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thnks a lot
i am soo happy you all liked it
Originally posted by: princess_sara
Heyy...it was real;llly nice updates...
luved VirMan...it was pleasure reading it...u described HER feeling,HIS feeling verry well...they already r in Love...just a confession is left...waiting for that...then thr sweet romantic talks...update sooon...waiting for the next pm...
Originally posted by: geetsweet
heyy dear i just read all the parts at one go...
its really go i loved it...continue soon...& add me in & pm me dear...
Wow sneha that was amazing to sweet i loved the way u portrayed the song and how it perfectly fitted into ur story it was tremendous...i loved how none of them expresse tgeir love for each other but somehow they knew how each other felt...too cute and definately write alot more parts to this and i cant wait til their proper confession...that last line was so tensing especially when it said what future has in hold for her...
Continue soon and make it longer and when u do plsz pm me hun...
P.s: loved the pictures keep it up
Originally posted by: daminipatel12
Awesome update!! Please pm me and update soon.😊
PART 4
Tomorrow morning was their last exam of this semester, after that they have long vacation of 20 days and all are going home, all students were superexcited about the vacations ahead, everyone was damn happy. But manvi was not happy as she has to live in hostel all alone because this time she can't go with jeevika also because of some family issue of jeevika as she visit her orphan only once a year so she can't go there also. Virat knew this he knows she'll not study tonight so he decided to study toghther . Virat and manvi were studying together in study room in hostel {as boys can't go to girls room and vice versa: but its bcoz of rule that they can't enter eachother room they did sneaked into their rooms by back window but today virat wants to make sure manvi to focus on study so he preffered study room}.
Manvi, "virat thoda break le lun"
Virat, "firstly comlete this asssignment"
after less then 5 mintues she again Virat ," plzzz plzz ek break
Virat," nahi" and stand up to take a book from other table
Manvi, "kya yar ek break plz
KIt kat break banat hai boss"
Virat amde her sit on the chair passing her a big NO message for break and
Virat gave him a angry youngman look"
That was enough for her to keep silent she sat while frightned from his angry youngman forms
but she was making faces by twisting her lips lookin above, "mumy papa kaisa jalim ladka hai ek break v nahi lene deta"
Virat looked at her and noticed that she was busy with her parents
He thought , "yeh dyedfutiya must be complaining about me"and smiled to himself.
Virat, "if your complaining session about is completed can we focus on topic"
Manvi, "how come you know"
Virat, "bandriya I know your each moment, each expression and looked in her eyes and said what you feel, what you think even when you not say it by words I know what you are thinking''..i know even when you are not infront of my eyes as virat was loosing himself in her eyes same like her he leaned towards him his face is now just 2inches away from her''.they can feel eachother breath their lips were trembling virat came forward a little and manvi closed her eyes, now virat was not saying anything was lost in her eyes {sneha wonder virat focus on topic, now you need a break :P} it was then by virat's movement poor book fell down as no one was focusing on topic ; that bring them back from their dreamy land back to hostel room
Both moved away and their was total silence, feeling of awkarwardness as they never became so close before'. Virat thought to break this uncomfortable environment he said in normal tone like nothing happened just few seconds back manvi break le lo but bring something for me to eat also from your room's personal canteen.
Yes he knows her personal canteen manvi used to keep eatable stuff in her room as she feels hungry very frequently, she keeps snacks cookies, choclates and also her favorite chocolate shake.
Manvi, "nodded her head in yes and left"
That was unusal of manvi but he knows she was affected by their proximity.
She ran to her room, obviously now she was not feeling to eat he was lost in that moment they just shared. She came back to virat after 20minutes with some snacks.
Virat, "itna time lagta hai kya??"
Manvi, "han to kya???break tha and smiled
Latter on they studied smoothly thnks to other girls who came there to study.
Next day they wrote the paper well, Manvi came running outside examination hall in full enthusiasm and searched virat and jeevika , she saw virat standing waiting for her she ran and starts speaking
Virat virat Virat thanku thankuu thankuuu sooo much you are best yar
Tumhari vajah se maine pura question paper solve kardiya first time manvi chaudhary ne pura likha sab sheets likh di maine aaj to
they bith gave a highfve
Aaj ka din to history mein likha jayega aaj ka din best hai she opened her arms in air looked above and said mumy papa aaj aap bht khush honge na aaj apki manvi ne pura jhakas exam kiya hai
She was jumping in excitement
She was extremely happy and virat can see that
Virat was standing by folding his arms over his well tonned chest self thought manvi aaj ka din sach mein tumhare liye best hoga and smiled on his plan.
Manvi, " virat, aaj to Professor v pagal ho jayega manvi ka exam dekh ke"
Ok today everyone was extremely happy as exam was easy so like all manvi also did well, well that's a different thing virat taught her last night a lot and she gave whole credit to virat only.
Manvi, " VIRAT , aaj manvi manvi chaudhary tumhe party degi is khushi mein tum v kya yaad rakhoge bola kya chahiye she said it by raising her hand in air lifting eyebrows and she ran from there towards jeevika''''.
