hey thanks for liking the pictureschalo inke bahane you noticed my FFdo read some timewaise you can start anywherehope you will enjoyShruti
hey thanks for liking the pictureschalo inke bahane you noticed my FFdo read some timewaise you can start anywherehope you will enjoyShruti
Originally posted by: Lakshmi86
Hey Shruti,Actually i have read ur other two ff's telepathy and my mistake.........both,i thoroughly enjoy reading them and i comment also frequently............Telepathy was a great concept............you know what.........me and my mom, some kind telepathy mode,i mean, whenever she thinks of calling me, i dial her no and talk,recently it happened so..........so i said my mom, we dont need telephone to get connected, we are always connected via telepathy............he he........she laughed too............the most amazing part i like bot ur FF's is clarity.........you try to clarify the things, and i appreciate your patience..........i will definitely find time to read this FF too,coz i believe in reading from beginning, so shall not be commenting in between.......okay........take care
Originally posted by: Lakshmi86
Hi,
Hmmm Finally i read the FF!!!!!!!Honestly, looking at Title i thought, it would be some melo drama kind of story...............but was extremely surprised...........This FF was full of details,i will start from beginning................F\irstly, such a i mean such a huge familyand on that 2 huge families, ultra huge collobration,celebration of sisters marriage...........baap re it was so confusing..........Well, on Maaneet, i was really amused by the name changing session,they actually borrowed letters each others name and modified it..............amazing.............Loved the confusion in NT and Dev's engagement and conffession of Maaneet............Loved the boldness, irrestible passion............., romance...........amazing...................Loved the wonderful change in Geet after being married,loved the love game between two of dominance...........blush wala session toh unbeliebavle..............Geet never leaves her pride and she should not even...........Oh yaar she is so much talented..,...........wonderful person and amazing talent...............she is simply so unpredictable............loved the way she teased Dev...........amazing...............Hmmm so stopped at Sam's confusion............Well sam is a sweet person.............
Part 58
She cursed under her breath, Dev said: he is parking the car, I'll just call him
The girls as well as Sam turned to look at her
G: no, not actually, I mean (sighing in relief) my would be Jiju (turning towards Bade Papa and Maa and looking atthem with pleading eyes) hain na aunty
thanks for update.............................................. poor sameera................................... family ab lagta hai maaneet ki vaat lagaygi................................... maccn to dono taraf se mara gya..................... parents se bach bhi gya to madam geet sorry ke badle kya kargi pata nahi.................... loved it..................... so finally u r ok and start updating ........................................
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