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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: orion23

Okay but I need to know your thoughts once you read ...
😎

Goes without saying bro!!
Mere se ruka hi nahi jaana😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Kis baat ki taarif pehle karu??
You sketch beautifully as well. Is there anything you are not good at?

The piece itself , as in the way you wrote was perfectly Zoya-ish 😊 (which is a synonym for perfect writing by the way)

The thought behind it all, especially the way a young Shravan explained Gods ways in the simplest of things around us. I have no words to say how wonderful it was. Also what I loved was the ease in understanding it.

Indeed he works in curious ways and when we do realize, it fills the heart with an overwhelming sense of belonging. No man can feel alone from that point on. And everything that happens in our favor seems like a miracle.

Also, this Shravan tops my list of most wanted version of Shravan😃

Jahapanah Justified!! ⭐️


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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Zoya Apii 🤗
Aap magician ke sath sath bahut acche sketching bhi karte ho
Multi- talented girl 👏
This peice is just superb
And I truly agree with Shravan God is everywhere and he cares for every individual
And I have a question and I will ask it here only
Aysa koi kaam hai jo aapko nahi ata???? 😉

Lots of Love ❤️
Zainab
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
You might not be Picasso, but your magic gives somebody serious takaar to the guy 😆
Where do I start?
First of all, you dedicated this beautiful, beautiful for me and I don't even feel that I am worthy of this brillance. ❤️

This is one of those pieces that leave you with a smile on your face and a strange sense of serenity.
Matrimony in Islam is meant to strenghten your Faith through one another's. and here Shravan guiding Sumo through the dark alleys of her life and showing her all the beauty God has to offer, Life has to offer through the hardships is stupendous and tugs at my heart.

I can imagine Sumo holding onto these every words, every time life is too tough to handle, every time the void of being lonely digs into the crevices of her heart: "He lives within us, he is around us, he is all encompassing..."

Faith is the most beautiful thing you can offer to someone and you have given it to us through two people we all see ourselves in. ❤️

Thank you so so so so much for this one! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Good fiction's job is to comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable...That's what your writing does to us readers Zoya...They disturb us in such a pleasant way (of course); that we are left wanting more❤️

You make broken look beautiful and strong look invincible...That's what i love most about your writing...Sukoon milta hai dil ko jab bhi tumhari fanfics read karti hoon🤗...So thank you for that😊

Thank you for the pm dear and update Alfaaz real soon😉...

Love, Sidhi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Hey zoya!!
This is such a heart touching shot. Like i was actually feeling lost from so many days and suddenly after reading this it feels like everything is gonna be fine. Life would be better someday.
i love how you said thunders are gods mercy and not his warth drawing connection to our lives, he does not throw thunders/storms our way for his warth but its his way of showing us mercy of teaching us something. The whole conversation about communicating with god was so pure so amazing and so different. For me this story of yours in a way is gods way of communicating it will all be fine. Just be patient and trust him.
My faith in him was bit dwindling but after this it will always be strong as ever. And My faith is gift from you . Thank you with all my heart. Thank you so much.
I will forever be greatful to you

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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

RES..!!!!
Mai first mai first

Here you go!


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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Kahan se shuru karein aur kaise! !
That's my predicament too, when its a comment from you!
Roohaniyat aur Mohabbat ka aisa khoobsurat mayl !!👏
Haye❤️
"Rooh ko shaad karey dil ko jo pur-noor kare,,
Har nazare mein yeh tanveer kahan hoti hai"

Is nazare main hai,,aur kuch Yoon hai ki maano... Nazaare ko Nazar main basa jaaye!!
Damn! So this is gonna be a hit Zoya with the best couplets ever so she feels what I feel comment! Right?
Wow!


The sketch has depth,, so has the writing !!
I'm glad you felt so...
Peeling off the layers...breaking of the wall...bit by bit..!!
Yeah! You nailed it, in the simplest form possible!
Is there a 'Z' on one those bricks...or that's my imagination! !😳
There is, its copyright 😆

Head held high she flew like the eagle, try as they may, vultures could never bring her down.

Tundi-e-Baad-E-Mukhalif se na ghabra, ae Uqaab;
Yeh to chalti hai tujhe uncha udane ke liye.

"You don't get frightened of these furious, violent winds, Oh Eagle! These blow only to make you fly higher.
Couldn't be a better way to say this! Gorgeous!

She looked out of her window to see the sky being cut into two halves by a sever bolt of lightning. No sooner had it been cut that it reformed again, much like her own self... such an impact full description! !
Thank you!

Someone is friends with nature... 😳
Someone sure is!

The bellowing of the clouds sounded like war. One she more often than not waged with those around her. 🤗
Hugs!

Kya Issey Nayaab Cheez Koi Kisi ko de Sakta hai... Faith! ! ❤️

Her Faith in God...Her faith in Herself...and Her faith in him! !

"Tu Dhoond Falak par Bagh-e-Iram Apna to Aqeeda hai,,
Jis Khak pe Mukhlis Dost Milain wo Khak bhi Jannat hoti hai "

Mukhlis... Sincere! !
Sigh.. You are rendering me speechless with each of these!


"He lives within us, he is around us, he is all encompassing..." Suman was mesmerised with the fondness that his face held, strong faith was the reason she figured.
So am I !!

"Dil-E-Beena Bhi Kar Khuda Se Talab,,
Ankh Ka Noor Dil Ka Noor Nahin"

"Implore for Enlighten heart from God,

Where vision of eyes and heart is thing apart"

Damn Cap! Bas kar..

So much beauty, I won't know what to do with it!

❤️


The words in which he explains to her...soul stirring! !
Which then, of the favours of your Lord will you deny? ❤️
Woh Rhemaan hai, woh Raheem hai!

He tore all her defenders down, working silently, softly, diligently her tore them all down. Her heart lay bare in his hands and it didn't scare her. It would have, it should have but it didn't.

"Hazaar barq girein, laakh aandhiyan uthe,,
Wah phool khil ke rahenge, jo khilne waale hain"

Barq...lightening!!
This is ❤️

"You will find a way, I know..." Shravan smiled, placing his right palm on her head.

"Nahin tera nasheman Qasr-e-Sultani ke gumbad par,,
Tu shahin hai, basera kar paharon ki chattano par "

"You don't have to make your nest on the dome of Queen's palace, Oh Eagle, you are royal, choose to reside on the peaks of mountains.
I have run out of reactions...
It happens to be my fav poetry!

You have left me stunned !!
You returned the favour!
Stellar update! !
Stellar comment!

P.S. These couplets are from my personal collection... I see myself in most of them...
And I think they are meant for a piece like this! !
I absolutely love them! These are so wonderful..
And if you see yourself in these, you my dear have the most beautiful soul!
🤗

Credit...original author! !

@Bold Cap Never have I ever been so stunned!
This was epitome of beauty!
Thanks love!
❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Hayee such a beautiful update 👏 😳
No words to say
Eagerly waiting for more like this
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Cap Never have I ever been so stunned!
This was epitome of beauty!
Thanks love!
❤️
My pleasure ! !❤️

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