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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Nik03

Alfaaz...

Your first FF Zo!πŸ˜ƒ
Yo bro!
The excitement and happiness...
Hehehe...



You Posted it in Feb last year..and here we all are today!
Feb! All I see is how frigging slow I am 😲
Feb..I remember the month!
Of course! You remember everything!
That day and today..some similar feels...maybe a coincidence?!
But a difference there!πŸ˜ƒ
Nik ya!
The First Thread...Started with Ranjish and after a soulful journey gave Sukoon at the end.😳
I only just noticed this now, that you pointed out now...
And now you're here with its second Thread...Second Thread Zo!
Yeah.. Second.. Maine socha tha mai 6 update mai hi pak jaaongi πŸ˜†


Hearty Congratulations Bro!
Aapko bhi!


Proud of you!
Brooo❀️
May you open many more Threads of Alfaaz!
Right now my only concern is I can finish it, and well..
Writer's block! Uff!
Way to go Girl!
Shukriya!
Love YaπŸ€—

@Bold Love you more!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res

****
Unres

Zealous si ZoyaπŸ€—
Nikka sa Nik! πŸ€—
Remember me? Hehe!πŸ˜›
You keep talking the whole day! How do I forget youπŸ˜†
I resed on 5th and unresing on 19th..😲
Ermm...
Replying on 30th πŸ˜†

Damn you Damon!
Sorry? No?
Ouch! *Kicked me?* Lagi mujhe ha! πŸ˜›
Kamini, mai kya ki?
Sorry ya Zo..


Hahaha!


Agnes!

Saw the cutest puppy face?
πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

Okii, no more Nautanki,
Coming straight to Upi...*Wah wah It rhymed*
Btw I already gave you running commentary..Fir bhi Not so Nikka unres to banta hai!πŸ˜›
Hahaha Chalo, Mai bhi tayyar ho jaaon, lamba reply
Ijaazat...Maang hi li aakhir..haaye re😳
Ek ne maangi dusre ne de di..Uff! Deni hi thi!
Haan! And Ijazat dilwake mera writer block bina ijazat aa gaya...
IDK what to do aageπŸ˜†
Ek number title as always bro!
Very well Justified!
I love the banner! ❀️
Yeyyy!
Shravan se nazrein hatao maamiji Pretty priti pe rakho.πŸ˜†
Nanu is bae ya..I love how in every update there is always a Nanu special Part❀️
Nanu is love! I love grand-parents!
Mama-Maamiji's Love story🀣
Now mami sings, I hate Love stories!
Hahahaha!
Ah.. Sumo working in PCT and Pushkie's call..Yaadein!
Bol...Sumoness and jhalliness always intact there!
Chup kar Push-Kar! Okayyy 🀣
Kya rhyme kiya hai Sumo!
Aisi hi reh!
Haan na! Ekdam dumb!
Kya hua hai bhaiya ko?..Questioned the right person. Smart Boy!
Lagta hai Preeti se Ishq waala Love hua nahi abhi thats why the intelligence!πŸ˜›
Mera Pushkar hai, don't stress!
Tu ne phir kuch de maara na uske sar pe.🀣
The oh so famous facepalm of Sumo!!
LMAO!
Sumo felt something was wrong too, and she had a brief idea as to what...Not only Sumo,I felt it too and had an inkling too...
Ji.. Sahi pakda hai..
Nahi, hoon as in jaag rahi hai or nahi hoon as in free nahi hai?...Bechara PushkarπŸ˜†
Batana mujhe msg pe kya ho raha hai.😳
Mere jaisa hai πŸ˜†
Hamper of goodies..MM..To meet Shravan...Yaadein!
Guitar..Aye Haaye!
That was the idea!
The sight and how
Naked Shravan..I mean half nakedπŸ˜†
Prominent vein of neck stand out...Oh 😳
Ji, mera Shravan hai, kapde aate jaate rahenge πŸ˜†
The song...The voice..The lyrics..Just Love! ❀️
And how well it justified Shravan's feels here!!!!!
I'm glad you felt it fit!
I so Love how with lyrics, You blended Sumo's Feelings, the questions popping up in her mind...Answers she knew deep within her heart but...ah that but!
Yeyyy! I took Lara's advice seriously...

Does he want me out? Of his veins? Of his soul? Of himself?...Ouch that hurts!
Though she knew its never gonna happen but the insecurities..This is Sumo!!
This is all of us.. No matter what, apprehension always!

Let the sun light shine down his face...The lyrics and the actions, Beauty and just Beauty..Love!!
Namik is beautyyy!

Sumo waited no more...Finally!!
Kahin to she did it!
Yo! My Sumo!

The vulnerability in his eyes...
He always was vulnerable..And the silent one!
But as we see, Shravan khamosh tha par uski khamoshi bohot kuch kehti thi and Sumo...Wo bolti thi par fir bhi khamosh thi!!
Made sense?πŸ˜•
Haan lots of sense! Samjhi!

The hug...no words no hesitation...just the need to feel closer to each other, to comfort each other...Closeness and level of comfort is increasing slowly!
So Loving this!
And, he's shirtless πŸ˜†

A hug and a variety of emotions!!!!
Beautifully penned down bro!
Love it!
Shukriya!

