EK HASINA THI EK NAYI SURWAT

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LIKE ALL EK HASINA THI FANS I AM ALSO VERY SAD THAT THE SHOW HAS ENDED. BUT I HAVE A PLAN TO WRITE A FICTION ON IT. WITH THE SAME CHARACTERS BUT WITH A DIFFERENT TWIST I WILL START WRITING FROM TOMORROW. THIS IS MY OUT LINE



SAURIYA GOYENKA - THE PRINCE OF GOYENKA BUSINESS EMPIRE . A VERY HARD WORKING AND AMBITIOUS BOY.
KANGNA GOYENKA- SAURIYA'S SISTER AND A STUDENT IN GOYENKA COLLAGE. A COLLAGE FUNDED BY HER FAMILY.
SAKSHI GOYENKA- SAURIYA AND KANGNAS MOTHER. SHE HELPS HER HUSBAND IN THE BUSINESS .

DEV GOYENKA SAURIYA'S UNCLE ONLY SON. DEV AND SAURIYA BOTH WORKS TOGETHER TO EXPAND THE BUSINESS.
NITYA MITRA - DEV GOYENKA'S WOULD BE WIFE AND A PROFESSOR IN GOYENKA COLLAGE..
PAYEL MITRA- NITYA'S LITLE SISTER SHE AND KANGNA ARE CLASSMATES.

THAKURS

DAYAL THAKUR - A WELL KNOWN DOCTOR . HE RUNS A HOSPITAL IN KOLKTA.
DURGA THAKUR- DAYALS ONLY DAUGHTER WHO HELPS TO RUN THE HOSPITAL ALONG WITH HER FATHER . DURGA IS FRIENDS WITH SAURIYA , KARAN BASU, TARUN AND RISHI . THERE FRIENDSHIP IS WELL KNOWN IN KOLKATA . THAKURS AND GOYENKAS SHARE A VERY GOOD FAMILY FRIENDSHIP.

IF ANYONE WANTS TO READ THE FICTION PLEASE COMMENT . I WILL START WRITING FROM TODAY😃


CHAPTER 1

It has been two hours now Durga is waiting for Sauriya and Gang from a very long time now . She was thinking how they can be so irresponsible , after all Durga has other works to perform . She was thinking of leaving the place when Rishi entered .

Rishi- I know you are angry but trust me it is all because of Sauriya , he took too long to deecide on the final plan.

Durga- I know he is one of his kind where is he ? what does he thinks I don't have other things to do I mean , suddenly Sauriya enters Sauriya Goyenka the most eligible bachelor of Kolkata the cute heart throb of many girls in Kolkata . he was on phone he saw anger on Durga's face and he disconnected the phone. Durga was about to shout on Sauriya when he told her he was there to make the final arrangements and also to convince Dev that everything will be fine. In fact he was with Karan on the phone that is having a look on the final agreements .

Durga- Finally Dev is going to propose Nitya for marriage I mean why he is making so much agreements ? he should go and tell her- "Look we are dating for a long time, come on let's talk to our parents and get married. Hearing this both Rishi and Sauriya burst out in laugh Sauriya put his right hand on Durga's shoulder and replies.

Sauriya - Look Dev bhaiya has fallen for a normal girl I mean a girl who has her girly dreams about love and marriage proposal . She is not a tomboy like you, all the time hanging out with us and behaving like boys , Durga was about to say something when her phone rang. She picked up the phone and after a few munities she replied - I will get back to you on this in the evening Sauriya bye for now and without waiting for moment she lefts the room.Sauriya- jhalli hai ekdam. Sauriya and Rishi sat down on the sofa .

Rishi- Why you always pool her leg you know it makes her angry .

Sauriya- o come on she is my childhood friend I know her for years now and she is use to it . Now lets back to work we have to leave for the venue right now .

In the evening everything was set according to the wish of Dev white flowers candles and not to forget balloons . There was a little time left just before Dev and Nitya will reach to the farm house of Goyenka's . This place is near haridevpur kolakata . Durga was blowing up the balloons when Karan came to her and told her that dev massaged him and told him that they are stuck in traffic will be here in 10 - 15 munities . Durga quickly finished her arrangements and she like sauriya tarun and Rishi went to the back side of the farm house and watching nitya and Dev to enter the farm house. 4 years back dev proposed Nitya on this day and after two years of dating, they made their family aware about there relationship . Though Nitya and dev comes from a very different background but Suchitra Goyenka, Dev's mother gave her approval as she really likes Nitya a lot. When Nitya and Dev entered the lights turned on Nitya was surprised to see the decoration and everything . She was speechless. Before she could say anything Dev went on to his knees and said - Miss nitya Mitra my life is incomplete about you. I can not think about myself without you. Will you complete my life will you marry me. Nitya was totally spell bound she did not knew how to react she never seen this romantic side of Dev . She was num and little munity passed . This made Durga impenitent she was about to enter and ask Nitya for her answer but Sauriya and karan hold her back. Finally she said yes and Sauriya gave a signal to Tarun and suddenly a flower shower of rose petals is started happening . Nitya is smilling and she is very happy at this point Sauriya, Durga Tarun, Rishi and karan entered they all celebrated with Nitya and Dev there party continued for late night.

END OF CHAPTER 1*************************************************************************

HOPE ALL EKHASINA THI FANS WILL LIKE IT . PLEASE GIVE YOUR REPLY😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi 😊
I would definitely want to read.
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Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hi 😊

I would definitely want to read.
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Continue fast...add me to pm list pls...
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Ek kotha e darun! really no vamp, a fresh feel good concept. love it. pls continue it
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So u r bengali? i have seen u many times before, in this forum, Uttaran forum. but did not know that, glad to know that :)
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Nice update... You made nitya and durga alag alag... 😲 it's difficult to adjust to that... But well this is a very good start.. I really love it... Here Shaurya is a good Character... Wow.. Is great... I guess there are no villains in this story.. And yeah do pm me when u update next.. Don't forget that..
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HEY
first of all m really sorry for late comment
waise toh m not a fan of ek hasina thi bt i m fan of ur story...
i read ur story and i loved it...
its simply amzing...
n though i m not a fan of this serial i would love to read more chapters of ur story... so do pm me next tym u update ur story...
all the best for ur story...

love ya
harshita
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