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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey everyone since I heard this song I couldn't just move on so a very small os
For our dear shraman and this is my first time could not likely be a good one though but still wanna give it a try as this song so so reminded me of shraman after their 10 years separation with each other a bit edited version from actual scenes of edkv

*True love never dies even after being millions miles away or decades being apart it just grows with a ache and longing for each other *
~own creativity yet not so creative ^_^
Aaya na tu
Let's jump into the scene where shravan is having his great welcome party at the Malhotra mansion
And Suman so excited to see him after so many years and suman over heard the Shravan and Pushkar conversation "kaun sumo,mai kisi sumo ko nahi jaanta " these words crashes her hopes and also her heart breaks apart realising that the one she waited for years has forgotten her and the day she was going to clear all misunderstanding and repent for all pain that she caused him turned out to be a day
She knew that she no longer existed in his life and her apologies were to be left un said so she ran away
From there as she can No longer bear the voice that she wanted to her for so long had broken her to this extent. Shravan and Pushkar witness her leaving with tearful eyes while
Pushkar shouts at shravan "yeh apne kya kardiya Bhaiyya "
-what have u done brother
And he chases after suman so as to stop her and meanwhile shravan holds her ear ring and
Talks to himself saying "kyu aaj bhi mujhe tumhare aanso itna dard dete Hain "
-why is it like this that your tears still are so painful to me
And then vandana bhabi arrives saying that have you forgotten my promise that u have to present a simple peace of song to
All her friends as she promised them already saying you are an amazing singer not just a boring lawyer from Oxford and she drags him out to the stage and from there the only person he can focus on
Is his sumo and her red eyes which seem to be piercing through his heart and soul as all the other people
Around them appear to be blurry and he sighs and just looks up at her holding the mic and starts singing
Shravan:
Tum kabhi na kahoge
Kyun na hum hi yeh bol de
Ho kahaan yeh batao
Hum wahaan chal ke aa jayenge

Bheege bheege mausam khile the jahaan
Tere mere raste mile the jahaan
Baahon mein teri din dhale the jahaan
Aa gaya main ho

Magar aaya na tu
Aaaya na tu, aaya na tu x (2)
Then she feels to be dragged towards him as if whole gravity is pulling her
To the questioning eyes of shravan
And she just can't hold her emotions
Suman:
Baithe baithe sochun kabhi main tujhe
Aankhon ko meri tu kahin na dikhe
Aise mein main aawaz doon to kise
Hoon yahin main ho

Magar aaya na tu
Aaya na tu, aaya na tu x (2)


As they keep looking at each other all the childhood memories of them laughing carelessly as if
The whole world just got no worries or pains and just the two of them lost in their own universe
Suman:
Socha tha agar main miloongi tujhe
Mere dil ki baatein kahoongi tujhe
Shayad tu badi door hai jaa chuka
Main akeli reh gayi na
Jaane tu kahaan kho gaya

Then she pleads him through her eyes for one chance saying

Jaate-jaate tu mud ke phir dekh le
Dil kehta hai phir ik dafa dhoondh le

Shravan:

Aayegi kabhi woh yahin laut ke
Hoon yahin main ho

Magar aaya na tu
Aaya na tu, aaya na tu x (4)

They just walk towards each other with tears brimming in their eyes and whole time had just stopped and all unsaid words seems to have completed all at once and they hold each other in tight embrace to never
Let go if they did the fear of loosing each other creeps up making them shrink in to each other a lot more
And their eyes meet once again with a promise to each other saying the moment they shared is real and
Also that they will share all the moments coming in their lives whether it be saddest or the happiest together and all stars & moon sending showers of blessings towards
Them for their true love and happy life.

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This is finally done
Request:
I wrote all of this from my mobile so plz forgive any errors or typos and
My class today was so boring and I was hearing this song
And shraman just popped in to my head. My first ever and ever
Story might not be so good but wanted to share with all of you
I am not sure if I did well in expressing their emotions if not plz
Forgive me and this song just made me lift my pen *virtual*
For the first time and also I sincerely recommend you to listen to this song
While reading this is for better feels "Aaya na tu-Arjun kangnao
Hopefully I might haven't got the spelling right ^.^
Loads of love for every one
~princess~




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey!!
Lovely OS!!
Nice song.

Apoorva
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey!!

Lovely OS!!
Nice song.

Apoorva



Thank u so much Apoorva dii
Means alot dii when u said lovely os cause my it's my first time and also
I know how good everyone is here when It comes to being so creative at writing ⭐️
But I have just started 😊
Loads of love 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice OS..
Beautiful song.
If I can remember correctly it was episode number 5 and had it happened in the show that would have been the quickest confession in any Indian TV show 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely OS.
Beautiful emotional confession.
When shravan said 'kaun sumo, main kisi sumo ko nahi janta " I could feel the pain sumo must have gone through considering how patiently she waited for his come back..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Very nice OS..

Beautiful song.
If I can remember correctly it was episode number 5 and had it happened in the show that would have been the quickest confession in any Indian TV show😃



Thank u so much:)...I am always a fan of sweet love stories cause even a little bit of sadness and pain makes Me cry for days so I usually preferred it to be like main leads can have no MU's and they tackle
All the remaining problems around them together by each other's side. And our edkv ended so soon
They just proposed and it ended so I wanted it to be like alot of happy moments ahead from the veryy start 😳 😳.
Loads of love 🤗
~princess
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Lovely OS.

Beautiful emotional confession.
When shravan said 'kaun sumo, main kisi sumo ko nahi janta " I could feel the pain sumo must have gone through considering how patiently she waited for his come back..


Thanks a lot for appreciation of my little piece of art(not exactly though) 😆
But yes the song had just got me to the moment when shravan said those words
And I can also see the pain in his eyes even after his so called move on
When u can't forget her even for a second of his life. So I wanted them to just crash into each other
And forgive and for go their past and mistakes and just live the present moment
I feel so good that it connected to you about all pain and love they felt 😳
Loads of love 🤗
~princess
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u so much for liking it and also spending ur precious time in reading this
OS and making my day with an amazing comment 🤗
Loads of love ❤️
~princess
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Every story is important ⭐️
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: akrocks77

Every story is important⭐️



Thank you so much dear for so much love and appreciation
Love you this really is the best one line ever written.
Take care and wish you lots of love and happiness
🤗
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