She was not only his solace, his sukoon but she was also his sanctuary. One he knew would protect his feeble self but one he also feared for crushing his soul...This is you!!!!
I love it as always!
Thats Zo special!😳
IDK what special me is, so thank you for always pointing out!

If only...
Complete...
Sigh!!!!!!

His heart and mind tore him to an extent of disarray...Ah the feeling!πŸ’”
We know it too well...

The movement of her supple lips against his firm collar bone caused a jolt to run through him. You're in my veins and I cannot get you out....Wow and just Wow!!!!!
That sudden impact is there..you know!
Bliss when you say that!

Broke the hug but still in contact..comfortably and happily
Upset pout..Aww man!
Hehe!

Was it surprise that I care? Or was it a sense of calm that overwhelmed him?...
Your Sumo is Love Zo! Bas!
IKR😎

He would share his life with her but almost never his sorrows...This one..
Painfully beautiful!
Sigh...

The swing..
The hesitation, fear, nervousness and then the relief...Sumo's reactions...I felt it all!
Thats how your writing leaves an impact!
Bas kar ya...

The silent apology..
I only returned cause I wanted to see you, to meet you, to be with you. I have missed you so much. I .. I needed you Sumo...The raw confession in there!
Love Love Love!!
❀️
Yo!

The dampness made him aware..Stay that way Shravan no one would mind. Not Sumo, not us!😳
Hahaha! Don't worry! More to come πŸ˜‰

Chala jaaon? Ijaazat hai?
Jaa kar wapas aane ki ijaazat zaroor hai tumko!...O Man!
So so so Love it ya!
He needed it , to make a name for himself , to make his loved ones proud!
He needed it and Sumo understood and supported him...Or kya chahiye!πŸ˜ƒ
The Chup! and It'll be okay...The ShraMan feels!
Aur kya chahiye?!

He had his permission to come back to her and she had his promise of return...Sums up Bas!! ❀️
Bas!

Is this love?...Kya yaad dila diya ya! Sigh!
Chashmish and now Sumo!
Uff Zo!
Hainaaa... The show had gems!

Drooling over the handsome hunk!
Sumo faayada utha rahi hai mauke kaπŸ˜†
Its the hormones...Zo! 🀣
Who wouldn't! Its the hormones!

Kumbhkaran ko sone do na yaar😳
The pair of eyes...I knew its Pushkie pie.. Chachiii dekhne laayak nazara for you Chachii come here🀣
Ahem Ahem...This scene would definitely help him one day..😳
Hahahaha! Oh you just wait!

Nange jaise so rahe ho..ShitπŸ˜†
Hahaha!
Perfect Timing Pushkie!!
Kya time pe entry maari hai😳
Sochne ki nahi samjhne ki baat hai...suna suna sa haiπŸ˜†
Any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental!

Ma ko bula Pushkie...Shaq door hona maangta hai!!
Naak unchi ho jaayegi Khandaan ki...Right Chachi? πŸ˜†
LMAO!

Kisi ko koi prob nahi hogi..Agreed Pushkar!
The happiest one will be Chachi and Ramu Kaka for a change will be happy too, no saas waala role na!πŸ˜›
Jiii!

You cant just leave..Pushkar-Shravan are Love ya!
The three of them sat on the swing, elbows on their thighs and face in their respective palms brainstorming as to how they would best this beast of a problem...Three idiots bro!!πŸ˜†
Thats what came to my mind first!
I didn't realise it looked like that πŸ˜†

Hearts may be heavy, but this was what Shravan wanted and Suman and Pushkar would stop at nothing when it came to him...Reading something like this is ❀️
I so Love it ya!
The Love and Bond these three shares is something else!
Jaans of the show!
Yesss!

Now it'll be interesting to read Ramu Kaka ki Ijaazat Mission with our own three Idiots!😳
It will be! I hope! Cause I have no blasted clue of what I intend to do πŸ˜†

Sukoon bhari and Pyaar Puran Update!!πŸ˜ƒ
Love it and Love you moreπŸ€—
Signing off as Nikka sa Nik after a long time!
❀️
Glad love! Glad!


P.S. There might be mistakes, ignore plz as I am too lazy to go n read it as its too long. Kaise read karte ho ya?
Pata nahi πŸ˜†
P.S.S. Take your time in next update bro tab tak I'll Unres on Series too
Soon!
P.S.S.S. I commented in my crazy self as you know so I dont know whats in there!
I know.. Pata chal gaya..
P.S.S.S.S. Jaa rahi hu

Bye!

@Bold Phew!
Nik πŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: orion23

@Nik Why would you need two reses?



@Swati You missed it πŸ˜†

Galat bande ko pooch liya!
You took it as a challenge Nik!
πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Ijaazat ho to. ..😳

⭐️

Behen?
Kab?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Nik03

🀣 🀣
Nik 😎

Reply mat karna!
Mai wapas reply nahi karoongi 🀣
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: orion23


Reply mat karna!
Mai wapas reply nahi karoongi🀣


Aise khyaal kaise aaya aapko 🀣
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

tabby aaram se..koi jaldi nahi πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Nik03


Aise khyaal kaise aaya aapko 🀣

Bas aate aate aa hi gaya...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: orion23


Bas aate aate aa hi gaya...


Nikaal do fir..
Sorry but no sorry..deal with me 😎
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Nik03


Nikaal do fir..
Sorry but no sorry..deal with me 😎

πŸ₯±

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