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[Quote=Robin_M]ohhh very hot! hehe having armaan, her boss, in her room, asking for his shirt! having him topless! wow! then flaying into his arms when the lights go out! lucky girl!!!! hehe
i really enjoyed this initial spark of attraction between them! cant wait for the attraction to slowly grow!
awsome part anita, thanks for the pm, look forward to more![/Quote]
Thanks Robin!😳
LOL...Ridz is sure a lucky girl...Saw her boss topless and then ran into his arms😆
This was just the beggining of the attraction...more will come as time passes by😉
Thanks once again...No prob for the PM..Part coming today!
[Quote=aarora]hey sweety..amazing update as always..luvd it..specially d whole scene in riddhima's room..lol..finally some attraction btwn dem..waiting fr nxt part..update soon..
thanx fr PM hun..
luv ya..[/Quote]
Thanks Akanksha!😳
I'm glad you loved the initial spark of attraction between AR...aage aage dekho hota hai kya😉😆
No prob for PM
Love ya!
[Quote=swetha10]Cool update Anita... luved it.... Ridzi hugging Armaan n Ami tying her dori were two sensational bits.... enjoyed it... PLzz contiue soon....😊 [/Quote]
Aww thanks Swetha😳
I'm glad you loved the somewhat hot scene between the two
Will contine today!😃
[Quote=saridena]
hi anita
thks for the pm dear
wonderful part
ridz and armi met in te function they come to know who they r
armi fells differently when ridz holds him
ridz is also in the same thought
update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya[/Quote]
Thanks Soumya!😳
Sparks of attraction are flying between the two...Will they realize that it is love?
Wait to find out😆
Thanks once again!
[Quote=vcaobi]hey anita!! awesumm part!! really nice...plz cont soon and thanx for the pm![/Quote]
Thanks Anjali!😳
I'm glad you liked it
No prob for PM!
[Quote=prernawaghray]hey dear
awesome part yaar
just loved it
AR coming close wow
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awesome part yaar
just loved it
AR coming close wow
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Thanks Prerna😳
I'm happy that you loved the part...
AR are being attracted to each other slowly...
[Quote=tanasha1993]
superb part anita
ridzy is getting all worked up abt armaan
haha and the why I hate ridhima gupta list;D
it was great loved the way their are getting slowly but
surely attracted to each other...
do cont soon yea?
and thanks for the PM too;D
love
tanu[/Quote]
Thanks Tanu😳😳
Sparks of attraction are flying between the two...Who will realize that it is love before the other?
LOL--I loved the list too...
No prob for PM..Part coming today😃
[Quote=saira_1]amzing update anita👏!
plz update soon😳[/Quote]
Thanks Saira😳 I always love your comments!
Update coming today!😃
[Quote=samijhan]tht was gr8. continue soon!!!!!![/Quote]
Thanks Samira!😳
[Quote=Ladoo645]OMG AnitA!! that was intense!, hehe Rids soaked his shirt, what a situation!!! Omg!
No no, love the pace ur taking this!
aWesome update!
-Nats[/Quote]
Aww thanks Nats😳
I'm glad you're liking the pace i'm taking this at..I was really confused if I was going too fast...You just reassured me!😊
[Quote=Real & Natural]
Anita, Now, I would say.."The Heat is ON"...😉😉😆.Well, as u said that we need to see how Riddhima is melting 😆....
Awesome PArt, particularly loved the part where A had to half strip himself off, due to forced circumstances....well that was put pretty aptly,and enjoyed the emotional turmoil he was in & the string tieing....awww...it reminded me of the pre stage scene during KASH days,that was so very HAWT!!!
Very Enjoyable Part.Keep us all in jitters...but not for long sweetheart.😉.
Hey , I guess someone mentioned u have one more FF,could u pls tell me which is one is that & send me the link???It would be such a Treat to have two.😊[/Quote]
I seriously have to know your name...You are just super sweet! Thanks so much for all the compliments and appreciation...I love reading your feedback on the part😳
The heat is certaintly on...You are right for sure! Riddhima will be melting from the nature of her khadoos boss...LOL..She will slowly, but surely fall in love with him...Who will realize that it is love first?
Aww it's an honor that I was able to make you recollect the Heer-Ranjha KaSh scene...It's a personal favorite of mine too! That scene just sent me to dreamland...LOL...I'm honored that you loved my scene as much as you loved the Kash scene!
