Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 6

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much Cas 🤗

You are welcome! 🤗

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Zo 🤗
Aww Inna chotu update !



Title 👏 👏
Sumo ne apne fake friends ko jhaad lagayi

"Sumo ab tumhare nakhre nahi uthane padte, tumhari zidd nahi poori karni hoti, paise kis par kharchoon?"
Bechara Shravan. He misses her so much


I have always liked Choti Sumo's character .
She was mean to him at times but she also had an innocence which made you forget all her mistakes .

Nanu is ❤️
Dear diary


It touched my heart ..Really ❤️
Beautiful dialogues !



We were the very best of friends,
Or at least that's what I thought,
I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,
You turned into everything you said you wouldn't.



Length was never a problem for you . Drabble or OS, you're best in every category 👏
Awesome start !!!!
Loved it
Don't make us wait for long 😳
Loads of love ❤️🤗

PS.- Resh I unressed it first

Sooo beautiful...

Nice start dear. Looking forward to more.

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First of all a very happy one year anniversary to you Zoya...🤗

Ranjish...It was within both of them.Sumo ko khud se, Shravan ko sab se.!!
Beautiful Title bro...❤️

Sumo do realised her mistake after her bestie left...But she did thats what matters..!!
Am sooo happy that you chose to write from this point...Now it'll define EDKV very differently in Zoya style!!😊

Shravan felt soo lonely n lost. 😭
Shravan had always pampered Sumo, fulfilled her every wish, done literally everything that was in his reach to make her happy...N now he dont know what to do without her... 😕

Sumo is also missing him...thats new to see now!!
Hoga bhi aakhir its ZOYA's SUMO!!
Wapas aaja na yaar...This simple line line said soo much.It touched me.Beautiful one...❤️

I soo loved how you have shown Nanu worried about Shravan more than Sumo as he was alone there ,all by himself whereas Sumo had her nanu n family with her...Soo much needed...❤️

Shravan cried while talking to Nanu... 😭
My heart goes out to him...!!
Koi chidaane waala nahi hai par uski Sumo bhi to nahi hai... 😳

Shravan ki diary...Thought that she misses him...Discarded it...N then...
Diary, I miss her......Aww!!...So loved it!!..❤️

The ending was lovely...!!
I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,
You turned into everything you said you wouldn't....So true!!

All in all a blasting update Zoya... 👏
Truly Loved n enjoyed reading it immensely bro...❤️
Thank you for writing it... 😊

N I do want a PM...!!
Waise tan dassan waali gal nahi si par tussi specially keha si tan kar ke main mention kitta e... 😉

Loads n Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik 😆

Ranjish. Wow. That's a beautiful title. 👏

Finally Sumo stood up for their friendship. Wow. 👏

But the harm has already been done. 😕

Par sab thik bhi ho jayega . haina? 😳

Naanu ki baat suno. Phone utha aur kar baat. Dont repeat the same mistake again. This is what i wanna say to Sumo.

Shravan. My heart goes out to you. Always.

Diary, I miss her... And my eyes just welled up reading these 4 words.

Chotu Sharav in London. That is something we never got to see. I will be really glad if you will explore that part too.

aapki Writing style ki toh tareef kiye hum kabhi thakte nahi. But off late, I am blown away with the presentation as well. 😊

itna chinnu sa update. Thoda aur badaa ho sakta hai na. Just thoda. 😉😛

ranjish...i didnt even knew what that meant untill my mummaji explained to me.

Excellent start...
Good that sumo broke her friendship with all for nothing friends of her...
Shravan's monologue really awesome..How his Mother left him, how sumo betrayed him, even he thinks his father also wrong...
Sumo missing Shravan 😭.. Nanaji asked sumo to talk to Shravan to clear the misunderstanding which is nice...
Dairy scene was really Heart touching...
"When my own mother doesn't miss me, why would Sumo? "when your Mother left you, then there is no reason for you to believe any body but he went to sumo but she rejected their friendship..
Update soon