh wanted it his way and he was not too happy with the job that the architect had done. So, before showing them to everyone at the office , he wanted some changes and sought Pancchi's advice as she was the leader of the student body and whatever decisions were being taken for the college , she had a say in them. Daksh was getting ready , the butler had told her and he would be down in about 20 minutes. Pancchi looked at her watch again. There was still an hour before the architect showed up. Panchhi's eyes kept darting back to the top of the staircase , as she expected Daksh to show up any moment. She was actually looking forward to seeing him. He would come down , rolling his sleeves upto his elbows, adjust his wrist watch , touch the bridge of his nose in that boyish manner which Pancchi thought was incredibly sexy. Daksh conjured this image of a royal stately man who lived on a palace on his own terms.

Pancchi ( slapping the back of her head )- I need to stop coming to his house and' ( her mind suddenly pained by Danish's thoughts )'. And I ' I cannot look at a man like that again. No. No. Daksh is my employer , a trustee with whom am working for the benefit of the college. Pancchi , stop this.

But Panchhi looked really troubled with all this pressure that this new attraction was causing her. Just then, she spotted a classic grand pianoforte kept at a platform in a corner . It was beautiful . Pancchi had noticed it yesterday when she had come to Daksh's house for the first time but yesterday she had been in a frenzy getting the plans for the party in place. A small smile spread across Pancchi's face as she got up and went to the piano. Her fair fingers moved to the keys and she ran them slowly over the keyboard , creating a resounding musical sound. This piano was such a beautiful artwork with all the gold enameling on a white surface that she couldn't figure out. It did look like an antique or maybe it was just made that way. Daksh's taste was what you call impeccable. Pancchi sat down on the stool and put her fingers on the black and white keys ' but wait. This piano was kind of complicated , not like the one which she had at school. Panchhi tried to make music out of it but she just couldn't get the notes right.

Suddenly , a voice whispered into her ear from behind , startling her and giving her goosebumps. It was Daksh and he put his hands on her on the piano.

Daksh ( in a soft unsettling voice which kind of make women weak in the knees )- Ever heard the word inharmonicity?

Pancchi ( looking at his fingers over her hands and how they were melting under his touch)- N-No.

Daksh removes his hand and makes some adjustments on the pianoforte and looks down at Panchhi who actually wants to push Daksh away and run out of his house at this very moment. He was so close to her that his chest was pressed against her back ' and that signature fragrance he wore of vanilla and mild sandalwood was making her so dizzy and fuzzy in the head that Pancchi found his physicality overpowering. Pancchi looked down immediately , turning beetroot in the face. She couldn't let Daksh look into her eyes and find her secret. No.

Daksh ( calmly)- Pianos with shorter and thicker strings, i.e. small pianos with short string scales, have more inharmonicity. The greater the inharmonicity, the more the ear perceives it as harshness of tone.Understand ? Try playing it now. You will get the sound right.

Pancchi draws a breath in and tries to get up but Daksh makes her sit back by holding her shoulders down. Pancchi can feel her heart coming to her mouth. This is insane! How can I feel this way about a man whom I have known just for a few weeks! Wait a minute! I don't even know him. And.. and' these feelings are not emotional. They are CARNAL. I am physically attracted to him and to this degree? Me of all the people? Pancchi Dobriyaal? Am I not supposed to be a sensible and controlled individual.

Daksh ( taps her on her shoulder )- Miss.Dobriyaal? What's wrong?

Pancchi ( getting her senses back )- I ' I don't want to play it, Sir. The architect will come any moment now.

Daksh notices that her hands are trembling on the pianoforte and he narrows his eyes brows at head. He cannot see her face as she is sitting and he is standing behind her. He takes her hands in his and presses her fingers. They stop trembling and Pancchi folds her fingers, feeling a current run through her body.

Daksh (holding her by her fingers) - Are you unwell?

Pancchi ( takes her hands away from his and puts them back on the piano )- No Sir. I am fine.

Daksh ( grins )- Then, I guess I just scare the living daylights out of you , eh?

Pancchi ( instantly )- Yes!

Daksh bends down and looks at her face and Panchhi looks up at him hesitantly. Daksh has a deep look in his eyes and his eyebrows are knitted. Panchhi keeps blinking her eyes at him. It was a strange thing with Daksh, Pancchi thought. The closer you looked at him, the better he looked and how was it possible to be so devastatingly sexy when you are not conventionally handsome? Maybe it was his eyes, or that jaw of his or the way his lips curved , it was hard to tell. Daksh didn't say anything. He looked at her face and then, stood straight up. Pancchi released her breath that was caught up in her throat.

Daksh ( turning away )- Its good in a way if you are scared of me. It will save me a lot of trouble.

Pancchi ( taken aback )- As in?

Daksh ' Nothing.

Just then, Daksh's cellphone rang and he excused himself to take the call. As soon as Daksh was out of her sight , Pancchi's scattered bundle of nerves scattered further and she banged her hand on the cover of the piano.

Pancchi ( frustrated )- DAMN ME! I need to check into a rehab clinic. Why the hell am I behaving so abnormal. It seems like I exchanged my soul with Ruhi and T! Daksh? '.I mean, DAKSH?