Part coming up today😃
I think I sended you the link to my other FF...If I havent, please do tell me...I will do it ASAP...
[Quote=Iqbal Neha1]amazing part anita
i really liked the way u showed how each time ridz meets armaan her opinion about him changes.finally armaan attended rahuls wedding the scene between rahul muskaan and armaan was really good i liked the way u potrayed their freindship.
whenever ridz comes face to face with armaan she always does something and even know she dropped water on armaan this shows that armaan and ridz are destined to meet.
i liked the way u potrayed armaans emotions after ridz hugged him he was really confused about what he felt at that moment.
cant wait 2 read the next part.[/Quote]
Aww thanks!😳
Ridz is going to keep on changing her opinion about Armaan...Wait till she finds out about his past...
I love their friendship also..I'm glad you liked it as much as I loved portraying it...
You're right for sure---hamesha gadbad ho jaata hai when Ridz meets Armi...It's destined alright!
Armaan was too caught up in the moment...he just left the wedding...
Next part coming up today!😃
[Quote=simran1285]
Great Update Anita!! Please post next part soon[/Quote]
Thanks Simi! Glad you liked it! 😳
Next part coming today!😃
[Quote=armaanaddict]
hey anita!!! Shrutiii!!
i'm so sorry for my on and off comments for this and TMR.. school's just keeping me on my toes!
but i have to tell you.. i'm completely in love with the concept of his ff!! i really like how you show armaan still in love with anjali.. and how riddhima slowly pulls him out of it.. Aww it's okay Shruti..No apologies needed at all...I understand...My last year of HS is keeping me on my toes too...I really have to struggle to find time to update at times..I'm just happy knowing your keeping up with the story! Extremely happy that you're liking the concept and the way I am taking this!
you know i'm a huge fan of your AR scenes :) and the wet shirt one here was pretty awesome anita!!
i love the pace you've set.. how things are gradually building up.. and i love riddhima's character in this.. she's so different from the stereotypical riddhima in a lot of the ffs.. it's really neat how you show her thoughts.. helps me connect a lot better with her character! Aww...I know how much you love my AR scenes..I kind of write them with you in mind...😆 Things are gonna go slow for both AR...Attraction will slowly build with each part...I'm glad you liked the way I portrayed Ridz character in this fic...I love writing her thoughts also...Glad you could connect with it...Will keep on writing more...
oh and we visited dallas over the last winter break.. and we ate at masala wok.. mmm their tandoori chicken stuff was absolutely delish!! lol i read that in your update and i'm going.. hey.. i've been there too!! :D OMG, I know man! Masala Wok is just tooooo good...Absolutely delicious food! I'm so glad they have a branch in Houston...lol...Where do you live BTW?
we might come down to texas over this winter break too.. my mom has friends in dallas and houston.. so we were thinking of coming! You totally should come down here!! Tell me if you do..Maybe we could meet up!
well anyways.. awesome part! :)
love you! Love you too!
shruti [/Quote]
i'm so sorry for my on and off comments for this and TMR.. school's just keeping me on my toes!
but i have to tell you.. i'm completely in love with the concept of his ff!! i really like how you show armaan still in love with anjali.. and how riddhima slowly pulls him out of it.. Aww it's okay Shruti..No apologies needed at all...I understand...My last year of HS is keeping me on my toes too...I really have to struggle to find time to update at times..I'm just happy knowing your keeping up with the story! Extremely happy that you're liking the concept and the way I am taking this!
you know i'm a huge fan of your AR scenes :) and the wet shirt one here was pretty awesome anita!!
i love the pace you've set.. how things are gradually building up.. and i love riddhima's character in this.. she's so different from the stereotypical riddhima in a lot of the ffs.. it's really neat how you show her thoughts.. helps me connect a lot better with her character! Aww...I know how much you love my AR scenes..I kind of write them with you in mind...😆 Things are gonna go slow for both AR...Attraction will slowly build with each part...I'm glad you liked the way I portrayed Ridz character in this fic...I love writing her thoughts also...Glad you could connect with it...Will keep on writing more...
oh and we visited dallas over the last winter break.. and we ate at masala wok.. mmm their tandoori chicken stuff was absolutely delish!! lol i read that in your update and i'm going.. hey.. i've been there too!! :D OMG, I know man! Masala Wok is just tooooo good...Absolutely delicious food! I'm so glad they have a branch in Houston...lol...Where do you live BTW?
we might come down to texas over this winter break too.. my mom has friends in dallas and houston.. so we were thinking of coming! You totally should come down here!! Tell me if you do..Maybe we could meet up!
well anyways.. awesome part! :)
love you! Love you too!
shruti [/Quote]
[Quote=jia..]Wowwwwwwwwwwwww Anita, that was some update!! Loving the way ur taking this girl!!
