Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 10

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Ranjish❤️

Finally you're here with the update

Yup!

I really wanted sumo to realise that what she did was wrong and apologise to him...10 year's is a long time man

And she did...she realised she was wrong and left all those stupid people for HER CHASHMISH in damn! This gives feels

Hahaha😆

Nanu knows it all😆😆

And that diary 😭😭😭

Oh god! He's so sad...so lonely...so alone and he needs her so muchhh🥺

Itna dard 😭😭

He will be okay...

But always beautifully penned 👏👏👏

Thanks!

Please update soon

Sure!

Thanks for p.m😃

Anytime!

Originally posted by: Safire

This was so very emotional...

I felt very sad for both Sumo and Shravan...

That was the whole idea 😉

Eager to read whether Sumo will call Shravan or not...

Let's see...

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Zoya..

aap ke baare me likhne se pehle mujhe alfaaz dhundne padete hain 😊

Aww man!

What I liked about it

everything would be too vague but yeah everything. 😃

Shukriya!

now precisely I like two things.

Firstly the flow of the story. We skip 10 years so quickly always while thinking of Shraman. those ten years are what made them what they are today and you are exploring them first. I loved it to the core.❤️

I'm taking this one slow...

And then where you always win as a writer. When you write Shravan you are Shravan, when you write Suman you are Suman. Today you wrote as teenage Shraman and its just them I can read in here. No Zoya here. 👏

Wow that's huge!

Thank you so much Deepti😳

Jahanpanah... wish I was half the writer you are ever!! 👏

You're being modest! I'm sure you're a wonderful writer!

Jahapanah😆

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Unresed on page 8 😎

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

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Zoyi 🤗

Resh 🤗

Yeh tera update hai believe nhi hota 😆 Itna chotu sa

Shock laga 😆

Ab aadat daal le... Thoda idhar udhar but majorly sizing would be like this...

But long ho ya short, my Zoyi always rocks 😛 🤗

Thank you!!!

Ekdum mast wala tha.

Shukriya!

Ranjish ❤️

Finally sumo ko thori akal aayi. Apne idiot friends ki band bjayi 👏

Meri Sumo hai re, akal toh koot koot ke bhari hai😆

But humara poor shravu 😭

His mother, the center of his world, had left him like he meant nothing. She didn't even consider him worthy of an explanation or a good bye. His best friend as it turns out never was his friend. She simply used him, to get her work done. He had been royally played.

"Poor" Shravu indeed!

It breaks my heart when I imagine it 😭

He will be fine soon...

The diary note is fabulous 👏

Beautifully expressed.

Thanks!

Aur dialogues k toh kya kehne hai 👏

U r a pro in that.

Aww man! Shukriya!

And nanu is a Darling ❤️

How well he understand both.

Haina!

We were the very best of friends,

Or at least that's what I thought,

I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,

You turned into everything you said you wouldn't.

This is just superb 👏

*Grinning like a fool*

Everyday u just give us a new reason to be proud of u 🤗

Arey ya! Resh 🤗

Loved it and love u ❤️ 🤗

Love you too!

P.S.- Pri it doesn't matter. I resed first 😎

LMAO!

Tum dono ke competition mai meri nikal padi!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Flashback of EDKV ...after Shravan left to London how was his life in London, what all he did there, how was his life, was he missing Sumo or started to hate her because she was not there in his side when he needed her..

Ji😃

but was he that tall in his teenage, his height was normal right then why Sumo calling him I miss u Khutub Minar... it's just my opinion...
Yes he was... At that age he was taller than an average child... Hence the endearment 😛
Thanks for PM
You're welcome!
Vinu

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Indeed its a beautiful series ..

Thank you so much!

Often we realize worth of someone when we lose him and then realize how we took him/her for granted .. But then its important that we realize & repent .. I liked it how Sumo rebuked & called off her fake friends .. Though her loneliness is a sad thing coz she was way more attached to him then she noticed ..

So very well put buddy 👏

It was even more heartbreaking for Shravan that he lost all who were dear to him & also remained lonely ..Irony ! How he had money but not the one to spend on .. he may be angry but he loved her more than his anger .. His entry in diary was so touching ..

Irony indeed.. I just always perceived him to be the kind that would write a diary, he was a poet, poet's have depth...

The best part was he knew that she missed him & gone all quiet & was waiting for her call & she knew that he was lonely there & wanted a friend & she was ready to seek forgiveness ..

Soulmates

Looking forward to next part ..

Me too😉

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1

Interesting plot. I liked the POVs of Shraman which was actually missing in the series. There were many situations where the exact feelings of them had to be shown, but unfortunatly not shown. Thanx to you writers who are getting the smallest to smallest feelings for us to read

Originally posted by: orion23

Swag toh dekho😆

Impudence baaki hai...

😉

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Woh v ho jayega 😎