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Originally posted by: geetsweet
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Originally posted by: geetsweet
hey nice update dear...
loved it ... continue soon...thanks 4r adding & pm
Haye sneha kya karoon mein tera??? Ur jus amazing hun too good the pictures,virman dialogues, story everything is so perfect...Yaar where do u get such ideas from??? Maan gaye too good...please dont stop writing on virman ur jus superb please update soon also on ur os anjaana anjaani (if u are guna continue it) and update soon on this i hope in the next part maanvi confesses her love please please please update soon and definately pm me its a request dil maat thorna (i maybe sounding filmy but im in love wiv this)
Continue soon and make it so long like a maha episode types
PART5
@Hoor dear its maha episode type long update😃
so now bigg comment i want 😉
She was distressed by the last call, sitting all alone at one corner of room screaming out from last 30 minutes, last 30 mintues seems to be a year for her.
There was no one for her she couldn't call jeevika as her phone was out of coverage, she couldn't call back as she don't have any number of hospital and virat's number was switched off. She was feeling incapacitated, she can do nothing at 11o'clock in night she can't go out of hostel this was not problem she can go, infact for her virat she can go at any time she don't need anyone's permission but the point was where to go?? She don't even know in which hospital is virat?? Either in this city only or outside. She looked at Bhagwan's portrait in their room kept by jeevika while rubbing her teary eyes said , "Bhagwan g aisa kyun huya??"yeh mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai, main jisko pyar karun bhagwan usko mujhse kyun door karta hai, pehle mummy papa maine kuch nahi kaha aapse apni zingdi jee rahi thi main lekin phir main virat se mili a smile came on her face while saying his name which disappeared very next second''
Lekin is var nahi bhagwan plzz mere virat ko mujhse door mat karna plz bhagwan,
Main virat se bahut payr karti hun '..ek wahi to hai meri life mein plz bhagwan ek var bas ek var virat ko mere pass wapis bhej do kabhi use jahgda nahi karungi, kabhi nahi pakka promise jeevika di ki kasam
Bhagwan g plzz bas ek var bas ek var
At that time she heared noises in her balcony she got disturbed, she moved back to look for noises, The next moment she was shocked like hell seeing the man infront of her, was VIRAT with a smile on his face having an apple in his hand, "dekh lo bhagwan ne tumhari sun li"
Virat was about to complete his words when manvi ran to him stood infront of him looked at him with intense love in her eyes, she touched his face to make sure it was virat only not her mere dream, she felt that her life is in front of her
and hugged him she starts crying loud. I LOVE YOU virat, I love you I love you more than anything, I can't think my life without you aur
kahan chale gaye thy, kya hogya tha tumhe, tum theek to ho na, meri to jaan h nikal gayi thi, aur who accident ka phone??
Virat tumhe chot to nahi lagi na, next time main tumhe khud se door kabhi nahi janned ungi kabhi nahi
Virat hugged her back relaxing her.
Virat who was taken back by her reaction, he knows she love her he knew it she w'll be upset but this much was unexpected he can imagine how much she must be cried last 25-30 minutes her swoolen eyes were speaking, " Manvi main theek hoon, I am sorry but I want to surprise you so I made that call just chill"
Manvi who was not concentrating on what he was saying hugged him more and more tight she wants to make sure virat is with her.
Virat again said mannu, main tumhare pass h hun agar sach mein mera accident ho jata aur mujhe kuch''''..
This time manvi broke hug and covered his mouth with hand looked into his eyes tumhe kuch nahi hoga kuch nahi samjhe tum'''kuch nahi said in loud voice main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Virat, "intensionally agar bhagwan ne mujhe bula liya to jana h padega
Manvi, " bhagwan hamesha mujhse usko cheen lete hain jis se main pyar karti hun lekin is var nahi kabhi nahi main bahgwan ko tumhe cheenne nahi dungi"
Virat , " vaise mujhe koi aitrazz nahi hai tum aise h mujhe hug karke reh sakti ho lekin agar hum thoda comfortable ho jayein to better hoga {he said playfully to make her relax}
Manvi, who realize their proximity the position she was hugging her so tightly loosened hug, she realized what she said in last few seconds , her direct confession to him she moved away while lowering her eyes she was unable to meet her gaze as she was not sure of his reaction he has not confessed yet..