Virat, "yeh ladki v bas'''''''unique hai ise museum mein rakhna chahiye au rise dekhne k liye ticket lagni chahiye"
Manvi ran to jeevika who was with viren and hugged her di and told her the whole story excitedly.
Suddenly she became sad by looking bags on jeevika's side she was leaving from there itself to her home.
Jeevika, "mannu''''
Manvi, "ohhh teri main to bhool h gayi thi aap sab to aaj ja rahe ho na looking at of three virat also joined them after manvi ran to jeevika,
Jeevika, "mannu main jaldi aa jayungi, promise
Manvi, "its ok di, I'll enjoy here "
She said with tears and heavyheart knowing the fact that she'll get hell bored
Jeevika hugged manvi and both got emotional
Virat and viren looked at eachother and smiled
Virat, " Bandriya yeh ganaga jamuna jahan college se h bahana suru karne ka irada hai kya"
Manvi, "hit her on shoulder
Virat, "ouchhh jungle billi"
And all burst into laughter its time to say biee to jeevika and viren. They left as were going to catch train from same station not both viren can go by his car but how can he miss a chance to be with jeevika sp he preffered train"
Viren, "chal virat milte hain tum car se aa jana"
Virat, "ya dude byee"
Viren and jeevika left.
Manvi, "cheyp tum v ja rahe ho abhi'while making a sad baby face a small tear in her brown angel eyes
Hayee '''''''..he said making a deep brath melting on her cute face and now she was sad
He knows she is sad but he have to leave
He pulled her cheeks and said janneman {now a days he used to say her janneman when she was looking very cute, no doubt she looks cute always to him but when he loves her antics more}, I promise 24 hrs. tumse contact mein rahungaa
She titlted her face to right side looking at him with questioning eyes, bitting her lower lipfrom left side said SACHIII'..
He admired her antics how pretty she was looking
Virat, "muchii"
He took his bag and they both left manvi dropped him to his car and bid bye.
She left to move back to hostel which now will be jail for her then her phone rang she picked and
Eh bandriya aise rote huye wapis jayugi then how will I be able to leave???
Manvi, " cleared her tears and said how you know ???
Virat, "kaha tha na kal raat main sab janta hun'''..these words make both of them remind the last night almost kiss moment both blushed
She smiled
He could feel her smile he smiled back and said sooo''''''''''''
Manvi, "cheyp tum jayo abhi"
Bye and she cut the phone
Virat, "to bandriya sharmati v hai'''''.haye isi k to fan hain hum aise ha nahi virat vadera ne apna dil kisi ko hara and smiled by looking at himself through mirror and starts driving form college campus"
Manvi, "virat ' virat vadera thank you so much for being in my life
Again her phone rang she knew its virat
Virat, "miss bandriya virat vadera aapki 24hr. service mein hajar hai''..madam aapko hum feel nahi hone denge aap hostel mein akeli ho"
Manvi, "to mr.chep kya karenge'''''''.
And They continued their chitchat'''''''''''''till call got cut from virat's side
manvi thought may be he got caught by some traffic police while driving and attending call and gave a thought to call him afterwards.
after 3hrs. she got worried when he hadn't called her yet then she thought to call him but cut the dialled numbeer as her mind struck may be he s busy with his family.
manvi was in her room when she was thinking how she will reset her room as jeevika told her to set their room in vacations when her phone ring she was happy that it must be virat she took the phone without noticing number and starts virat aab phone kar rahe ho
but she was numb to hear the other side a girl
Manvi, "han...kyun???"
girl, 'mam aap ka kya rishta hai unse??"
Manvi," was not sure what to say, he was her everything but she???? she said in heavy voice dost hun hum ek h colleage mein hain "
manvi was getting curious who this girl is???
why she is on virat's phone???
why she i sasking about thier relation??
why the hell she is asking all and not telling anything??
Girl, " mam kya aap virat k kisi family k vare ein bta sakti hai"
Manvi, " aap viren ko phone karlo but can you plz tell me why the hell you are asking all this and can you plz tell me what are you doin on his phone?? aap virat ko phone dengi kya???
Girl, " i am sorry mam but virat can't take phonr his car met with a serious accident and i am speaking from hospital wanna inform at his home but could not locate any number except this one"
last word swept land under her feet,Manvi was hell shocked this news was biggest shock of her life...she dropped the phone, and got on the floor on her knees , It seems she has lost everything
i made last changes at the time
don't kill me for that but you can throw jutte chappel but plz in pairs so that i can use in summers 😆 😉
thats all for this update
hope you like it
plz leave your comments, criticism
it encourages me to write
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2816223/virat-manvi-anjanna-anjaani-os my other os anjanna anjanni
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2823154/virman-pics-thread-my-collection-updated my collection for virman pics
Originally posted by: Coolioqueen
Loved it loved it & loved it! Continue...
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