Originally posted by: deltadawn
Tumhare charan kaha hain??
Aaj to mujhe chune hi hain maata. You are beyond amazing.Ressing the rest of my praise for now. Will come back.🤗unressKya kahu mai tumhare story ko pehle to and then your updates which become excruciatingly painful take me to the deepest pits of misery and then soar higher towards the sun the next paragraph. mind blowing is the experience of reading this one.If I am asked about forum writing which was my 'moment of impact' then till date it has to be yours.If you are doing this at your age then you need to take this up professionally very soon.Shravan's agony in his own short words to his so called mother I cried twice reading it.Nirmala comes across as cold hearted as Ramnath here, even more since he atleast has his own weird way fo caring for his son. She has moved on literally !! HOW THE HELL CAN A MOTHER MOVE ON !!she doesn't even deserve his anger much less his longing, but the heart can't be controlled so he gazes at the reassurance of a meager smile in a picture... beautifully described Sal👏Then came the soaring of Shraman conversation in the morning. You miss me too... that innocence and new found faith can kill if it changes face ever so slightly. specially for him who hangs by the tiniest of threads to all of it trying to find love in the broken pieces of his life. My heart goes out to him like never before.How life had turned. The one who had broken him to no extent was the one healing himhow many times have I called this piece beautiful.. let me know when you reach your saturation point.😊So finally atleast one end is getting patched up in his life. As she ever so selflessly gets over her own issues with him trying to reach out to the Chashmish in him to help him out. No doubt the wrestler here for her sheer strength of character and grit.Awesome update. simply brilliant once again.#takeabowgirl #takeabow👏
Originally posted by: priety.priti
Completely defeated man rather a child who craved for his mother's love from past 11 years asking what is his mistake?😭
that is perfect which you have portrayed 👏 speechless for the pain you penned down here😭this time too you made me cry dear😭but in last he have one person with whom he feel at home is with him wrapping her arms around him and supporting him that is best happened with him⭐️amazingpriti
Wow... simply amazing...
Let's see Wats in store for us next...Loved it...LavSriya
Lively so well written...wating for the update
Res 😳
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Unres
Take a bow for this girl... 👏
Made me soeechless literally...!!
Shravan... 😭
As he sees his reflection in the photo frame
he realizes how much he has changed and from a distant point of view, not really....So true!!
He is still the same Shravan!!
he hadn't painted a whole world on his own... 😭
The thoughts of Shravan which helped him moving in his life penned down in the most beautiful way possible dear...Touching way too much for me...You had represented true Shravan...That inner Shravan who was afraid, lonely and scared child...!!
Splended job bud... 👏
I wonder How can a mother leave her child ever!!...Like this...Never to look back...!!
"Aur meri, meri kya ghalti thi ?"...This one line had left deep impact !!...Just like it had left on the day Shravan said it in the show...!! 😭
That phone call of Nirmala... 🤢
How can she?!!!...How in the hell could she?!!...How dare she?!!
Nirmala doesnt deserve a son like Shravan...!!
Really Loved the way Shravan let it all out... 👏
Saying all that his heart wanted to say, screamed all along!!
Beautiful one...❤️ ❤️
Specially the way Shravan confessed his childhood love for Sumo... 👏
Brilliently penned down ya...❤️
"You weren't there when it was all chaos and dark, you decide to come when there is facility when you see the light at the end of the tunnel, because you can't deal with the bad side and that's not love. When you love someone, you deal with every side, every aspect of their personality, you accept the whole of them you don't give up at a drop of a hat."...Sooo true n beautiful definition of Love...❤️
This was Shravan's love!!
N yes Shravan didnt need her now...at all!!
Loved the whole morning scenario btw ShraMan...❤️😳
Sumo waking up in his arms...
Their bickering...#ShraManGoals
Loved it ❤️
Finally Sumo realised Shravan's love n his pain n fear... 😊
Ramnath...Now realising how much you have destroyed Shravan!!
Do something...Confess!!
Sooo Loved the ending... ⭐️
Shravan asking her about her mother, Sumo's answer...Shravan's confession about Nirmala...Sumo consoling him...Awesome work dear... 👏
Only Sumo can heal Shravan, ...Only She has the power to mend his broken heart...Only she can console him...Because Shravan himself had given her that haq upon himself..!!
All in all a blasting one dear... 👏
Loved it to the core...You are a one talanted soul bro..!!
You nailed it !!
Thanks for the pm n plz do cont soon 😊
Loads n Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik
Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05
Shravan remembering how his own world shattered eleven years ago, how he lost him self, how everyone who are dear to him betrayed him, poor soul 😭 He is a broken person looking strong from outside but he is that small boy craving for love from inside...
What kind of person is Nirmala 😡 didn't think about his own son but caring about that aditya.. I doubt she is the real Mother of Shravan 😡
What did she mean by galti? Is she thinking what her beloved son did was galti 😡 But then she is blinded by her mother's love that she can't see anything..
How dare she can question ramu kaka's up bringing? It is due to ramu kaka that Shravan is very sanskari 😉
Glad that Shravan give her a fitting reply, she deserved it..
Her explanation of aditya's sin is really pathetic 😡
"Har koi vella nahi hota tumhari tara" 😃 ab aur kya jabab de sakta tha..
The child in him had met a premature end really that's what happened, Shravan's childhood destroyed due to ego of his parents..
Emotional Shravan and sumo convo and the Hug ❤️...
Itne serious situation mai bhi sumo ko mazak sujh raha hai 😉
"there will be heartbreaks, they will fall many times, but they weren't scared anymore. They have each other."yes they will be with each other. .
Love
Shrujani
Originally posted by: Arpi1234
How much Shravan has to bear due to his father, Mother, sumo 😭..
He is a broken soul 😭 trying to show outside world that he is strong but inside him he is same nerdy chasmish Shravan who was abandoned by his own Mother.. Mother who left him for her own career, own future and living happily with aditya and when come back Once again destroyed his life..
Nirmala before a Mother you are a women, how can you forget what your son did is unforgivable but alas she didn't think about it, she only cared about aditya 😡 Not even about suman...
She questioned Ramu kaka's up bringing But before that she should Question herself about her up bringing?.. .
Shravan give her back when she asked about ramu kaka...
On the other handsome ramu kaka is also feeling guilty for what he did to Shravan..
''child in him had met a premature end" actually Shravan's childhood got a premature ending when his mother left him, his friend betrayed him which resulted in Shravan becoming a ruthless person who hates womens..
Beautiful Shravan and sumo convo and Hug is really lovely..
Even in serious situation sumo is cracking jokes..
Last line is really wonderful 👏
Love
Smita
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