Virat, " mujhe nahi pata tha meri jhansi ki rani, ki andar ek dil v hai jis mein mere liye itna pyar hai k kuch pal v mujhse door nahi reh sakti aur ro ro kar aise halat karlegi"
Manvi, "looked away'
Virat, "came infront of her looked at her let her face him by taking her chin up by his hand
Kya huya jaaneman aab se kuch time pehle kuch keh rahi thi mujhe kuch sunaiye nahi diya phir se jara'''..
Manvi, "who till now recognized whole situation
She throw away her eyes got widened and mouth open like o
Said to yeh sara drama aap ne kiya tha mr. virat vadera
Yeh accident wala hannn,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,joining her eyebrows
Virat dipped his head down and looked at her raising his eyes and thought aab jag gayi meri sherni
Manvi, "Ek to jo baat tumhe kehni chahiye thi who tumne drama kara ke mujhse bulwaya"
Upar se jhoot who v itna bada
Jayo jahan se mujhse tumse kabhi baat nahi karnai hai aaj ke baad kabhi nahi
Aur han who ladki kaun thi jisne phone kiya tah kiske saath thy
Virat smiled at her last question and her possessiveness and grinceed teeths looking at her
Virat, holding her from shoulders to tum kis baat se naraz ho
{MAnvi throws his hands away } maine accident ka jhoot bola, ladki ki saath tha ya phir itni raat ko jahan aaya
Nahi tum kuch aur keh rahi thin a kuch mujhe kehna tha, tumne kaha''.types?????
Manvi, made a big o shaped mouth open and eyes widened
Kehna to door abhi yaad v nahi maine kya kaha
Virat abhi chale jayo jahan se and tried to pull him out of her room
Virat, "theek hai jata hoon agar agge tumhari warden puchegi to main keh dunga manvi k saath tha"
To khud answer karna and starts moving towards main door
Manvi, "hold him ruko"
Virat, "kya yaar bandriya kabhi jayo kabhi ruko
Jayun to problem rukun to problem
Manvi, "Virat I hate you I hate you so much
Mujhe tumse baat nahi karni kabhi nahi and sat on her bed while making a golgappa face"
She starts complaing to her GOD dekho bhagwan g ek to jhoot bola sorry v nahi bola upar se I love you v maine bola ise pehle bolan chahiye tha pehla kya vad mein nahi bola aur to aur yaad v nahi maine kya bola aur abhi warden ko bolega
She was complaining. He just stood inclined to wall and was admiring her.
He sat besides her, and place his hand on her
but she declined his touch and said virat mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni tumne ek var v nahi socha aisa jhoot bolne se pehle mujh pe kya beetegi
Tum kyun sochne lage main kaun hoti hun???
Ek annath h to hoon aur tumhe kya main jeeun ya marun...and fresh trail of tears start from her eyes
Virat was about to say something
Manvi interrupted plz virat chale jayo mujhe kuch naho sunana hai
Virat self thought lagta hai kuch jayda h hogaya aab is bandriya ko kaise manyun aur kaise ise samjhyun mai is se kitna pyar karta hoon.
His heart can't see her in so much pain he never thought to make her cry, he just wanted to surprise her but now she was sad ,
He always thought her confession to be her happiest and best but she was sad he couldn't bear that, now he knew what he have to do
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He starts singing confessing his feeling by his song for her.
Jeeta Hoon Tere Liye,
Tujhe Pe Kithna Martha Hoon
He said looking at her
Jeeta Hoon Tere Liye,
Tujhe Pe Kithna Martha Hoon
He made her look at him
Jeeta Hoon Tere Liye,
Tujhe Pe Kithna Martha Hoon
Kaun Karega Ithna Jitna Pyar Mein Tujhse Kartha Hoon
Hey Ye E Ye..Ye E Ye…Ye E Ye….
