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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

RES in biggest letters possible.

PS : Don't hit me 🀣

Mahi πŸ˜†

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Posted: 7 years ago
#62

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This was so cute! Great work Zoya!

Thank you so much Kenna!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: orion23

Now it's me missing you!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
That was fantabulous. .!!!!!!πŸ‘
Aap khamakah science side Mey ho. .. u definitely should be a writer man. .!!!!
This was really too too good. ..⭐️
Every paragraph every sentence penned was just just awesome. .!!! Just everything. .. I can't even quote πŸ˜ƒ
The title gave me such feels and then the writeup was just. .πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
The way he made her overcome her fear was sooo beautiful. ..
Even I talk in the same way...
The last quote πŸ‘
Wonderful wonderful wonderful. .!!!!!!!
Love ,
Your biggest fan. ...!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
Edited by ZehriliChidiya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Kahan se shuru karein aur kaise! !
Roohaniyat aur Mohabbat ka aisa khoobsurat mayl !!πŸ‘

"Rooh ko shaad karey dil ko jo pur-noor kare,,
Har nazare mein yeh tanveer kahan hoti hai"

Is nazare main hai,,aur kuch Yoon hai ki maano... Nazaare ko Nazar main basa jaaye!!

The sketch has depth,, so has the writing !!
Peeling off the layers...breaking of the wall...bit by bit..!!
Is there a 'Z' on one those bricks...or that's my imagination! !😳

Head held high she flew like the eagle, try as they may, vultures could never bring her down.

Tundi-e-Baad-E-Mukhalif se na ghabra, ae Uqaab;
Yeh to chalti hai tujhe uncha udane ke liye.

"You don't get frightened of these furious, violent winds, Oh Eagle! These blow only to make you fly higher.

She looked out of her window to see the sky being cut into two halves by a sever bolt of lightning. No sooner had it been cut that it reformed again, much like her own self... such an impact full description! !

Someone is friends with nature... 😳

The bellowing of the clouds sounded like war. One she more often than not waged with those around her. πŸ€—


Kya Issey Nayaab Cheez Koi Kisi ko de Sakta hai... Faith! ! ❀️

Her Faith in God...Her faith in Herself...and Her faith in him! !

"Tu Dhoond Falak par Bagh-e-Iram Apna to Aqeeda hai,,
Jis Khak pe Mukhlis Dost Milain wo Khak bhi Jannat hoti hai "

Mukhlis... Sincere! !


"He lives within us, he is around us, he is all encompassing..." Suman was mesmerised with the fondness that his face held, strong faith was the reason she figured.
So am I !!

"Dil-E-Beena Bhi Kar Khuda Se Talab,,
Ankh Ka Noor Dil Ka Noor Nahin"

"Implore for Enlighten heart from God,

Where vision of eyes and heart is thing apart"


The words in which he explains to her...soul stirring! !
Which then, of the favours of your Lord will you deny? ❀️


He tore all her defenders down, working silently, softly, diligently her tore them all down. Her heart lay bare in his hands and it didn't scare her. It would have, it should have but it didn't.

"Hazaar barq girein, laakh aandhiyan uthe,,
Wah phool khil ke rahenge, jo khilne waale hain"

Barq...lightening!!


"You will find a way, I know..." Shravan smiled, placing his right palm on her head.

"Nahin tera nasheman Qasr-e-Sultani ke gumbad par,,
Tu shahin hai, basera kar paharon ki chattano par "

"You don't have to make your nest on the dome of Queen's palace, Oh Eagle, you are royal, choose to reside on the peaks of mountains.

You have left me stunned !!
Stellar update! !

P.S. These couplets are from my personal collection... I see myself in most of them...
And I think they are meant for a piece like this! !

Credit...original author! !
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Wow Zoya,

THat was so spiritual...n I completely agree with u...The Almighty is always around us, with us n cares for us...His grace n His blessings never leave us even for a split second...