Panchhi holds her head and looks down. She sees that as she banged the piano , she pushed a slim folder of paper down and now, papers lay scattered at her feet. She narrows her eye brows and picks up the papers. She sees that they are music notes. Pancchi's face brightens as she runs her fingers over the paper. She puts the paper in front of her and tries to play the piece. As she starts playing the notes , she realizes that the music she is playing is stirring a haunting music that has a faraway depressing feel to it. Suddenly , the windows are flung open on their own without Pancchi realizing it and some black flowing human forms float in with their skeletal claw-like hands outstretched to get to Pancchi. At that very moment , the door of the study opens with a loud bang and Daksh comes running ' horrified and anxious. The shadows are about to reach Pancchi's neck when Daksh plucks her off the stool and shuts the piano with a loud bang. The shadows dissolve and the windows shut.

Daksh (shaking up a shocked Pancchi )- ARE YOU INSANE!.....What the hell do you think you were doing? How dare you play that music! '( looks at the fluttering music notebook)'. You touched my notebook?

Pancchi is stunned at this reaction from Daksh and she feels his fingers as iron nails on her arms. She has never seen him like this. His eyes look like erupting volcanoes and his face is a vision of hell. Yes, Daksh was furious enough to strangle Pancchi at the moment.

Pancchi (tears springing in her eyes as she can feel her arms going numb )- Sir''I'

Daksh pulls her close and grabbing her head between his hands , he forces her to look into his eyes , his hot angry breath snarling in her terrified face.

Daksh ( snarls )- Don't. You. Ever. Touch. Anything. In . My. House. Again. You understand me?... (almost touches her nose with his )'..UNDERSTAND?

Pancchi nods , trying hard not to cry but she is. Daksh releases her with a jerk and runs a disturbed hand through his hair to settle his temper. He points towards the main door of the house.

Daksh ( still simmering )- OUT. Get out of my house right now!

Pancchi says nothing and picking her bag , she runs out of Daksh's house.

Woods , Irugarh.

Abhay looked pointedly and sharply at Chaand and Haseena as they stood in front of him, putting up a strong front and looking at him gravely. Piya, Sambhav, Misha and Tracker were at the village , winding up the last day of the social activity project. Abhay was there too when he had got Chaand's call. They wanted to see him right now ' plain and simple. Abhay didn't ask any whys and whats. Chaand and Haseena were not his parents but at the same time , no matter how much he fought with them or argued with them , he could go to the end of the world for them. All said and done, they had kept him alive in a way even if that meant a damned life of a blood sucking beast. Abhay came to see them immediately telling only Piya and Sam where he was headed.

Abhay ( scanning them )- It is not about, Piya. I know. You both are not here on urgency that I and Piya are in a relationship. You both knew it was coming and you could have waited until my return to Dehradun tomorrow. I cannot read your minds but give some credit to my common sense and my intelligence. Why are you both here?

Chaand and Haseena exchanged fleeting looks. Abhay could even turn mountains as transparent as water if he wished. Reading minds is one thing but he could read behaviours as well if you were not careful enough.

Chaand (calmly )- To see if you are okay or not, Abhay.

Abhay ( shrugs his shoulders )- Am cool. Look at me.And what should I be scared of? Sambhav and his clan cannot hurt me until that day of the celestial cycle and the attached conditions. Bolshvas are not around and I don't see any immediate danger from T or Natasha. Maithli is still walnuts about me. The rest I can just bite off and bake into a blood cake. So, what are you two worried about?

Haseena ( strictly )- Abhay, in this equation , we are the ones who ask questions. Not you. All we can tell you is that trouble is closing in. Just be alert'..( she holds Abhay by his shoulders)'.Be alert. Trust no one. That includes Sambhav. I can sense the brotherhood that you are forging with him but you can't forget who he is. T, Natasha , Maithli ' all of them are clear and present danger to you. And you and Piya getting into a relationship not only makes you vulnerable, it makes her open to attacks as well.

Abhay ( softer )- I can't leave Piya having come so far. I have no reason to live without her and she will die without me. You know that, mom. And no, I am not exaggerating.

Chaand ' Don't talk like an emotional fool, Abhay. You don't know where we are heading. You can't afford to have any weakness. And Piya is turning out to be your greatest weakness as though your human traits were not enough trouble already.

Abhay ( retorts)- Then , tell me where are we headed, father! Tell me. And Piya is not my weakness , she is the core strength that I have. You take her away from me, everything will go out of me.

Haseena ' And what if somebody takes you away from her and everything goes out of her? Either way , it means the same, doesn't it? Loving you is going to dry out the last drop of blood from her nimble human life. You want that?

Abhay ( emotionally )- As long as I am with her , I will protect her and nothing is going to happen to her. NOTHING! I know you both don't hate Piya, really and you want the best for me. But you need to trust me. I can handle everything and'. ( turns away from his parents )'.and I don't want to discuss this again. I will be alert and on guard , I promise. But as for Piya , she and I are one. Nobody can snatch her away from me. NOBODY.

Abhay walks away without looking back, his face a myriad of emotions. Chaand and Haseena exchange disturbed looks.

Chaand ( watching Abhay walk away )- Haseena, I know he will be able to protect himself , at least till the time of the prophecy manifestation comes. But everytime he said that he will protect Piya , I felt something sink inside me.

Haseena (nods)- He is too sure of the future and no matter how forceful and genuine his words were ' ( looks around )'. The universe did not echo them. Is that a sign?

Chaand ( intensely )- No. Not a sign. Too many signs for too many things that are building up.

TO BE CONTINUED'''.