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Posted: 7 years ago
Jahanpanah it is !! ⭐️
the way this story is going, there is some hope in the form of Pushkie and Nanu, so my foolish heart feels like it wont be 10 years this time before they reach out to each other.

and then it felt like the moment is almost here and then you took it away 😭

keep playing with our hearts in this beautiful way.πŸ‘

unfortunately that makes amazing stories 😊


thanks for the PM and for a wonderful update once again😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Res 😳
Unress...
"The great thing about new friends is that they bring new energy to your soul."

" Shanna Rodriguez

Wow! That's very well put. And so so true!
I think Eric is like that bringing new energy being such a lively person. ... Look like Shravan and Eric have same kind of taste with basketball, harry potter movie...
Absolutely, Eric will be his rock. His best friend... I hated the fact that they didn't elaborate on that in the show. I'm sure they must have had a crazy rapport..
"A good friend is like a four leaf clover; hard to find and lucky to have."

" Irish Proverb
Agreed!
Sumo by now realised who is her best friend... That's why she is trying to be like Shravan and she has to... Now as Shravan is not there to help her out, she has to do everything on her own..
Exactly what I was going for... You caught that!
A true friend can see you in and out, that's why pushkar said she is missing Shravan. ..
Loving bromance... Good that Shravan knows now what sumo is doing at home, pushkar is such a sweetheart..
Pushkar is going to be to Suman was Eric is to Shravan πŸ˜›
On a general note, I think everyone should use diary so that we should realise what mistake we made in our daily life and not to repeat that and by writing diary our maturity also will increase...
I have to agree on that! It's the best thing ever😳
Diary part was beautiful... Shravan thinking he probably made a mistake of leaving India, but he should have left so to save himself from more heartbreak...
IKR!
Sumo getting emotional after reading Shravan's Message 😭.. . Nanaji just like Shravan knows sumo very well...
Like sumo's monologue and her determination of getting her friend back...
Hainaa...
Beautiful chapter
Thank you!
Love
Smita

@Bold Thanks Smita!
All this while I thought your name was Arpita hence the UN, but my bad...
I shall make note...
Shukriya!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Lovely. .simply lovely.

The longing for each other. ..the kashmakash.
Loved it.

Thank you so very much worm!
I'm glad you liked it so!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Faith28

Lovely...both missing and yearning for each other...nice...looking forward😊

Thank you so much hon!
Won't keep you waiting long πŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update
loved it
continue soon

Thank you so much for the appreciation Pinky!!
Will doπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

too good

Amulya πŸ€—
I actually miss every relationship of the show, loved that short part of Sumo-Pushku
There will be a lot more to come...
You won't miss any character cause each one of them will be having cameos here and thereπŸ˜‰
I can't read any SS/OS without getting emotional, I should learn to move on more properly
Aww man...

@Bold Thanks so much hon!
It's really good to see you here often!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

-- --unres--
My god... lovely update as usual...
Thank you so much!!!
U have magic in ur hands...Wat ever u writes always touches many hearts...πŸ€—
Aww that's really sweet of you to say... Thank youπŸ€—
ShraMan are missing each other like hell...😭
Yes that they are...
It's good tat sumo is ready to apologize directly..
Even shravan knows her state... feeling bad for them...
Not for much longer...
Nanu ❀️
He's bae for life!
Excited for next...
Me too!
Love.,
LavSriya

@Bold Thank you so much hon!
Means a lot to me!
Love back!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amks2016

"We were the very best of friends,
Or at least that's what I thought,
I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,
You turned into everything you said you wouldn't"

So much depth in those words Zoya 😳 back to Chota Shraman world.. Loved how they miss each other n reminisce ..
I'm so happy you liked the couplet! Chotu ShraMan world was so enticing on the show! I wish we got more of that...
Nanu is such a lovable character too !!
He absolutely is...
The diary writing by Shravan is adorable .. An Oxford law student stuck up with the love for his childhood friend n writing dairy entries makes Shravan the most lovable guy 😳 and the tomboy Sumo mellowing down is interesting .. But as I read most FF the character of Pushkar is becoming a personal favorite of mine 😳.
I know right.. I wanted this FF to be a gradual character progression for everyone...
This time also the title is apt " justajoo". Sigh !
Thank you!
Waiting for the next update ❀️
Won't keep you waiting long...

@Bold Thank you so very much hon!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

"A sweet friendship refreshes the soul."
It absolutely does!
I think that's what Eric did to Shravan bringing refreshment in him and help him forget his wound...

I agree.. That's exactly what he's doing...

"In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends."

" Martin Luther King Jr.
...
WhoaπŸ‘
How beautifully this line applied to Shravan and sumo's friendship, where sumo's silence hurt Shravan more tha anything and reason for him to run away from everything...
Absolutely! Word buddy!!
Sumo tried to be like Shravan as she knew Shravan won't be there for her any more to help her out in everything...
That holds true...
Good that Shravan knows the state of sumo from pushki..
He is realising may be he made the mistake of leaving her alone. ..
Diary part is emotional 😭 Really liking Shravan's monologue..
Nanu is really a jem of a person...
Nanu is a jaan!
"A strong friendship doesn't need daily conversation or being together. As long as the relationship lives in the heart, true friends never part."...
This is what I firmly believe in!!!😳
What a deep line is this.. .seriously True friends can never be apart...
I'm with you on this one!
Love
Shrujani

@Bold Thank you so much Shrujani!!!
Appreciated!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

OMG Zoya...loved this one to the core.

Thank you Reshma! I'm glad you did!!
Can't really put my finger though at what actually tugged my heart the most, him settling down or her unsettling from her familiar ground, him making friends or her turning a recluse, him learning to smile or her absolutely forgetting to..or the fact that they both missed each other as much as someone could possibly be missed.
I absolutely adore that you've summarized the exact gist of what I wanted the readers to feel in such simple sentences!πŸ‘
Orkut...yup I remember that one😊
Haina!
Hopeless selfless idiot...pretty much defines the Shravan I always knew and understood.
That's who he was honestly... No wonder he suffered so much!
He feels guilty of smiling while she apparently is hurting ..speaks volumes of the depth to which his love for her runs.
A love that will go unrequited for a long time to come...
I actually gulped when she asked Nanu if she could keep the phone with her. That one line held the gist of her guilt, her regret and her hope. She lamented over her insensitivity and wanted to apologize, I feel for her here.
Then I'm glad the point has been driven home...
'Kisi aur se nahin par khud se gila hai mukjh ko shaayad,
Khud meri wajah se meri zindagi chod gayi mujh ko'
Did you write that?
Cause it's downright beautiful πŸ‘
I am hoping they talk soon.
I hope so too...
Awesome one yet again Zoya!!
Thank you so very much hon!

@Bold Did I tell you I love your comments!
You seem to see exactly what I'm trying to show each time!
Thank you for such wonderful comments πŸ˜›
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