Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 11

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

This has become my own Jashn-e-Rekhta..! 😳

Oh my my 😳 *Blushes*

Koi maazi ke tasawwur se hiraasan hai,,,Kisi ko deta hai ye dard se taskeen..!

Koi khud se pashemaan hai,,,Kisi ke dil mein ranjishein hai..!

Wow! Dude you're very good!!!! 👏

Nanu is trying his bit..! 🤗

Phone utha,, number ghuma... honey de...all is well..!!

Yo baby!!!

This is just the beginning!

Yes it is, but it's not necessarily gory continuation...

Fab update! Interesting plot!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome..

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Zoya :D

OMG!!! Adeeba!!!! 🤗
Its been long and I am back.

It's been so long I thought you left!!!!
And this is what I read first.
You're back!
Girl ,I am spellbound.
I'm just happy you're back😆
When Shravan says he doesn't hate Sumo but is disappointed with her, you had me at it <3
Friendship does that <3
Haina! It just makes it impossible to hate...

Loving it :)
Yey!!!
Read that note that PMs will be sent to people who like and comment, I'll make sure I do both. Haha
Hahaha you were receiving all this while na? You'd continue to 😆
At the other story updates soon :)
I'll wait!
Much love
*hugs*
-God bless

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing

absolutely loved it

continue soon

superb

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Wow this is an amazing start that to on Anniversay of edkv... It is completely different...
Thank you so very much!!
Sumo start missing her best friend and break her relationship with her selfish friends and repenting for her mistakes...
Way to go right...
""The loneliest moment in someone's life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart, and all they can do is stare blankly.""
"F. Scott Fitzgerald
Wow! This is so very deep👏
I think this is applied to Shravan.. His Mother left him, his friend betrayed him and his world fallen apart but he is completely helpless (Hats off to vishal the way he showed Shravan's pain in episode 16, when his Mother left him and when he went to sumo she also refused him as her friend, clearly remember how shattered Shravan was)
Absolutely... Its as though this was written for him...

And Vishal👏 The kid was impeccable.. I wept with him...
Shravan realised how lonely he is, how everyone is selfish around him, all of whom taken him for granted... Be it his Mother who left him with out any explanation, be it sumo who rejected him, even he thinks his father also left him alone..
He thinks right haina? Sumo chalo she was a kid.. But his mom, his dad.. Pathetic!

Always love Shravan and nanaji bonding...
Me too!
Good that they are talking to each other...
Yo...

I hope Sumo ask forgiveness from Shravan instead of living with guilty...
We'll see about that...
The more the time goes more will be anger of Shravan for sumo and it will be difficult for her to ask his forgiveness...

Agreed...
Dairy scene was really emotional 😭
Continue soon

Originally posted by: AbhilashaM

Hey Zoya Di! 🤗

Cupcake 🤗 I've missed you!
My 1001th post with much gratitude dedicated to you.

Since you were the first person to welcome me here.

You have no idea how happy this makes me!

Thank you so much Abhi ❤️

Love you!

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It's a journey through thier unseen years.

Their pain and longing was expressed beautifully.

Thank you so much 😳

Aapke ranjish bahre lafzon ne kayal kar dala,

Un lafzon ne alfazon ko dil mein uttar laya.

Wow👏 Aap bhi kamal likhte ho😛

Waiting for the next chap!

Me too!

With love,

Me😃

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey, Zoya!

Lara🤗

What a wonderful story, dear.

Thank you!

Why didn't I receive a pm of this story before?

*crying 😭

Must have been a technical glitch... I'll look into it...

Sowwieee...

Dear, I must say, that the layouts of your stories are really amazing.

I loved the covers, and how you're moving forward the plot.

Great job. 👍🏼

Thank you so so much! I wanted this piece to stand out from my other works...

I'm glad you noticed 😳

What Sumo did to Shravan was 💔

And how she's now hurting

because of her own actions is - double 💔

I hope she'll be able to redeem herself very soon and Shravan will just hug everything better for the both of them.🤗

About the hug? I'm not so sure...

But the res, we can work on it right?

Nanu is a darling here. *hugs to the old guy

Group hug!

Hopefully, Shravan will return soon. Will he?😕

Who knows, only time will tell...

Dying to know.

So, pls updt as soon as you can.

I shall try 😃

Lots of love, 🤗

Lara.

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Hey dear!!

Suruchi 🤗 You're back! I've missed you!!!

great start ...very interesting

Thanks so much!!

Very thankful to u Zoya :-)

You're welcome sweets!

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Happy one year EDKV anniversary zoya 🥳

Happy one year anniversary to you too Priety

etta chotu sa update 😔

Haanji.. iss series ke chotu hi honge mostly...

Ranjish hi sahi jisaki badaulat dono ek dusare se jude hue hai 😭

"Ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhaane ke liye aa

aa phir se mujhe chhod ke jaane ke liye aa

pehle se maraasim na sahi phir bhi kabhi to

rasm-o-rahe duniya hi nibhaane ke liye aa

kis kis ko bataayenge judaai kaa sabab ham

tu mujh se khafaa hai to zamaanay kay liye aa"

bas ye yaad aaya padhane ke baad 😭😭

Wow👏

Such beautiful lines!

I'm honoured that you were reminded of these reading my piece 😳

heart touching update zoya and perfect as usual 👏

Thanks a ton hon!

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

'Sabab rone ka woh pooche,

Toh bas itna bata dena,

Wahan hum has nahin paate, jahan par woh nahi hote'

Arey! Oho 👏 Mehfil loot li! What words 👏 Sab ek se badhke ek talented hai yahan...

Too little Sumo and perhaps too late.

I wouldn't be so sure...

You didn't value him then, and your remorse is of no value now.

Maybe on the show there wasn't.. not around here I assure you😉

Usse kaun batayega ki tum roti ho, kya fark padhta hai.

Kisi ki baaton par yakin kahan hoga usse, tum ne toh uske yakin par hi vaar kiya hai.

Word! Kisi aur ki baaton par kabhi yakeen nahi hoga usko...

Just make use of that technology called telephone lines girl and give him a call. . You have no idea how you are going to yearn for him going forward.

I'll convey your message 😆

Awesome Piece Zoya, a tad too small though but perfect in itself.

These pieces would be smaller as opposed to my usual stuff... But I'll work on making them a little longer...