Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08 - Page 16

thank u so much for the pm and i love the update continue soon thank u again!😃

yay, armaan is really starting to get attracted to ridz , i hope he accepts it soon 😍

Anitaaa ughh my stupid laptop somehow changed the page i was on...and now i have to start over with my comment!! =[ lol
Anyways....sorry for the late comment..!!
Now I seriously loved this part..you could really see armaan confused..and in a way trying to fight against his feeling...hehe he's in denial! I have a feeling he knows he's attracted to ridz but just wont admit it! lol And ridz is seriously too funny with her thoughts. I love her whole theory about how armaan has a "Why I hate Ridhima Gupta" list.
Hehe i loved the last part where they both fall on each other excluding the part where ridz banged her head against the table..lol. Though the fact that she hit her head really did help with the ending line...with her thinking armaan needs medical attention lol. Though she wont think that once she knows abt armaans past...you've really written out these parts nicely..i mean I can imagine the pain armaans going through..poor guy...was soo deeply in love. I can't wait till the old armaan comes back!! lol
Seriously Anita amazing part...your doing a great job with this fan fic!
You never cease to amaze me =]

Btw...i heard you took your SAT's..how'd that go? I hope it went well for you! =] I took mine like near the end of october...still haven't gotten my results yet.! lol

ooo i almost forgot to say...thanks sooooooooo much for the pm!😳

Luv,
Mira

like always mind-blowing....

hey amazing part as always..luvd it..finally armaan is attracted 2 ridzi..update soon..cant wait 2 read more..

Heya Anita...I'm soo srry 4 commentin late...got cott up wid skool wrk n stuff...u noe...I hope u unnersan.....

I unnersan Armaan;s state...losin sum1..n afta tat g8n soo close 2 sum1...can b rilli tuff..cuz der will alwyz b a fear tat he myt lose her also..!! Well I hope tat dusnt hppn..!!

Ridhimma sure has d charm 2 impress...her personality n attitude r definately impressing..!! No wonder Ritu n Nana got impressed wid her...n moreover eva Armaan wz impressed wid her!! She sure is a gr8 person!! I wish she keepz impressin evry1 lykk dis...n especially armaan..huz aldready a bit impressed by her

D moment wen Ridhimma fell into Armaan;s arms wer indeed romantic..it wz written vry well...n it wz detailed...wich made it more intrestin... jus lykk i wz expecting!! U met mah expectations..!! it wz a treat 2 read.... dey bod r fallin 4 each oda...slwly...

I'm happy d staff felt tat d old Armaan iz bck..thnx 2 Ridhimma..well he iz nt yet bt he will def b bck soon!!! Hope soo..!! 😛

Well i hope more romantic moments lykk dis keep cmng in d future

Well i'm surprised tat u're real surname is Mallik...well lucky u..ure attached 2 Armaan in sum way @least!!! 😆

n yeah u cna call me aish...no probz @ awl...n m happy tat we r frndz aldready...n i hope v alwyz b!!

Well pesterin u 2 write makez u happy??!! den i'll keep doin soo!! 😆 JK...well i thot it will irritate u..bt den cnt help..m soo attached 2 ure FF...!!

Plzz cont soon...

Thnx 4 d PM

Aishwarya

Jst dropped in to say..read the ff till part 3 rite now. Believe me yaar, I'm so mesmerised the way u have written the story and portrayed the emotions. Its so different from ur previous one...very amazing..⭐️⭐️

Wowwwww wat an update Anita. Ok i have to say um loving his turmoil, i mean the way ur depicting his, his inner battle, the slight interaction with Ridz sendinghim into a frenzy!! Way to go. U dud brilliant justice to it, absolutely flawless, the start itself was thunderous!!

Armaan sat in his office spinning his paperweight as he was lost in thoughts. Why had he acted the way he did last night in Riddhima's room? Why was he feeling weird after the hug they both shared? Why did he bother to tie the string of Riddhima's top? What was with him if she was having trouble tying the string herself? Armaan had never come close to a girl as he had with Riddhima after Anjali had departed from his life. What had pulled him into coming so close with Riddhima? It was natural for Armaan to be feeling all confused as he was right now. His thoughts weren't willing to leave him alone. He really wished to find an outlet for all these questions that continued to roam around in his mind since last night and wanted to put an end to this.


That was so freakingly outstanding!! Loved it!!👏

And the cabin scene, her presentation, she being cool, calm and confident and yet feeling nervous once they were alone. .......brilliant one yet again!! His small compliment, her being asotnished, fabulous Anita, um falling short of words here really,


The pace u maintain is so simply flawless and natural. Way to go!!👏


Haha ofcourse the warehouse or watever scene was again one of its kind!! They actually fell on each other!! OMG, and a special mention here Anita, um loving the way ur projecting the begining of these raw emotions Armaan is feeling. Imaging Anjie everywhere instead of Ridz, poor girl ur displying such a tender, complex emotion so amazingly, huge round of applause. 👏


um waiting for the day wen hes gonna fall for Ridz becuase of her persona and not becoz he was reminding himof Anjie!! Would love to see how u go about this, um sure u will do an outstanding job!!

Thaks for such a great update!! ill be waiting for more eagerly!! love ya

Anitaaaaaa!

Anita!! why did u stop the part! as i was getting so involved in it u just stop it!! but still awesum part!! cont soon and thanx for the updt!