Thanks Jia!😳
The first scene was an excellent start, him living up to his khadoos image, sending her extra work....poor girl. And her meekly asking for a leave.....awww and ultimately he did allow her.......as i said great start........👏 LOL...Khadoos boss was giving her too much trouble...He didn't want her to end up quitting her job...LOL..That's why he let her go😆😆..Thanks Jiaaa!
The wedding scenes again awesomely described........RM trying to convince him for the wedding. Loved the way u portrayed them as concerned friends and Armaan being him self......infact the way u show his two sided nature. The caring, gentle guy on one hand and him being hard and strict because of the bitter incidences in his life....brilliant job Anita........👏 OMG thanks so much Jia😳...Seriously, your input means a lot to me...I'm so happy that you're liking the way I portray his two sided personality!
Sssiir aap?" said Riddhima, stuttering as she was the one who accidently flung the water at him. Nervousness took control of her body as her hands began to shake. She didn't want to face his wrath at her sister's wedding in front of everyone.
Awww poor girl, the way u penned her nervousness was fab!!👏 Poor girl would be nervouss..😆 She dropped the water after all...lol..
And OMG the scenes after she spilled water, outstandingly written girl!!! The way they both felt strange, the feelings described deserve an applause!! Thank you Jia!🤗
The first scene was an excellent start, him living up to his khadoos image, sending her extra work....poor girl. And her meekly asking for a leave.....awww and ultimately he did allow her.......as i said great start........👏 LOL...Khadoos boss was giving her too much trouble...He didn't want her to end up quitting her job...LOL..That's why he let her go😆😆..Thanks Jiaaa!
The wedding scenes again awesomely described........RM trying to convince him for the wedding. Loved the way u portrayed them as concerned friends and Armaan being him self......infact the way u show his two sided nature. The caring, gentle guy on one hand and him being hard and strict because of the bitter incidences in his life....brilliant job Anita........👏 OMG thanks so much Jia😳...Seriously, your input means a lot to me...I'm so happy that you're liking the way I portray his two sided personality!
Sssiir aap?" said Riddhima, stuttering as she was the one who accidently flung the water at him. Nervousness took control of her body as her hands began to shake. She didn't want to face his wrath at her sister's wedding in front of everyone.
Awww poor girl, the way u penned her nervousness was fab!!👏 Poor girl would be nervouss..😆 She dropped the water after all...lol..
And OMG the scenes after she spilled water, outstandingly written girl!!! The way they both felt strange, the feelings described deserve an applause!! Thank you Jia!🤗
He handed her the shirt and she started ironing the wet patch in silence as the situation was really awkward. Here she was ironing her strict boss's shirt while he was standing half-naked in her room. How ironic'
Armaan felt a weird vibe go through his body also as he wiped his chest with the towel. It would be quite an absurd situation for anyone. In the office, he was all strict and everything, but at the moment he was standing in his close friend's sister's room, who is an employee, with his shirt off while she irons his shir
^^ That was flawlessly written, thats wat i meant, their feelings, the weird, awkward feeling, Way to Go!!!!!! 😳 *blush*
And the lights went of convineintly.......😆 she ran into his arms...aww well if i there then i wud hav done the same😍,,,....whether i was scared or not.......😆 LOL...Same here Jia..Same here...Just an excuse to go into his arms...😆
And him feeling all awkward all over again......and disappearing......i mean going away quickly from the party, unable to fathom wat happened, trying to run away from those feelings again was marvously written!! Girl u got me completely hooked!! Thanks Jia! 😳😳
Will be very eagerly waiting for more.........hoping to see an early update. love ya!! Love ya too! Update coming after I come back from dentist in about two hours or so...[/Quote]
[Quote=AngelicSoniya]
luvd it...very well written...
superb..amzing...
cont soon & thxx 4 da pm[/Quote]
Thanks Soniya!😳
I'm glad you loved it!
Will continue today!😃 Have to go to dentist right now
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