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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23


<font color="#cc0000">@Bold Thank you so much Ti!!</font>
<font color="#cc0000">πŸ˜›
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My pleasure di πŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres

Zo πŸ€—
Priii πŸ€—

I said I'll unres by evening but aajkal aisi halat ho gyi hai πŸ˜†

I feel sleepy whole day πŸ˜”
Lol I can understand ya... Too much kaam na...
Coming to the update
I'm loving titles of this FF ❀️
Justajoo ❀️
I know right!! Urdu ❀️
It reminds me of that song of umrao Jaan

Justajoo jis ki thi us ko
To naa paya hum ne
Is bahaane se magar dekh
Li duniyaan hum ne

For now I can relate it with chotu shraman
Aww yes! It's a brilliant song! Goes very well with ShraMan!

WTHπŸ˜† Cookie monster!
Eric is cool !! I like him πŸ˜›
I know me too!!!
Sumo started going to library ? And she reads there ?



Shravan se jyada mujhe shock laga 🀣
ROFL! Muh band kar makkhi ghus jayegi!
They miss each other and still won't talk 😭
Eventually they will ya...
I've already said his diary is the bestest part of this FF
Me knows!
You know I scroll down the update to check where dear diary is written *hides face*
Whattt! Cheater!
I love his diary and these are your lovely thoughts toh I love you ❀️
Toh theek hai... Maaf kiaπŸ˜‰
I'll be guilty for each time I smile while she frowns. I'll be guilty for each time I enjoy while she pushes her self in a corner.
πŸ’” πŸ’”
Jaan right!
I love Shraman-Nanu bonding ❀️
Me too!!
The phone call , Sumo longing to hear his voice was Beautifully penned πŸ‘
Shukriya!
When you're angry with your best friend,
Put aside those egos and hurts,
Just call them and say,
"I need you Idiot, at least to fight with me..."


So true !
Haina😳
The update ...you know it's awesome πŸ‘

Damon as always! Cherry on the cake!
PS.- Resh kyun mujhe angulimaal banana chahti ?
Terko apna thumb pyara nahi ?🀣
W*F! 🀣
ROFL!

@Bold Thank you so much love!
Your rock!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23


<font color="#cc0000">@Bold Thank you so much Shrujani!!!</font>
<font color="#cc0000">Appreciated!</font>

my pleasure...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely!! u have all qualities of a fab writer amazing !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Lovely!! u have all qualities of a fab writer amazing !!!

Omg!
Suruchi πŸ€—
It's so good to see you here!
Thank you so much hon!
πŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
Justajoo: Longing. What a WOW Title.
Eric. πŸ˜† Finally he got to be a part of the story.
Calculus . even i dread it. πŸ˜†

So thats how Shravan made friends there. And Sumo became Suman. hmmm. Interesting. Exploring the untouched parts of the show. I like.πŸ‘

Shravan's inner turmoil during his call with his dad. Ek line mein you summed up everything. Nice. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Pushkar is a sweetheart. He is being the perfect mediator.πŸ˜‰

You write these diary entries really well. Feels bhar bhar ke. 😊

Mail checking and leaving a voice message. The yearning is pretty strong.😳

"Suman heard and re-heard and re-heard his short message. It had been 3 months, 2 weeks and a few hours since she had heard his voice." For me this was the most emotional part.

She slept off listening to it.

The last quote ❀️

Beautifully penned...!!! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Unresd. ..page 17!😳
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
perfect justajoo πŸ‘
hope you can understand my short comment 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Justajoo: Longing. What a WOW Title.

Thank you Eva!
Eric. πŸ˜† Finally he got to be a part of the story.
Oh yeh! He's here to stayπŸ˜›
Calculus . even i dread it. πŸ˜†
I hated itπŸ˜†
So thats how Shravan made friends there. And Sumo became Suman. hmmm. Interesting. Exploring the untouched parts of the show. I like.πŸ‘
I'm glad you like...
Shravan's inner turmoil during his call with his dad. Ek line mein you summed up everything. Nice. πŸ‘πŸΌ
Shukriya...
Pushkar is a sweetheart. He is being the perfect mediator.πŸ˜‰
Puhskie pie is a jaan! The cupckae that he is, he's here to stayπŸ˜ƒ
You write these diary entries really well. Feels bhar bhar ke. 😊
Thanks bro!
Mail checking and leaving a voice message. The yearning is pretty strong.😳
Oh it's as strong as NP's abs πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
"Suman heard and re-heard and re-heard his short message. It had been 3 months, 2 weeks and a few hours since she had heard his voice." For me this was the most emotional part.
Glad I could drive the point home😳
She slept off listening to it.
Sweet right?
The last quote ❀️
Yey!
Beautifully penned...!!! 😊
Shukriya!

@Bold EVA πŸ€—
Thank you so very much hon!!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Jiski justajoo mein khud ko sameta tuney,,

Khayal aaj bhi usey teri tanhai ka hai..!!

Jiski aawaaz mein khud ko duboya tuney,,
Intezaar aaj bhi usey teri pukaar ka hai..!!

Oh my! Am I glad you write these couplets here? Hell yeh! It's gorgeous hon! So deep!πŸ‘

What I liked the most is his unhappiness in Sumo cornering herself...deep down he has already forgiven her,,all what he wants is an acceptance of mistake from her side..! Am i not even worthy of that! !
So perfectly summed up! That's exactly where the two are at currently ❀️
Sumo n the lullaby was heart melting!
Haina...

I loved the last part!❀️
Sometimes we just let our ego's win,,but it's not worth it!!
Exactly.. I guess I'm just trying to say, don't let ego come in the way of any relationship. It scorches... Put "We" before "Me" 😳

Hoping ki ye Intezaar jald khatm hoga! 😳
Here's to hoping πŸ˜‰

Fab update!
Thank you!

@Bold Thank you so very much Cap!
I've got to tell you, I just love your shayaris, keep them coming please πŸ€—
Also your comments are always so colourful😳
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