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Posted: 7 years ago
Res
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Unres

Zo πŸ€—
I said I'll unres by evening but aajkal aisi halat ho gyi hai πŸ˜†

I feel sleepy whole day πŸ˜”

Coming to the update
I'm loving titles of this FF ❀️
Justajoo ❀️
It reminds me of that song of umrao Jaan

Justajoo jis ki thi us ko
To naa paya hum ne
Is bahaane se magar dekh
Li duniyaan hum ne

For now I can relate it with chotu shraman



Eric is cool !! I like him πŸ˜›
Sumo started going to library ? And she reads there ?



Shravan se jyada mujhe shock laga 🀣
They miss each other and still won't talk 😭
I've already said his diary is the bestest part of this FF
You know I scroll down the update to check where dear diary is written *hides face*
I love his diary and these are your lovely thoughts toh I love you ❀️

I'll be guilty for each time I smile while she frowns. I'll be guilty for each time I enjoy while she pushes her self in a corner.
πŸ’” πŸ’”
I love Shraman-Nanu bonding ❀️
The phone call , Sumo longing to hear his voice was Beautifully penned πŸ‘

When you're angry with your best friend,
Put aside those egos and hurts,
Just call them and say,
"I need you Idiot, at least to fight with me..."


So true !

The update ...you know it's awesome πŸ‘


PS.- Resh kyun mujhe angulimaal banana chahti ?
Terko apna thumb pyara nahi ?🀣

Edited by sapphire3 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Jiski justajoo mein khud ko sameta tuney,,
Khayal aaj bhi usey teri tanhai ka hai..!!

Jiski aawaaz mein khud ko duboya tuney,,
Intezaar aaj bhi usey teri pukaar ka hai..!!

What I liked the most is his unhappiness in Sumo cornering herself...deep down he has already forgiven her,,all what he wants is an acceptance of mistake from her side..! Am i not even worthy of that! !
Sumo n the lullaby was heart melting!

I loved the last part!❀️
Sometimes we just let our ego's win,,but it's not worth it!!

Hoping ki ye Intezaar jald khatm hoga! 😳

Fab update!


Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
RES
chapter 1 abhi tak UNRES nahi kiyaπŸ˜†
chalo donon ek hi baar kar doongi 😊
tuesday tak ho jayega. pakka.

love you Zoya di
Madhu
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res 😳
****
Unres
Zealous si Zoya πŸ€—
Sowii Zoya...Am very late πŸ˜•
Really sorry ha.. 😊

Coming to the upiii
Justjoo...beautiful title ❀️

Shravan adjusting his glasses...haaye
That chota Shravan...❀️

Calculus theorem... 🀒
N this Eric is seriously dramebaaz... πŸ˜†

Sumo was becoming what Shravan was used to be...Tables really have turned!!
Seeing Sumo like this evokes a different feeling..!!
Saving drafts, thinking but not sending friend request...She is truly resenting her loss...her biggest loss!!

"Beta koi kami toh nahi hai na?"...Kami hi kami hai Ramu kaka..Tum nahi samjhoge!!
Kuch bhi to nahi hai...koi bhi to nahi hai 😭

I soo adore Shravan-Pushkie bond...❀️
He was always that connection between ShraMan.

One phone call and I'm proved mighty wrong...Oh!!...Poor baby 😭
Shravan had surely gained much needed self confidence in London...learnt his worth...The most important thing in ones life!!

I'll be guilty for each time I smile while she frowns. I'll be guilty for each time I enjoy while she pushes her self in a corner....This is ShraMan...This is their friendship...This is their unsaid untold Unseen Love!!

Why is life so confusing?...This is the question evrry person asks but there is no one to answer..!!
He ended with a question...He always had!!

"You're a hopeless selfless idiot Shravan!"...True!!

Suman heard and re-heard and re-heard his short message. It had been 3 months, 2 weeks and a few hours since she had heard his voice. He sounded tired but he was fine. Why didn't he ask about her? Why would he Sumo, you gave him all the reasons to keep away from you, she thought....Really touching!!
Really feel for her...!!
Loved the way Sumo accepted that she misses Shravan infront of Nanu...beautiful ❀️


she descended the stairs listening to his voice message over and over again....The most most touching part!!
Beautiful one...❀️
N loved the talk of Sumo with her own self!!

Loved the ending...Sumo's hope gave me hope.. 😳

Wonderful update Zoya... πŸ‘
Here we can see Shravan in Sumo n Sumo in Shravan...❀️
Loved it to the core..❀️

Thanks for the pm n do cont soonish!!
Loads n Loads of Love n πŸ€—
Nikka sa Nik ❀️
Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res 😳
Unress...
"The great thing about new friends is that they bring new energy to your soul."

" Shanna Rodriguez

I think Eric is like that bringing new energy being such a lively person. ... Look like Shravan and Eric have same kind of taste with basketball, harry potter movie...

"A good friend is like a four leaf clover; hard to find and lucky to have."

" Irish Proverb
Sumo by now realised who is her best friend... That's why she is trying to be like Shravan and she has to... Now as Shravan is not there to help her out, she has to do everything on her own..
A true friend can see you in and out, that's why pushkar said she is missing Shravan. ..
Loving bromance... Good that Shravan knows now what sumo is doing at home, pushkar is such a sweetheart..
On a general note, I think everyone should use diary so that we should realise what mistake we made in our daily life and not to repeat that and by writing diary our maturity also will increase...
Diary part was beautiful... Shravan thinking he probably made a mistake of leaving India, but he should have left so to save himself from more heartbreak...
Sumo getting emotional after reading Shravan's Message 😭.. . Nanaji just like Shravan knows sumo very well...
Like sumo's monologue and her determination of getting her friend back...
Beautiful chapter

Love
Smita
Edited by Arpi1234 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely. .simply lovely.
The longing for each other. ..the kashmakash.
Loved it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely...both missing and yearning for each other...nice...looking forward😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
too good
I actually miss every relationship of the show, loved that short part of Sumo-Pushku

I can't read any SS/OS without getting emotional, I should learn to move on more properly
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res
-- --unres--
My god... lovely update as usual...
U have magic in ur hands...Wat ever u writes always touches many hearts...πŸ€—
ShraMan are missing each other like hell...😭
It's good tat sumo is ready to apologize directly..
Even shravan knows her state... feeling bad for them...
Nanu ❀️
Excited for next...
Love.,
LavSriya
Edited by amlavs - 7 years ago
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