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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyyy all'

1. thank u to all who liked my work and wanted me to continue'ur words mean a lot to me

2. I am thinking of making this into a FF so plz let me know after this part if u would like see this OS become a FF'...rust me i wouldn't mind if u ppl tell me no '

3. i have added ppl to my PM list'if u would like to be added'plz let me know :)

4. Do ignore any mistakes :)

Recap: Maan and Geet have finally become officially engaged. Geet is in her room post engagement and she gets a text msg from Maan. Flashback scene of Maan buying her a cell phone the day before. Present: Maan sends geet a text telling her that she looks beautiful in the way she is smiling right now. Geet thinks maan is playing a prank'But guess wat: Maan is actually there in her balcony

Part 2: The Romeo to meet his Juliet

Maan :no geet I am not playing a joke on you.

Geet turned around to see Maan standing in her balcony with his arms crossed and a smile on his face.

Geet stood there with her eyes popped wide open and she just continued to stare at her fianc standing in her balcony at one in the morning. Maan walked up to her with a smirk of satisfaction on his face. He surprised her so mission accomplished but why is she still staring at me? Shouldn't the shock have worn off by now? Maan got a tad worried as he walked up to her and placed his hands on her arms and said : are you ok geet ?

His touch seem to snap her back to reality and she shuttered: woh..w--w--wat are u '''

Maan chuckled to himself and replied : "why are you starting to talk like Adi ?"and put his hand on his chin as if he was deep in thought and continued: "but he is scared of me so does that mean you are scared of me too?? he asked as he started to walk towards her ...and they started their ritual of maan taking a step towards her and geet taking a step back.

Geet stared into his eyes and thought to herself..damn he has captivating eyes..why does he have such good eyes..but forced herself to focus to speak yet failing miserably.

Geet: woh sir'.. but lost her train of thought as she felt the wall against her back...she realized that he had backed her into a corner..how does he always do this??

Geet tried to get her words out of her mouth once again: "woh sir..wat are u doing here at this time?"

Maan took his hand towards geet's face at a painfully slow pace and placed it on her cheek. Geet closed her eyes in the simple pleasure he gave her and of course out of shyness ..and replied: "why?? don't you want me here? by the way this was my room before you took over."

Geet replied: "well it was...notice was..past tense...but now it's mine..u are suppose to be at the mansion anyway".Geet was all pumped to put up a fight with him..she thought to back to the time they had fought for the outhouse after she had quit his job or he had fired her..she had never been able to decide which one it was.that seemed like a long time ago.The past memories brought a fresh smile to her face'and seeing geet's smile automatically brought a smile to Maan's face...damn..he is in love with her smile...no no he told himself.he is in love with everything that has to do with geet'

Maan pulled her closer to him by her waist. "I already told u..u look like the beautiful when you smile like that..I can't stay away even if i tried which clearly I don't."

And Geet being Geet started blushing again "s--sir..please leave me..someone will come", she shuttered.

And Maan being Maan just pulled her even closer. "not s--sir..Maan..call me Maan. We just got engaged or technically we got engaged again since i put the ring on you for the fifth time or fourth. I don't know; i seem to have lost count but that doesn't matter..we are going to be married soon so are you going to call me sir forever?"

Geet glared at him: "how could you forget how many times you put the ring on my hand ?" she asked as she angrily pulled out of his embrace and continued as she walked to the dresser. "By the way you are not suppose to be in a girl's room this late..is this what decent men do? You are going to leave now ."She started taking her jewellery as she waited for maan to leave..which of course he wasn't going to until he said or did what he came here for..

Maan couldn't help but smile at her outburst..of course he remembered how many times he had put the ring on her hand..he had a vivid memory of every time but for some odd reason he couldn't pass up a chance to irritate his Geet..But now his Geet was more upset than usual so he had to make it up to her.

He walked up to her and wrapped his arms around her and placed his cheek against her ear. "Who said I was decent?? He asked which was a rhetorical question and not like Geet was going to answer that..so he went on.. "Did i tell u?? You look even more beautiful when u are angry.."

Geet hand froze on her earring and she felt herself along with her anger melt as she felt the warmth of his body and closed her eyes to savor the moment. They both stood there for a few moments just enjoying each other. Maan broke the moment first by reaching up to her earning to help her with it. Geet started to struggle with her breathing but Maan seemed to be used to the fact that she was always running out of breath whenever he was close.

Maan helped her remove all her jewellary one by one and by the time he was done.Geet had slightly recovered and asked him as she turned to face him. "Maan..now that i think of it..How did u get in here to begin with ?

maan replied with a smirk, "Maan singh Khurana can do anything...even" he trailed off as he took her hand and started to walk towards the balcony..Geet looked down and was shocked and exclaimed, "even.climb a ladder !"

Maan pulled her towards him again..and started nuzzling on neck and whispered, I could do anything to see you..during the party, we barely had time to talk..forget talk..i couldn't even look at you properly..Dadima invited so many people..seriously remind me to look at the guest list for the wedding..i really really missed you.", he finished as he placed a quick kiss on her cheek.

Geet was truly touched and she voiced her thoughts out loud as she gazed into eyes while entwining her fingers with his."How did i ever get such a person like you ? Why do you love me so much ?"

Maan smiled as he embraced her and placed his chin on her head. "I always wonder how i got a girl like you ?? the angry MSK is now a different person..Geet you made me believe in love and you taught how to love .Geet I love you..i love every part of you..your eyes..they are the mirror to your heart..your eyes talk to me even when you can't..and your small nose..he placed a quick peck on it and youe cheeks which always start to get red as they are now"..he said as he stroked her cheeks with his fingers.."and your lips..let's not talk about them..they make me a little too distracted.", he said as he gazed down at them and brought his hand lower to brush his fingers along her lower lip.."And i could go on all night.". he said, pulling her into a tight embrace.

Geet was speechless..she knew Maan rarely expressed himself with words..but she manage to reply" and i heart you, i gave you my heart a long time ago Maan."Geet couldn't say anymore as tears choked her up.

Maan gently kissed her tears, "Please geet: don't cry..Your tears are my biggest weakness..please don't cry."

Geet took Maan's hand and kissed it. "These are tears of happiness..the happiness you have given me."

They didn't need words anymore..they just gazed into each other's eyes and Maan started to kiss Geet on her neck.Geet closed her eyes and enjoyed the feeling of Maan's lips run on her neck and arms.

Just then they both heard something shatter downstairs..Geet quickly pulled away and said. "Did you hear that ? Who's downstairs?" Geet asked with fearful eyes

Precap: who is downstairs????

Ok'gurls..this is it..part 2 'hope u folks liked it.. i have asked if u ppl want me to make this into a FF'Plz hit the LIKE button or comment if u want me to continue this and make it FF instead :) u can be honest and tell me it sucks or it rocks'all kinds of criticism is allowed :D

next part :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/36444675

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
superb!!!....
really loved maneet scenes!...
especially the way maan expressed himself!...
wonder who iz downstairs...
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Hey make it an FF and add me to your PM list too :-)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
loved it yaar.by the way who is in the downstairs??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
do continue riting........it really rokz...😛..u can make it ff..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: kajol.kasu

pls continue..love ur OS..

thanks ...i think i will :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!!!....

really loved maneet scenes!...
especially the way maan expressed himself!...
wonder who iz downstairs...
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!

thanks for liking it..u will find out in the next part..and np :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: shah10

awsome..love it..

do continue plz.
thx

thank u :) i think i am gonna go on :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pushpi

Hey make it an FF and add me to your PM list too :-)

i think it will be a FF and u have been added :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice update soon please....
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