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Originally posted by: deltadawn
Wow.. simply wow.. I told you already magician of words. Thanks for not giving up and writing it a 4th time.. or we would have missed a gem.🤗
tumhari writing tumhar enaam jitni hi beautiful hai Saleha😊Now for the track..its a perfect description of what must go through his mind to reach that point.. Shravan's problem has always been that he did more than the other in a relationship..and when they ditched him royally.. like they all did, it should have been a breaking point. specially for a character like him.. which tries to keep all his inner turmoils hidden.. behind glasses, behind distances, behind his anger...Sumo - his best friend also in a way did that many times... so the outburst was all too justified as a result of her being the only "accessible" person for him to vent it out on.. he couldn't go to his mother and say things, that would show weakness...But Sumo.. she is right in front.. she tried to reach out then she herself moved away.. so she was as per him the rightful recipient of his wrath as you described so perfectly..But see... he can't even hate properly.. he has started giving again.. only to be kicked.. which was correct on her part.. but she did lack understanding all of the previous times...
This really really means a lot to me, specially coming for a writer like you. I am smiling like an idiot right now. I love how you all understand Shravan so much, but i also want to write Sumo's feelings, to show her pain I want both of them to stand by each other and when he'll know the truth he is going to break but I assure you she'll be right by his side.
Thank you again 🤗
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