Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
There was a reason why I was urging you to post this one and I'd never thought that it would turn out to be so beautiful once rewritten.
Yeah, I was avoiding cause the time frame when this was written was simply depressing, but anyway, I'm glad you pushed me into writing it...
There is something so powerful and hot about a woman owning and loving herself, her body, her actions, her LIFE and to be vocal about what she wants it's a beauty in itself. ❤️I know right! Totally! ❤️
And then for Shravan to let her make her own moves, let her take her own sweet time in exploring this new phase of their relationship was brillantly described.Thank you.. I'm blushing ... Was when I was writing and now as well😆
So many moments I loved when he doesn't want her to catch a cold when she is scared to stay without him even if it's from mere seconds and when the tension is so thick between them I could feel it while reading it.I'm so glad ya.. 🤗And my absolute favorite moment Sumo taking charge, if we ever had the chance to see their romantic moments I can bet that Sumo would have been few steps ahead from Shravan.
Hahahaha I doubt that, Sumo was on another tangent altogether...
Never has a lovemaking been written so subtly. ❤️Sigh.. I don't know what to say.. *Blushes*
Originally posted by: _Eternity_
zoyi..🤗
beautifully written. awesome piece..👏love it.❤️lots of love and hugs❤️
Originally posted by: Shahprincess99
The highlights are too many which to say though
Shayari is so intense touching like an immensely precious treasureOh hey Princess! Its been a while! Good to see you! Thank you!
And sumo being so bold and take an initiative to break the barriers
Between them made me 👏Yeyy!
Such an awesome piece thanks a lot for everyone
Who pushed Zoya dii into writing this storyYes! Word! I legit had to be forced :p
And one more person haan our pushkie pie
For bringing them together if not what could have happened of them
shravan's way of describing her made me so ecstatic
And their reunion was totally a blast just as the image
Posted above depicts totally a fiercy story.I'm glad you liked it so much!
Truly AMAZING in every sense
Their forgiveness for each other and mainly the realisation that they can never hate each other is something so heartfelt feel
😳 😳I know right!
Loads of love ❤️Love right back bro!
And keep writing such beautiful pieces of artwork for usWill do my best!
Take care Zoya dii
~princess
Merko nahi lagta yeh, ya woh hazaaron res kabhi bhi unres honge 😆
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