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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

"We were the very best of friends,

Or at least that's what I thought,

I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,

You turned into everything you said you wouldn't"

So much depth in those words Zoya 😳 back to Chota Shraman world.. Loved how they miss each other n reminisce ..

Nanu is such a lovable character too !!

The diary writing by Shravan is adorable .. An Oxford law student stuck up with the love for his childhood friend n writing dairy entries makes Shravan the most lovable guy 😳 and the tomboy Sumo mellowing down is interesting .. But as I read most FF the character of Pushkar is becoming a personal favorite of mine 😳.

This time also the title is apt " justajoo". Sigh !

Waiting for the next update ❤️

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Sumodreamer05

@Sumodreamer05

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

"A sweet friendship refreshes the soul."

I think that's what Eric did to Shravan bringing refreshment in him and help him forget his wound... .

"In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends."

" Martin Luther King Jr....
How beautifully this line applied to Shravan and sumo's friendship, where sumo's silence hurt Shravan more tha anything and reason for him to run away from everything...
Sumo tried to be like Shravan as she knew Shravan won't be there for her any more to help her out in everything...
Good that Shravan knows the state of sumo from pushki..
He is realising may be he made the mistake of leaving her alone. ..
Diary part is emotional 😭 Really liking Shravan's monologue..
Nanu is really a jem of a person...

"A strong friendship doesn't need daily conversation or being together. As long as the relationship lives in the heart, true friends never part."...

What a deep line is this.. .seriously True friends can never be apart...

Love
Shrujani

Edited by Sumodreamer05 - 7 years ago

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

OMG Zoya...loved this one to the core.

Can't really put my finger though at what actually tugged my heart the most, him settling down or her unsettling from her familiar ground, him making friends or her turning a recluse, him learning to smile or her absolutely forgetting to..or the fact that they both missed each other as much as someone could possibly be missed.

Orkut...yup I remember that one😊

Hopeless selfless idiot...pretty much defines the Shravan I always knew and understood.

He feels guilty of smiling while she apparently is hurting ..speaks volumes of the depth to which his love for her runs.

I actually gulped when she asked Nanu if she could keep the phone with her. That one line held the gist of her guilt, her regret and her hope. She lamented over her insensitivity and wanted to apologize, I feel for her here.

'Kisi aur se nahin par khud se gila hai mukjh ko shaayad,

Khud meri wajah se meri zindagi chod gayi mujh ko'

I am hoping they talk soon.

Awesome one yet again Zoya!!

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WhiteNoise

@WhiteNoise

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Finally caught up with this one.Sorry for being late was busy with studies.
Zoya, ye tune kya kiya!!!
I can't even pick my fav part in this, its all absolutely ethereal..
You portrayed their feelings and yearning for one another so well..
That diary part was so damn emotional... Chhotu ShrMan memories

Loved it!
Amazingly awesome😆

PS- It is refusing to accept my like😔

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv
RES
chapter 1 abhi tak UNRES nahi kiya😆
chalo donon ek hi baar kar doongi 😊
tuesday tak ho jayega. pakka.

love you Zoya di
Madhu

Hey ya Madhu!

Take your time hon..

No issues 😛

Love back!

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Superb update!

Both are missing each other!

Felling so sad for both of them!

Finally they both decided to call, will be waiting to know what happens next!

Pls update soon!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Both are missing each other but none of them taking initiate, she typing e mail & kept it as draft never dare to send. Shravan called Nanu but couldn't talked to him so left message for him Sumo also heard his message after almost 3 months. whole night she listened his message it was lullaby for her...Shravan made friendship with someone for the 1st time in his life other than Sumo...Eric is same like him both have same taste basket ball & Harry Potter...

Nice update & Thanks for PM
Sorry I m late

Vinu

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

Simply superb update!!!

And those last words~~absolutely true not only with friends but even with married couples!!!!!

Once again,lovely update!!!!

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

indeed this is a special series ..throwing light on two teenage hearts .. their confusion,their questions ..

A glimpse of Shravan of impoving life in London was good .. he's getting to know his true worth & is in process of turning into a beautiful butterfly from caterpillar ..

A glimpse of Sumo's deteriorating life was heartfelt .. trying to close herself in cocoon of loneliness & memories of her best friend .. trying to repent in solitude .. But afraid to seek apology in the fear of rejection,losing everything .. sticking to hope that might be false but a ray of strength ..

Pushkar is their common thread of info,giving them each other's hal-chal ..

Nanu is the source of compassion in their life , he's a nanu as much of Shravan as of Sumo ..

Glad that she thoght of seeking a direct apology & asking his forgiveness .. It was nice how they thought about truce but have their own inhibitions .. The lullaby of his voice for her was heart touching .. 👏

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

You very well know the art of keeping people in craving zone

with a cliffhanger at the end.

Along with Suman, now I too am waiting for tomorrow

and the phone call.

But why do I have a feeling

that something will go wrong???💔

Why am I having this premonition in my antenna

that Suman's sufferings have yet not ended?????💔💔

Shravan's confusion's depicted nicely. 👏

The feels I was getting while reading was ❤️

Now I'm waiting for Suman's accident and Shravan to get the news and come running back!!! (Imagination ran wild. I apologize.😆)

No, seriously I'm eagerly waiting to know

WHAT will trigger Shravan's come-back.

Updt asap.

Lots of love,

Lara.

P.S. Pushkar and Nanu are the cupcakes of this story.

Love them.🤗

Edited by devilaonmoon - 7 years ago

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