Hey Ye E Ye..Ye E Ye…Ye E Ye….
He kissed her forehead and then eyes lovingly
His confession was enough for her to melt
She sang along with him
She was looking at him and tears flow down her eyes as she caressed his face with her hands and sing
Tum Jo Kabhi, Ek Pal Dhoor Jaaye
Thum Jaaye Saanson Ka Chalna
Ban Ke Mere Chaahthon Ka Diya Tum
Har Waqt Palkon Mein Jalna
He kissed her tears and embraced her into his arms making her safe and making sure he'll never go
Mere Khwabon Ki Yahin Hai Tamanna
Tere Bahon Mein Rahe Zindgani
Mere Yaadon Mein Hai Chaaya Hamesha
Teri Diwaangi Ka Nasha
He again kissed her forehead and placed a kiss on her red cheeks
Rotha Hoon, Hastha Hoon,
Bin Tere Aahen Bhartha Hoon
He starts kissing on her white milky skin of neck and till her collar bone she was lost in his love, he pinned her on the wall by placing his both hands on sides and was kissing her gently putting her hairs back she closed her eyes in submission
Hey Ye E Ye..Ye E Ye…Ye E Ye….
Hey Ye E Ye..Ye E Ye…Ye E Ye….
She gathered courage and pulled her back, she turned to other side blushingly where virat smiled and pulled his hands into hairs
She moved otherside and put her hand on wall
Mushkil Hai Tujhko Bathaana Sanam
Bechainiyon Ke Karaahen
Tere Hi Baare Mein Karthe Hai Baathein
Khamosh Dil Ki Sadayein
Virat came infront of her hold her face in his hands
Tere Bin Ek Pal Jaanejaana,
Nahin Mumkin Bithaana Bithaana
Took her infront portrait of Bhagwan g
Ban Jaaye Mohabbat Ki Ibadath,
Chalo Mil Kar Karen Yeh Dua
He took her hands into his and closed her eyes and his and made a prayer to GOD to keep her always happy to give her all happiness
He looked at her after prayer
Dartha Hoon, Dartha Hoon Ab Mein Judaai Se Dartha Hoon
Kaun Karega Ithna Jitna Pyar Mein Tujhse Kartha Hoon
Virat, "I love you manvi since the day I first saw you, I feel in love with you
I fell in love woth you with our first fight
Everytime we fight Ilove you more
Everytime you get angry on me I love you more
Everytime you care for me I love you more
Everytime you go against me but still on my way I love you more
Evrytime you come to me I love you more
Everytime I see you I love you more
Everytime I love you I love you more
I love you love you more than me more than my life more thann everything
Tears starts rolling her eyes seeing soo much love for her in his eyes, his confession was the best felling for her. She felt divine. They hug each other not to let eachother go from sight. They remain their for long time.
He broke hug unwillingly said manvi mera saman ander le aayein bichara ko thand lag jayegi
Manvi, " with questioning eyes?? Kaun sa??"
Virat, "hostel se ghar gaya hun to saman to hoga na"
Manvi, "lekin yahan ??"
Virat, "sitting on her bed, Miss manvi chaudhary urf would br mrs. Vadera which made her blush more and she turned red which virat was enjoying to the utmost..aab hum yahin rahenge aapke room mein kahan tah na 24hr. service pe rahunga to m here"
Manvi, "not getting what do you mean??"
Virat, " making her seated along his side taking her in his side hug dekho meri jaan haye [she blushed more] aab main vapis hostel ja nahi sakta boya hostel closed hai , to yehi ek jagahn hai na aur vaise v jahan koi nahi hai kisi ko pata nahi chalega mera hum enjoy karenge and winked to her.
Manvi, "joke tha??"
