Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 16

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Finally caught up with this one.Sorry for being late was busy with studies.

Please don't say sorry of something which is highly important!

Studies first, always!
Zoya, ye tune kya kiya!!!

Kya kia?😆
I can't even pick my fav part in this, its all absolutely ethereal..

Aww yey!! Thank you so very much!!!
You portrayed their feelings and yearning for one another so well..

Haina😳
That diary part was so damn emotional... Chhotu ShrMan memories
More of Chotu ShraMan to follow😃
Loved it!

Yey!!!
Amazingly awesome😆
Shukriya!!!
PS- It is refusing to accept my like😔

IF ki Moh Maya... Chaddo!

I'll assume your phantom like😉

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Superb update!

Thank you!!

Both are missing each other!

Felling so sad for both of them!

I know right...

Finally they both decided to call, will be waiting to know what happens next!

Hehe thoda sa aur intezaar lagega😆

Pls update soon!

I shall try!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Both are missing each other but none of them taking initiate, she typing e mail & kept it as draft never dare to send. Shravan called Nanu but couldn't talked to him so left message for him Sumo also heard his message after almost 3 months. whole night she listened his message it was lullaby for her...

Well they are both pretty stubborn aren't they😉

Shravan made friendship with someone for the 1st time in his life other than Sumo...Eric is same like him both have same taste basket ball & Harry Potter...
Yes! This would be a turning point for him. Not just Eric, he's opening up a lot... BB, HP, Theatre group... He's growin as a person.. I believe that's what happened when he was in London all those years... He grew, hence Shravan Malhotra 2.0 is whom we saw..
Nice update & Thanks for PM

Thank you and you're welcome!
Sorry I m late
Oh that's alright, no issues 😛
Vinu

Originally posted by: Safire

Simply superb update!!!

Thank you so much!

And those last words~~absolutely true not only with friends but even with married couples!!!!!

Word!!!

Once again,lovely update!!!!

Shukriya!

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

indeed this is a special series ..throwing light on two teenage hearts .. their confusion,their questions ..

Haina... I'll take a lot of time but I'll show them grow😃 Something I always wanted to see on the show...

A glimpse of Shravan of impoving life in London was good .. he's getting to know his true worth & is in process of turning into a beautiful butterfly from caterpillar ..

Ekdam true! He's going to be his best version...

A glimpse of Sumo's deteriorating life was heartfelt .. trying to close herself in cocoon of loneliness & memories of her best friend .. trying to repent in solitude .. But afraid to seek apology in the fear of rejection,losing everything .. sticking to hope that might be false but a ray of strength ..

So very well put...

Suman is becoming what Shravan used to be...

Let's see for how long though😉

Pushkar is their common thread of info,giving them each other's hal-chal ..

Pushkie pie is a jaan!

Nanu is the source of compassion in their life , he's a nanu as much of Shravan as of Sumo ..

Nanu is life!

Glad that she thoght of seeking a direct apology & asking his forgiveness .. It was nice how they thought about truce but have their own inhibitions .. The lullaby of his voice for her was heart touching .. 👏

Decide toh kar liya, implement kare tab ki baat tab😆

And yes lullaby indeed...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

You very well know the art of keeping people in craving zone

with a cliffhanger at the end.

Haw! And you're the one saying this!!!!

Lara! Ab toh chun chun ke badlas I will take...

You have left us high and dry one too many times!

*Evil Laugh*

Along with Suman, now I too am waiting for tomorrow

and the phone call.

Keep waiting hon, Delhi abhi door hai😆

But why do I have a feeling

that something will go wrong???💔

Too many hindi shows are doing this to you😉

Why am I having this premonition in my antenna

that Suman's sufferings have yet not ended?????💔💔

There you maybe right...

Shravan's confusion's depicted nicely. 👏

The feels I was getting while reading was ❤️

Mission accomplished 😎

Now I'm waiting for Suman's accident and Shravan to get the news and come running back!!! (Imagination ran wild. I apologize.😆)

Oh my good God🤣

Do I look like Ekta Kapoor to you😆

No, seriously I'm eagerly waiting to know

WHAT will trigger Shravan's come-back.

Who said he's coming back Lara?

Updt asap.

I shall try to not keep you waiting long 😛

Lots of love,

Lara.

P.S. Pushkar and Nanu are the cupcakes of this story.

They will continue to be so... only the icing will keep increasing 😆

Love them.🤗

Me too!

Originally posted by: Joyness

Zoya lovely...

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Jahanpanah it is !! ⭐️

Hahahah Deepti 🤗

You say Jahapanah I go *Blush* 😳

the way this story is going, there is some hope in the form of Pushkie and Nanu, so my foolish heart feels like it wont be 10 years this time before they reach out to each other.

Your foolish heart may not be wrong after all😉

and then it felt like the moment is almost here and then you took it away 😭

Sadist pleasure gained 😎

keep playing with our hearts in this beautiful way.👏

I will hon.. I absolutely will...

unfortunately that makes amazing stories 😊

Unfortunately yes...

thanks for the PM and for a wonderful update once again😊

You're always welcome😛

Hey di !! Pehle toh sorry for such late comment
Baacha samaj ke maaf karo

Now coming to update
Its so good di 😊
I always wanted to read something on this topic
Feeling so bad for shraman
For shravan kyuki...he is such a gem jaane ke baad bhi sumo ka dhayan hai
For sumo isliye ...she become so calm and losse all her friends
And pushkar is always one of my favourite
Hamesha become a wellwisher for shraman
Plz do update soon di
And pm me for next time ...jisse agli baar comment karne mein late na hu 😆



Luv
Tinna

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Hey di !! Pehle toh sorry for such late comment
Baacha samaj ke maaf karo
Hey Ti!!

Please don't embarrass me, it's okay ya! No issues...
Now coming to update
Its so good di 😊

Thank you!
I always wanted to read something on this topic

Glad to oblige😛
Feeling so bad for shraman
For shravan kyuki...he is such a gem jaane ke baad bhi sumo ka dhayan hai
For sumo isliye ...she become so calm and losse all her friends

Haina...
And pushkar is always one of my favourite

Mine too!
Hamesha become a wellwisher for shraman
Plz do update soon di

I shall try!
And pm me for next time ...jisse agli baar comment karne mein late na hu 😆
You didn't get a PM?

What is IF upto?

That day Lara didn't get one, today you...

Apologies, I'll make sure you get one next time😃
Luv
Tinna