Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Zoya :D
Its been long and I am back.
And this is what I read first.

Girl ,I am spellbound.

When Shravan says he doesn't hate Sumo but is disappointed with her, you had me at it <3
Friendship does that <3


Loving it :)

Read that note that PMs will be sent to people who like and comment, I'll make sure I do both. Haha

At the other story updates soon :)

Much love
*hugs*
-God bless
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
amazing
absolutely loved it
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Wow this is an amazing start that to on Anniversay of edkv... It is completely different...

Sumo start missing her best friend and break her relationship with her selfish friends and repenting for her mistakes...

""The loneliest moment in someone's life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart, and all they can do is stare blankly.""
"F. Scott Fitzgerald

I think this is applied to Shravan.. His Mother left him, his friend betrayed him and his world fallen apart but he is completely helpless (Hats off to vishal the way he showed Shravan's pain in episode 16, when his Mother left him and when he went to sumo she also refused him as her friend, clearly remember how shattered Shravan was)

Shravan realised how lonely he is, how everyone is selfish around him, all of whom taken him for granted... Be it his Mother who left him with out any explanation, be it sumo who rejected him, even he thinks his father also left him alone..


Always love Shravan and nanaji bonding...

Good that they are talking to each other...


I hope Sumo ask forgiveness from Shravan instead of living with guilty...

The more the time goes more will be anger of Shravan for sumo and it will be difficult for her to ask his forgiveness...
Dairy scene was really emotional 😭
Continue soon
Edited by Sumodreamer05 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Hey Zoya Di! πŸ€—

My 1001th post with much gratitude dedicated to you.
Since you were the first person to welcome me here.

********************

It's a journey through thier unseen years.
Their pain and longing was expressed beautifully.

Aapke ranjish bahre lafzon ne kayal kar dala,
Un lafzon ne alfazon ko dil mein uttar laya.

Waiting for the next chap!

With love,
MeπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
@ Abhi OMG! Really!
Thank you so so much!
Honoured...
πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Hey, Zoya!

What a wonderful story, dear.
Why didn't I receive a pm of this story before?
*crying 😭

Dear, I must say, that the layouts of your stories are really amazing.
I loved the covers, and how you're moving forward the plot.
Great job. πŸ‘πŸΌ

What Sumo did to Shravan was πŸ’”
And how she's now hurting
because of her own actions is - double πŸ’”
I hope she'll be able to redeem herself very soon and Shravan will just hug everything better for the both of them.πŸ€—

Nanu is a darling here. *hugs to the old guy

Hopefully, Shravan will return soon. Will he?πŸ˜•
Dying to know.
So, pls updt as soon as you can.


Lots of love, πŸ€—
Lara.



Edited by devilaonmoon - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
RES Zoya di!!!!
This is going to be a looong one.
Hope you don't mind.

Love
Madhu
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

RES Zoya di!!!!

This is going to be a looong one.
Hope you don't mind.

Love
Madhu

Oh absolutely not hon πŸ˜›
Edited by orion23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Hey dear!!
great start ...very interesting
Very thankful to u Zoya :-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Happy one year EDKV anniversary zoya πŸ₯³

etta chotu sa update πŸ˜”

Ranjish hi sahi jisaki badaulat dono ek dusare se jude hue hai 😭

"Ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhaane ke liye aa
aa phir se mujhe chhod ke jaane ke liye aa
pehle se maraasim na sahi phir bhi kabhi to
rasm-o-rahe duniya hi nibhaane ke liye aa
kis kis ko bataayenge judaai kaa sabab ham
tu mujh se khafaa hai to zamaanay kay liye aa"

bas ye yaad aaya padhane ke baad 😭😭


heart touching update zoya and perfect as usual πŸ‘

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