Virat manvi SS LOVE ILLUSION OR REALITY last part - Page 18

Loved the update!! Thanks for the pm and please do pm me when you update.😊

It as perfect please PM me soon and you didnt PM me last time... That was kind of rude!!!

hey
This part was really cute. Loved sapn's plan
Cont soon

Originally posted by: masaf57

loved it thanks for the pm!!

thnkss dear for ur cmmnts

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

Thanks dear 4 ur pm. Nice updates

ur welcme dear

Originally posted by: __Shivani__

aww.pl continue soon

it was just AWseM...loved it

sry i can't add cause my email os not validated,but i will try to do so

pl try to pm me ur updates

thknss dear
no wrries i send u bbuddy request

Originally posted by: Sassi1

Good, I'm In love with your story
But I want more romantic virman scenes

thnks for ur love
well this part was needed to expose maya
ya romance will theer t engagement 😉

Originally posted by: hs7071

Yaar sneha it couldnt be any better finally maya got slapped not one 2,3,4 times...
Thank U so much i loved sapna for this usually she is the kebab mein haadi but now she was the live saver more like maya killer...
Jeevika's dialogue:
"But pehle mujhe yeh to btayo kya dono alag alag hai jo mujhe ek ko choose karna pade'''dono ki jaan to ek dusre mein hai, do jism ek jaan type to main ek ko kaise chunu'''''''"
This dialogue truly defined virman...
Loved the parts it had everything in it...
'the behna love the rootana maanana
'the brothers teasing
'bro and sis pyaar
'virman's sharmana
'the true star parivaar
Seriously u shoild definately become the official weiter of ehmmbh trust me no one would stand a chance infront of
Missed u thank god u update moreover wiv the thapar which made my day
Thank u and pm me when u continue

awww hooriaa biggg thnku for such a great compliment jaani...😃
m glad u luved thapad's 😆
i luv ur cmnts well praise jo itni krti ho 😆

Originally posted by: mamaian

oh god i read all ur parts rite now n i m loving them so when u update the next plz pm me

m so happy that t=you r loving my writing thnks for ur cmmnts that encourges me
ya sure i'll do pm

Originally posted by: khusam

Haye rabba ye kudi kitna mst likhti h...
Someone help me i m going to mad fr my swetheart snehu...
Realy love dat was superb i read both 13-14 prt in one n amased
an happy dat they both r back together...
Muah... Love u snehu...

aww khusam thnkuu jaani bas aaplogon ki encourgement se h likh pati hun
thnks for ur lovely cmmnts
luv you