Thank you Kranti :)
So well written!!!!
No words enough for appreciation...I am spellbound...
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Originally posted by: amks2016
Res :)Saleha take a bow man !! Wow what an update❤️need time to take all In ..Eva ye res1 Aur res2 kya hai😲Itni mush kill se toh res Aur unres Samaj mein Ayaa😕
Hi what a wonderful intense chapter
You write so well kiti
Sumo is such tease
She is in perfect sumo mode
Update soon
Waiting for next chapter
Luv
Tii se tinna
Originally posted by: vimikrao
It was amazing, the pain Shravan had in his heart that can't be erased so soon. He is hurt beyond anybody's imagine. Shravan & Nirmala's convo was very emotional, he was so broken when he said all those to her. He was abandoned by his mother when he needed her most. He lost same day two most imp persons of his life how can he lived all those yrs without them..it was very heartbreaking words 'aap wapas ayi bhi toh mujhse meri keemti cheez cheen ne ke liye, meri Sumo' he might have so hurt if he has to say like this. He was almost lost her but because of Aditya's bad behaviour he got his Sumo back.
Shravan & Sumo convo was also very emotional. But now she was there to him, Sumo is peace to him, Sumo is home to him where he find himself safe & sound. Because someone is there who care for him.
Nice update
Vinu
Originally posted by: crazyparrot
Nice update!
Shravan and Nirmala's convo is too emotional😭poor shravan always craved for mothers love but he didn't get it!Now he will be fine because he got his sumo😊update soon!
Awww this was again A MASTERPIECE HUN...so love it...this is so amazing beautiful & the best part of your writings they are filled with FEELINGS EDKV SHRAMAN FEELS...
Thank you so much for such fab updates always...Lots of love hugs,Spandana
Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">What a Beauty! !👏</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am a fan !!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">The way u have written Shravan's plight...! just aced it..!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">This time if I try quoting ur lines,,I will end up quoting the whole chap ! Exceptional</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">they are!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">(Still can't hold myself from mentioning some of them)😳</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Lemon glass n the medicines!🤗</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">He remembers, his hands shaking when he had to tear it, he couldn't get himself to do that...😭</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Poor child..!! Holding on to something which could give him a little comfort! </font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Perhaps because they were smiling and looked content, the only thing that made him believe that his mother had been happy with him, that she loved him...🥺survival mechanism!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Aur meri, meri kya ghalti thi ?" ...her reply to this q ,that was the moment I had fallen in hate with Nimmo! ! Forever kinds! !</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">His phone rang for the second time this morning...so,,the first one was when he got know about restraining papers!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">You don't go without paying the price of hurting Shravan Malhotra's family...😳</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Aapke bete ki ghalti ki wajah se meri biwi raat ko so nahi pati. Darr se uth jati hai.😳</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"I love her. Bachpan se pyaar karta aaya hoon main usse and you dare to say that I don't understand."😳...the present tense!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Am I a mistake to you?" He whispered, his voice breaking as his vision blurred with more tears.🥺can there be anything more painful than this for a child! I wonder!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Morning encounter!😃</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"I did say something, you are not even looking at me." She mumbled under her breath...happens when u can read a person !</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">He had grown up, admiring her willpower. She had become such a strong woman over the last few years, just thinking about it made his heart soared with pride... she is everything he never is/was..!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">
</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">He wanted to know...she missed him..!🤗</font><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">He called her Sumo! Aww..! If only Sumo remembered,,raat ka fasana!😆</font><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Photo in wallet!! Hye!!</font><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Both the photos he picked are the ones which show that his feelings are being reciprocated ! Mummy Malhotra is smiling n Mrs. Malhotra is holding him tight! </font><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Shravan Malhotra is a puzzle!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">The tray in her hands slightly wavered as she approached the courtyard. He was sitting against the table on the floor, his eyes closed, his jaw tense...heart breaking sight!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">That he didn't trust her enough to do so...it hurts!🥺he do!😳</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Do you still miss her ?" And the conversation that happened after that...</font><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">All the loneliness couldnt break her...and therefore he admires her for her will power...Something which was shown in the first part of update!! Two different scenes,,conclusion was in the first part,,n reasons in the second! In awe with ur way of writing!!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"I don't want to be this person anymore. I am tired" His voice croaked as tears rolled down his cheeks. She shed her own set of tears...</font><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Tum kya ho zara humse poocho Mr. Malhotra!😉you are a death of us!</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"You are not. Tum Shravan ho. Mera Chashmich. Sumo ka chashmich. They smiled between tears as she ruffled his hair.🤗</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Chalo." They went to their safe heaven, holding hands...❤️</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Sumo is the key!</font>
Originally posted by: Itssanjh
<font color="#cc3333">I am not going to praise you, I am not going to analyze your update! I am just relishing every word, every sentence you have written! Thank you so much for writing this!</font>
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