Originally posted by: -Emerald-
Amazing OS
Thank you!It's picturesque penned so nicelyπHere Ramnath proved himself as good fatherYes, he did..! Finally !I liked the way Shravan started PCT convNever knew starting a conversation in a story is even more difficult than it is otherwise! πHappy to know you liked it.Sumo reply towards the end π³β€οΈGiving us Shraman goalsAh! Tabby sighs in relief!Loved it.. keep them coming ππΌWill try!#Missing Edkv πAlways!
Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Thank you Arthi for reading it and letting me know what you liked the most.π€
Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Forgiving Sumo, Caring Sumo and above all, a PCT sacrificing Sumo!!
Ab kya pasand kar hi loon Sumo koπAb bhi pasand na aaye to kya karey Sumo πHome in 20 minutes..mush at it's finest π³Everyday kinda thing yet so...π³Ramnath realising Sumo's sacrifice before Shravan even gets an inkling of it, now that's a novelty!!I always feel, the show was about the redemption of the elderly as much as it was of the leads. There were always two parallels... chotey n badey Shraman...Ramu-nimmo and Shraman. Therefore this.Secondly, i never felt Shravan was a MCP, he was trying very hard to be one. But Ramu kaka was! ever since ep. 1.To unka realisation zyada zuroori tha.A welcome one though.Haha..I prefer a road lesser travelled by.I am glad I wasn't lost in the woods though . πI always felt that they would make an awesome Sasur- Bahu duo.Ditto!This act of Ramnath was both of a remorse and a reach out to his son.Totally. You got the point.Things were strained..and still the way Shravan listens to his words with utmost concentration, he can't ever stop being warm to his dad, it was something that I always knew. His dad was a big part of his life, everything else notwithstanding.Being upset, hurt, disappointed is alright. But..disrespectful or indifferent, that's not Shravan. No matter what.And finally..the aghaaz e guftagu ..so very Shravan π³A difficult one to think. π³A home bound Sumo wasn't his prerogative ever, was she?πNever. Even if Sumo's mind go on an overdrive and she plans to be one.π..a heart bound Sumo was whom he sought.Agreed.I remember reading somewhere, it was an Indifferent woman who broke him.πBeautiful OS Tabbyπ.Thank you ! πAapke alfaazon ki Kya tareef karoon, woh toh saadgi mein bhi kayamat ki adaa rakhte hainπ..Beautiful lines you have written Babe!
This is so beautiful tabby specially the lines β€οΈ
Yeyy!
Perfect scene which was missed in the showIkr
Ramnath finally done something good for herFinally!
And shravan suman are always loveThey are !β€οΈβ€οΈ
Always love ur writingThank you !
Simple but beautifully expressed β€οΈ
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