Ur Shravan is so spiritual too...I never knew about this...u guys create such fantastic characters that one just cant resist falling in love with them...

Awesome..too good πŸ‘

rgds
Anuradha
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Zoya that was really nice!

And the sketch is just Wow! MashaAllah.

Regarding faith, could not agree more. Allah is always there by us.

Thanks for the PM:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
RES!!!!
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****
Unres Finally!!
Am late and how much..oh!
Sowwii!
But aa to jaati main late hi sahiπŸ˜›

Series pe update itte time baad aayi..but aayi to Hope and Faith leke aayi.
Yahi to chahiye bas!

Okkk
The Walls!
The title...ek number!!
And very well justified bro!
"Is that it?
"No. That's a wall.
"It could be disguised.
"You're not very good at looking for things, are you?
"I'm good at looking for walls. Look, I found another one.
Derek Landy

Now the sketch..Gosh what to say?
Its so beautiful and so deep.
The cracks, the face and the freedom.
You are a one talented soul bro!

The starting..
I was done with those few lines!
Am still there that's how it touched me.
Am still there!

A person that listens to their heart always rots in pain ...πŸ’”Beautiful!
It made her rise higher from the shackles she was expected to stay in...She was fragile she was strength, she was soft she was powerful...she was a strong woman.
Do not Judge!
You don't know what storm I've asked her
to walk through!
-God

She looked out of her window to see the sky being cut into two halves by a sever bolt of lightning. No sooner had it been cut that it reformed again, much like her own self...O My!
This is... something happened Zoya! ❀️
Your love for nature and perception is just something else.
Really Humans and Nature are so similar!
Beautifully captured!!

She commemorated them once in a while for they were the reason her heart hadn't given up...Thats what we all do. So loved it!

Trust me...And just like that she did!
In this simple gesture, she said a lot!

I love it how you pen down ShraMan's convo...it always has that touch you know.
A look of calm spreading over his face...Mine too with a smile.
The expressions changes while reading and its stupid to see a girl sitting and reading wearing these diff expressions.πŸ˜›

Chalo, hasi toh sahi tu...Haaye ya ❀️
So damn loved ShraMan's convo here...
Faith..That keeps us going.
It is the bird that feels the light when the dawn is still dark.
The way Shravan explained..It was love!
Lightening and Thunder...who would have thought anything like that and to write something like that but you did bro.
Am the Sumo here listening to what you are saying and what you want to express.
He is there..always there to protect, to guard, to lead the way, to warn, to care, to love...He is there.
I read this more than once and when I left, I left taking that faith with me...happily.
You know what that means?
Hope is what I take from here, from you I always say but now I have faith too whenever I need, I know now.

The hug of God..Aww man!
A pregnant Sumo with bulging stomach and our loving and caring Shravan..
Kaash aisa milta dekhne ko..Nimik would have nailed it!

The change in Shravan..the understanding ❀️
The love they had was one of a kind. It grew up years by years fighting all odds, fighting with them, for them and now it stood tall and strong and stronger!

"You will find a way, I know..." Shravan smiled, placing his right palm on her head...That one gesture and it gives a sense of protection. He is her protector and he is her peace. He is the only one.
The faith he had in her and the faith she had in him.❀️

Their own little world of love and He is there with them to bestow his blessings.
"Yeah yeah, we love you too!" He said looking at the sky...❀️ ❀️
Nothing could be more perfect!
Nothing could go wrong!

The last quote is perfect!!
And yes it happens Zoya...I would be all lost, I would fight with him, my faith wavers but at the end of the day, he shows me, made me feel that he is there and it'll be all ok ,anyhow or by any means as you say.
Faith is there and it will always be.

Thank you Zoya for writing it and sharing with us all.
Am overwhelmed!

Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Love you lotsπŸ€—
Nikka sa Nik


Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Nik03

RES!!!!

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Warning: It'll be a long resπŸ˜†

Okay but I need to know your thoughts once you read ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
The Sketch Bro...



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