ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 8

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Wah ! wah ! that kicking him was😆but the fact that they both care for each other no matter what is not hidden .. though they are poor with words ... Sumo's pov & her thoughts was great .. whatever she was feeling but down there she had hope .. & now even Shravan realised that he can't make their marriage suffer coz of world .. Their bickering was👏they being like old shraman , fighting with haq ..

last scene was awesome .. holding hands😊I just wish to see a drunk sumo blabbering like a clown , irritating shravan , confessing her mistakes , making him realise his mistakes, troubling shravan non - stop .. waiting for update ..

I really wanted Sumo to kick him 😆
They are poor with words because their love is greater ❤️
Sumo is going to trouble him a LOT but this is also a very emotional scene I'll try to though and I hope I am able to convey what I want to #Fingerscrossed

Thank you 😛

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

heyyou slay me, you really do👏

when heavowed her as "MY WIFE" finally he did😃

finally he hold all chords of their relationship for good👍🏼

he was adamant to win this case of his life

now nothing will go wrong everything will be fine

Brilliant Update👏

Biwi ko biwi nahi bulayega to kise bulaya ga ? 😆
Well let's see anything can happen 😆

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww it is sooo emotional painful but sooo beautiful as well dear...thank u so much for such fb updates!

Love,

Spandana

Thank you Spandana 😳

Beautiful Update and Beautiful title as well.. Baby steps.. wow..

You should get the award of the best commenter ❤️

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

You should get the award of the best commenter ❤️
I mean it 😆
Don't worry they know that I am a suljhi huwi bacchi 😆
Thank you so much Tabby reading your comment since yesterday and still smiling 😃

Originally posted by: evaviego

Beautiful Update and Beautiful title as well.. Baby steps.. wow..

Very nicely penned..

The convo..❤️

Wow.. they are going to make it work.. Glad that she agreed... Now that is interesting...

"Ek aur baat, aaj ke baad tumhe rona ho, tod fod karni ho ya ghussa karna ho tum jo bhi karna chati ho, you'll do it in our room aur agar mene dekha ke tum adhi raat kamre se bahar nikli, then the consequences will be bad. Ye jo bhi hai, jaisa bhi hai, humara rishta hai and I don't want to make it a public display to the vultures out there."

"The same applies to you Mr. Malhotra. Waise to mujhe koi khaas parwa nahi lekin agli baar tumne gharwalon ke samne ya kisi nokar ke samne sharab pee, then mind it Shravan, you'll think twice before touching a bottle in your life."

Oh yeah.. I loved it..❤️

Waiting for the next part.

And thank you for dedicating this to me... Means a lot🤗

I like these lines while writing them I was thinking about ShraMan how they always care for each other par aiwi drame karne ki adaat hai 😆

Thank you Eva 😃

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

You should get the award of the best commenter ❤️

<font color="#6600ff">That's really nice of u to say that...☺️</font>

You just made my day I have a big grin on my face and my family must think that bacchi pagal hogayi hai 😆 I loved your reaction to every line

<font color="#6600ff">Watch urself girl,,I hope I don't get u into trouble... #valentines 😉#ScanningEyes😆</font>
And calling this your favorite on Sumo just come here bro 🤗

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By the way what do I call you ? 😛

<font color="#6600ff">Tabby !😳</font>

Thank youuu 😃

I mean it 😆
Don't worry they know that I am a suljhi huwi bacchi 😆

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Mind blowing update dear... 👏
You are too good at writing emotional stuffs... 👏

Sumo in her subconcious was seeking comfort in Shravan's arms... 😳 ❤️
This one week drained out Shravan completely... 😕
Sumo's painful thoughtprocess is written beautifully dear...so loved it!!
He always belonged to his demons, which got the best of him....❤️
It applies to both of them!!

Shravan is right...Sumo is trying to protect herself from this Shravan which she wasnt familarised with...This Shravan is a stranger to her...!!
Cold n emotionless Sumo... 🥺

Both didnt want to accept openly but it was pure love n care towards each other that they were hiding behind their so called deal!!

Finally cordial relationship for now atleast... 😛
You just slayed it in expressing their pain, guilt, agony,anger... 👏
Loved it immensely...❤️
Exited for the next part...cont soon

Thanks for the pm buddy 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Sumo will always find comfort in Shravan ❤️
Thank you so much Nik 🤗
No mention for the pm 😉

How could I not update today ? 😉
Coming soon in the night 😆