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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

hey thanks for liking the pictures
chalo inke bahane you noticed my FF
do read some time
waise you can start anywhere
hope you will enjoy
Shruti

Hey Shruti,
Actually i have read ur other two ff's telepathy and my mistake.........both,
i thoroughly enjoy reading them and i comment also frequently............
Telepathy was a great concept............you know what.........
me and my mom, some kind telepathy mode,
i mean, whenever she thinks of calling me, i dial her no and talk,
recently it happened so..........so i said my mom, we dont need telephone to get connected, we are always connected via telepathy............he he........
she laughed too............
the most amazing part i like bot ur FF's is clarity.........
you try to clarify the things, and i appreciate your patience..........
i will definitely find time to read this FF too,
coz i believe in reading from beginning, so shall not be commenting in between.......okay........
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hey Shruti,
Actually i have read ur other two ff's telepathy and my mistake.........both,
i thoroughly enjoy reading them and i comment also frequently............
Telepathy was a great concept............you know what.........
me and my mom, some kind telepathy mode,
i mean, whenever she thinks of calling me, i dial her no and talk,
recently it happened so..........so i said my mom, we dont need telephone to get connected, we are always connected via telepathy............he he........
she laughed too............
the most amazing part i like bot ur FF's is clarity.........
you try to clarify the things, and i appreciate your patience..........
i will definitely find time to read this FF too,
coz i believe in reading from beginning, so shall not be commenting in between.......okay........
take care

hope you ENJOY it😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
well it will be fun if her friends find about that she is mrs Msk lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it n i think geet will not let anyone know her secret
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,
Hmmm Finally i read the FF!!!!!!!
Honestly, looking at Title i thought, it would be some melo drama kind of story...............but was extremely surprised...........
This FF was full of details,
i will start from beginning................
F\irstly, such a i mean such a huge family
and on that 2 huge families, ultra huge collobration,
celebration of sisters marriage...........baap re it was so confusing..........
Well, on Maaneet, i was really amused by the name changing session,they actually borrowed letters each others name and modified it..............amazing.............
Loved the confusion in NT and Dev's engagement and conffession of Maaneet............
Loved the boldness, irrestible passion............., romance...........amazing...................
Loved the wonderful change in Geet after being married,
loved the love game between two of dominance...........
blush wala session toh unbeliebavle..............
Geet never leaves her pride and she should not even...........
Oh yaar she is so much talented..,...........
wonderful person and amazing talent...............
she is simply so unpredictable............
loved the way she teased Dev...........amazing...............
Hmmm so stopped at Sam's confusion............
Well sam is a sweet person.............
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice n intrestin update!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hi,

Hmmm Finally i read the FF!!!!!!!
Honestly, looking at Title i thought, it would be some melo drama kind of story...............but was extremely surprised...........
This FF was full of details,
i will start from beginning................
F\irstly, such a i mean such a huge family
and on that 2 huge families, ultra huge collobration,
celebration of sisters marriage...........baap re it was so confusing..........
Well, on Maaneet, i was really amused by the name changing session,they actually borrowed letters each others name and modified it..............amazing.............
Loved the confusion in NT and Dev's engagement and conffession of Maaneet............
Loved the boldness, irrestible passion............., romance...........amazing...................
Loved the wonderful change in Geet after being married,
loved the love game between two of dominance...........
blush wala session toh unbeliebavle..............
Geet never leaves her pride and she should not even...........
Oh yaar she is so much talented..,...........
wonderful person and amazing talent...............
she is simply so unpredictable............
loved the way she teased Dev...........amazing...............
Hmmm so stopped at Sam's confusion............
Well sam is a sweet person.............

thank you
for reading and more thanks
on liking it
and yes Sam is a nice person
I firmly beleive that all humans are nice
all have two shades in some darker ones are prominent but that does not mean that they dont have the brighter side
Sam is nice till Geet does not cross her path
but I will make Sam adore Geet so much that she will not mind to loose Maan for her (though Maan was never hers, it was she who wanted to own him😆)
I hate stupid confusions
life is enough for that
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 58

She was very nervous just then Bade papa turned and said: are Maan kahan hai?

She cursed under her breath, Dev said: he is parking the car, I'll just call him

She grabbed the opportunity: Jiju, sir's car is there (pointing in the direction towards Mrignayani emporium)

The girls as well as Sam turned to look at her

S: Jiju, Geet Dev is your Jijaji

G: no, not actually, I mean (sighing in relief) my would be Jiju (turning towards Bade Papa and Maa and looking atthem with pleading eyes) hain na aunty