Virat." bilkul v nahi i am serious yar"
MAnvi, "standing from his hug dekho virat mujhe pata hai tumra upar ka screw thoda dheela hai lekin mera nahi, apna saman pakdo aur kalti maro yahan se kisi ne dekh liya na tere saath saath mujhe v rustication milega"
Virat was not in a mood to loose from his bandriya dekh lo abhi kuch time pehle keh rahi thi kabhi khud se door jane nahi dungi said teasig her
Manvi, "virat dekho"
Virat, "hmmm dikhyo kya dikhana chahti ho tabho to yahan aaya hun giving his mishevious smile"
And came forward to her
Manvi, "virattt plz don't do this" as he moved back step by step as virat was coming to her
Virat, "abhi to kuch kiya h kahan hai maine miss chaudhariyan??" coming close to her
Manvi, "virattt……." And stuck in between wall and virat's broad chest
She tried to move virat moved to left she tried from right he moved to right and again pinned her by one arm and second hand he pulled her by waist towards him
Han bolo manvi said virat in husky tone
Manvi, " virat chodo na"
Virat, 'kyun??"
Manvi, "koi aa jayega"
Virat, "nahi aaayega sab ghar gaye hun hai"
Manvi, " was lacking words now
She lowered her eyes unable to bear his gaze and looked at his well tonned chest, his abbs which was visible through her half open pink shirt, he was looking damn sexy manvi thought her hand automatically went to feel his chest. She kept her hand on his bare chest she felt she'll melt there. Virat was chukled by her reaction.
Manvi, "virat plz janne do"
Virat, "whistled showing his both hands in air manvi maine kahan pakda hai its like that tumne h mujhe……and raised his one eye with his killing smile
Manvi was crimson red in embarrasement seeing her hand on his bare chest loosing herself openly.
She moved from there saying main saman ander le k aati hun
Virat, "to matlab main yahan reh raha hun"
Manvi, "theek hai lekin bas aaj ki raat aur who v us bed pe signaling him to the bed on other corner of room"
Virat, "jo hukam meri princess"
Manvi,"smiled"
Virat, "go to her and said bhook lagi hai kya"
Manvi, "hmmm….making baby face lekin aab kuch nahi milega"
Virat, "no fear when virat is there"
Virat showed her a pizza box
She got excited like a baby and virat was amused to see his princess happy.
He made her eat pizza by himself making her sit infront of him.
They enjoyed pizza along with coke {sneha wondering kash mujhe v abhi mil jaye}
Virat, " dheydfutiya vaise meine kabhi socha nahi tha k tum itni bol ho khud se I love you bola"
Manvi, " was feeling shy" and dipped her head smiling to herself.
Virat, " ek var phir se bolo na"
Manvi, "virat plz"
Virat, "jaan ek var bolo na"
Manvi, "shook her head in no"
Virat, "oye hoye jhansi ki rani shrmati v hai ??? and hit her shoulder by his
Princess bolo na"
Manvi, " was feeling shy today virat was calling her by so many names today was something different after confession she was not able to meet hos eyes she was feeling shy to look at him
Virat, "again jaan bolo na"
MAnvi, "virat plzz force mat karo na vad mein bolungi pakka abhi nahi"
Virat, "theek hai jane deta hun ek sharat hai jo main kahun manugi"
Manvi, "hmmm"
Virat, "made her look at him and kissed his forehead and said good night maanu meri bandriya"
Hamesha meri zindgi mein aise h rehna aur aab so jayo.
He made her sleep on bed and tucked her in blanket like a princess. She closed her eyes and agin the most beautiful moment of her life last few hours start coming infront of her eyes she slept while felling those moments agin again.
He was feeling like in heaven seeing his life his princess, his bandriyaa in front of him, he wants to go and sleep by hugging her but he controlled him and slept on other bed.
so guys done with part 5 maha episode wala😆
i hope you all liked it
give me long comments 😉 it encoyrages to write more
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2823154/virman-pics-thread-my-collection-updated link to virman pics collection
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2816223/virat-manvi-anjanna-anjaani-os virman os anjanna anjanni
Originally posted by: Sonika1988
hey you gotta ccontinue very soon . Cox m dying to read the next pat. Well I read all the four parts just now and they all were really good .I loved the concept and also all the cute moments between virat and manvi . I have also read other works of yours and they were too good .
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