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zoyi..🤗
beautifully written. awesome piece..👏
love it.❤️
lots of love and hugs❤️
Originally posted by: akrocks77
ZOYA!!!👏
Apu 🤗I am out of words...it's just so so beautiful.⭐️Yeyyy!I always thought why were you after this piece, so much.I thought it was absolutely fine.And now?Now ...i know this was what was missing.This seems complete now.FABULOUS!!Till now Elysium was my favorite of all your Likhawat enteries.But you just out did yourself.Haye! Shukriya ❤️I love it...more than i can tell you in words.You just weaved magic girl.Sigh...I love this Shravan more than Sumo.HahahahaThank you Pushkar...if not for you then these two.😡Ahh!!...The Guilt!!This bold SUMO☺️Shravan was so clueless ...he was like what has suddenly gotten into her now.Abhi toh maarne ko taiyaar thi ab ye😆Hahahahahaha She's bipolar 🤣Glad that Sumo forgive him.Yeah!If this is what happens when you rewrite pieces.I would say try others too.😆Hahahahaha Yes Ma'am!I am greedy😉I know, karti kuch...Apoorva
Originally posted by: _anukulgr8
So beautiful, soulful and pure..!!!❤️
Had read the version in Likhavat but this one is also truly wonderful..!!🤗
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------UnresSuperb!! I loved it...I'm so glad ya!!!This bold Sumo along with her Shravan and their Haawt chemistry is 😃Hainaaa😎I love the chemistry that you manage to bring on along with their different shades and past baggage...You know exactly what emotions and how to fit them in what situations and that makes it all the more interesting to read...Would love to read this further...Please do consider continuing this if you have the timeHehe Yeah well, it was a one shot so I doubt I will continue it.. But I shall consider and if anything pops I will surely continue...Thanks for the pmLove😊
Originally posted by: .DreamWalker.
Rather than ressing and then waiting for indefinite time to unress I thought to wait for few days and direct post a comment.Aren't I Awesome ?I
Arey totally! Kya soch hai bro 😎know I am.You already have my more than fair share of resses so much that my conscience(believe it I do have one) feels the weight of it.
Hahahahaha weight 🤣Hilarious!
Coming to your master piece, You know I love you Right. Well not you(kidding or maybe not🤣) but your way with words ,the way conversations flow with certain warmth you know that homey feeling and ease with lingering angst somewhere underneath.I am a sucker for that.I could definitely feel the tension and chemistry by your words here.Sparkling and Electric 😆.Wah! Itni saari taareef... Thank you ya Sanju! Dil khush ho gaya mera 🤗
Keep writing or Should I say keep Re -writing 😆
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