BM (got it and smiled): yea, bah…. Beta ji
Geet felt a huge burden lifting from her heart,
just then Maan and Dev came Dev had briefed Maan about what have happened and Sam was also there
M: hi, Sameera partying with students (he gave Geet an accusing look, like you did not tell me she was also here)
Geet shrugged and made a baby face
S: hi Maan, and am not partying just pasing by. Well you never said thet Geet's your relative
M (acting innocent): my relative? I did not get you/ how is hse my relative? (She is my life stupid)
S (confusingly): she is Dev's
BM: are Maan, Geet NT ki sister hain
M: oh like that, you mean Dev ki hone waali saali, Geet you never mentioned NT
G: as if you ever mentioned Dev?
S: Geet, he is elder to you, always speak politely to your elders (sternly)
G (her stomach was hurting she wanted to explode laughing): sorry Madam
S: not to me, apologise to him
G: sorry sir (looking cunningly at him)
M (mar gaya ab is sorry ka badla le kar rahegi): it's ok, BTW what are you all doing here
Pinky: Sir, just freshening before the exam (drooling at him,
just wanted to touch him)
M: cool, you all might have watched some stupid English movie (looking at Geet, and you said you don't prefer English movies)
G (as if I have any choice with these girls)
Neha: no, sir it was a cute movie, sense and sensibility
G (gave another accusing look, move out Maan before these girls eat you with their eyes)
Lipi: wow Geet these hot men are your relatives (in Geet's ears)
G: yes, dear life's tough with hot men around
L: what?
G; nothing Dear
N: hey Geet introduction kara de na
G; ok, jiju meet my batchies, she introduced them, and girls this is my future Jijaji, Brother in law, Dev Khurana, my sister NT's fianc and his father Prarambha and mother Prabha.
N: us hotties ka intro
G (khud pooch le): and girls he is tha Maan singh Khurana, may be you all know him
Sam was confused as far as she knew MSK is elder and single then how come Dev gets to marry first, she called Dev and confronted him
S: Dev as far a sI know Maan is the eldest then how come you are marrying first
D: I am marrying first, no Bro is already married
S (shocked): what?
Yes
When?
About 6 months back
But that was when your sisters got married
Yes, just a few days after that
Who is his wife?
Pardon
I mean…
Just then Geet came she knew something was wrong
and she heard the coversation
G: jiju, now that you are here and today is my mess off you
should take me for dinner
D; of course Geet
Sam was very hurt, she was in a faul mood she dragged Geet
S: Geet, when you are related to MSK then why did you ask me before joining
G: I did not get you Madam (abhi to shaadi hui sun kar gussa aa raha hai, aur jab pata chalega ki mein hi Mrs. MSK hoan to kya hoga)
S: you took my consent na
G: its obvious madam, he may be a relation but you are my teacher and this thing is concerned with me as a student and not as a relative. But if I were wrong I am sorry.
(ek to mere saamane hi mere pati per dare dalti hai aur mujhse hi sawaal karti hain)
S: I ma sorry Geet, kis baat ka gussa tum par nikal diya
Just then BM called: Geet we should be leaving now
Pinky to Maan: sir, you offered Geet this job because she's your relative
BP: job? Geet is working? Where?
P: in KC as a part time secretary
BP+BM: what???????
M (hey bhagwan kahan phasaa diya)
BP: since when?
M (stammers): its been only a few days
BP: and you choose not to tell any one
M: I was going to tell
BM: when?
M: the next time I visited Delhi
BM: you offered her the job
M: no
BP: ab jhoot bhi bolne lage ho
G: no Bad….. Uncle, Lily offered me
BP: and Maan is her boss, if I remember correctly, and what happened to Lily
G: woh she is to get explains everything……
BP: I think we need to talk about this to Bade bhaiya (referring to Aarambha)
M (gayi bhains paani main)
BP: Dev come lets leave and Geet you too
G (mar gaye ab kya hoga): bye girls meet you in the hostel
Girls sighed lucky Geet handsome jiju and hot boss wow
G: bye madam, I am sorry again
S: its ok beta no offenses (she was hurt by the news of Maan's marriage)
now what will happen?
what will Sameera do?
what will Bade Papa and Badi Maa do?
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update.................
bechari geet toh sabke beech atak gayi...............
na sameera aur gals ko sach batha pa rahi thi aur na hi unn sabki nazar se maan ko bacha pa rahe thi...................lol when gals were oggling @ maan................
waisey maan ko woh sorry bari padne wala hain............
oh teri sam ko ab yehi patha chala hain ki maan ki shaadi ho gayi hain yeh nahin ki mrs msk kaun hain patha chala toh geet ki toh band baj jayegi..............maine aisey professors dheke hain jo apna personal gussa students per nikalthey hain..............
yeh loo inn ladkiyon ko muh kholna tha uskey job ke baare mein patha nahin ab yeh dono kaise sambalengey mummy papa ko................shayad woh log maan ko delhi wapas bula lengey..........😭
toh hamhara geet ka kya hoga arey geet ko chodo hamhara kya hoga hamhe koi maaneet moments hi nahi milengey......................nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii aisa math karna yaar...........
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks for update.............................................. poor sameera................................... family ab lagta hai maaneet ki vaat lagaygi................................... maccn to dono taraf se mara gya..................... parents se bach bhi gya to madam geet sorry ke badle kya kargi pata nahi.................... loved it..................... so finally u r ok and start updating ........................................

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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