ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 14

Shravan remembering how his own world shattered eleven years ago, how he lost him self, how everyone who are dear to him betrayed him, poor soul 😭 He is a broken person looking strong from outside but he is that small boy craving for love from inside...
What kind of person is Nirmala 😡 didn't think about his own son but caring about that aditya.. I doubt she is the real Mother of Shravan 😡
What did she mean by galti? Is she thinking what her beloved son did was galti 😡 But then she is blinded by her mother's love that she can't see anything..
How dare she can question ramu kaka's up bringing? It is due to ramu kaka that Shravan is very sanskari 😉
Glad that Shravan give her a fitting reply, she deserved it..
Her explanation of aditya's sin is really pathetic 😡
"Har koi vella nahi hota tumhari tara" 😃 ab aur kya jabab de sakta tha..
The child in him had met a premature end really that's what happened, Shravan's childhood destroyed due to ego of his parents..
Emotional Shravan and sumo convo and the Hug ❤️...
Itne serious situation mai bhi sumo ko mazak sujh raha hai 😉
"there will be heartbreaks, they will fall many times, but they weren't scared anymore. They have each other."yes they will be with each other. .

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Shrujani

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How much Shravan has to bear due to his father, Mother, sumo 😭..
He is a broken soul 😭 trying to show outside world that he is strong but inside him he is same nerdy chasmish Shravan who was abandoned by his own Mother.. Mother who left him for her own career, own future and living happily with aditya and when come back Once again destroyed his life..
Nirmala before a Mother you are a women, how can you forget what your son did is unforgivable but alas she didn't think about it, she only cared about aditya 😡 Not even about suman...
She questioned Ramu kaka's up bringing But before that she should Question herself about her up bringing?.. .
Shravan give her back when she asked about ramu kaka...
On the other handsome ramu kaka is also feeling guilty for what he did to Shravan..
''child in him had met a premature end" actually Shravan's childhood got a premature ending when his mother left him, his friend betrayed him which resulted in Shravan becoming a ruthless person who hates womens..
Beautiful Shravan and sumo convo and Hug is really lovely..
Even in serious situation sumo is cracking jokes..
Last line is really wonderful 👏

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Smita

Wow.. I am just speechless & emotional...

So well written!!!!

Hi what a wonderful intense chapter
You write so well kiti
Sumo is such tease
She is in perfect sumo mode
Update soon
Waiting for next chapter

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Tii se tinna

It was amazing, the pain Shravan had in his heart that can't be erased so soon. He is hurt beyond anybody's imagine. Shravan & Nirmala's convo was very emotional, he was so broken when he said all those to her. He was abandoned by his mother when he needed her most. He lost same day two most imp persons of his life how can he lived all those yrs without them..it was very heartbreaking words 'aap wapas ayi bhi toh mujhse meri keemti cheez cheen ne ke liye, meri Sumo' he might have so hurt if he has to say like this. He was almost lost her but because of Aditya's bad behaviour he got his Sumo back.

Shravan & Sumo convo was also very emotional. But now she was there to him, Sumo is peace to him, Sumo is home to him where he find himself safe & sound. Because someone is there who care for him.

Nice update

Vinu

Nice update!